

Date: 07/01/2005 - 10:05 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
I absolutely loved it! I'm glad they kissed though things could be really complicated for them. William seems really sweet in this story too, and I'm glad he's there to help Buffy. Anyway, I love this story and I can't wait to read more :-)

Date: 07/01/2005 - 10:03 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
God!!! It was amazing. I loved it. No performance anxiety for you. They are just so damned sweet together. Love them, please keep going.

Date: 07/01/2005 - 09:47 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
I wish I could write "utter drek" like that. The build up to the kiss was incredibly intense. I can't wait to see where you are going with this.

Date: 07/01/2005 - 09:33 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
i loved this chapter also it was soooo great more soon plz its amazing!!!!!!!!!

Date: 07/01/2005 - 09:22 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
i loved this chapter too please keep on writing you are doing such a great job!!

Date: 07/01/2005 - 08:47 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
i loved this chapter. no need for performance anxiety, this story is awesome. cant wait for more

Date: 07/01/2005 - 08:43 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
Drek? NO! Not drek!! Kiss? Mucho caliente! ***fans self and drains half a bottle of water*** Um...GAH! That was..just...yeah! **runs and pounces dirty laundry in excuse to escape for a moment and regain some composure***More, please? :-D

Date: 07/01/2005 - 08:30 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
LOVED this chapter. Can hardly wait for more!

Date: 07/01/2005 - 08:20 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
Nicely chorographed. The dance they did with one another,both thinking and hopeing the same things. Will is so componsionate. He is the being the one stable person in her life. He accepts her as her. She can just let go with him. the dinner scene was great both of their inner dialouges going on and yet the conversation could of gone on forever. wonderfully done. The kiss was so wanted, needed, complete. As if they both knew, that it was right. Besides she won't be 17 forever. Either way, I am really enjoying how you are taking this one step at a time. Formulating a relationship. Though I figure the bumps in the road to be rotten in a few chapters.

Date: 07/01/2005 - 08:04 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
This chapter was very good. The ebb and flow of emotions, action and dialogue came together seamlessly. You're making their feelings for one another believable and they're both sympathetically written. Having Buffy tell Will he had to go was the perfect call. The action put her in control and let him off the hook for needing to leave. Nice job with this chapter.

Date: 07/01/2005 - 07:51 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
of course I loved tht chapter.....who wouldn't its got spike kisses in it...awesome update..can't wait for the next update

Date: 07/01/2005 - 07:48 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
I liked this chapter too. It truly was about courtship, just finding out personal items about each other. It was sweet.

Date: 07/01/2005 - 07:30 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
Omg!! I loved this chapter. Spuffy loving at last. Lol!! It rocked!! Continue please!!

Date: 07/01/2005 - 07:04 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
yes it was very good, more

Date: 07/01/2005 - 06:50 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
Absolutely loved the chapter!!! Can't wait for more!!!!!!

Date: 07/01/2005 - 06:44 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
Awesome awesome chapter!!!! Can't wait for more

Date: 07/01/2005 - 06:32 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
Not utter drek at all! Whatcha talking about, girl? You rock with this story and, hey, smoochies! Always a plus! I agree with the rest of the ladies, I want one like him or Spike in Origins (hint hint) Conjure one for me, purty please?

Date: 07/01/2005 - 06:20 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
Finally. Smootchies! I think this chapter was the bees knees. Just perfect. ::sigh:: I want my very own Will. Could you conjure one up for me? Pretty Please?

Date: 07/01/2005 - 06:07 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
This chapter was way awesome...can I have him??

Date: 07/01/2005 - 05:53 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
Aww!! How sweet! Lovin' it, update soon!

Date: 07/01/2005 - 05:38 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
very nice!! not utter drek. Keep up the good work.

Date: 07/01/2005 - 05:37 pm Title: Talk to me while I'm listening
i loved it and i am glad that they finally shared their first kiss....you did a wonderful job please keep up the good work

Date: 06/28/2005 - 08:17 pm Title: Conversations kill
MORE PLZ I LOVE IT ITS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Date: 06/27/2005 - 05:14 pm Title: Conversations kill
Hmm, well, I liked this chapter. Maybe there is one thing though... there is a lot of thinking going on (hold on, lemme finish, lol). Like, maybe there should be more interaction between Buffy and Will.. everytime they are in the same room, it's very brief or it's just thought about later (ex: Buffy thinking about how he'd held her for awhile then kissed her head and left), maybe have them actually there together. I dunno, I'm rambling I think. Then again, it just might be one of those things where the author is never quite satisfied with their work. *shrugs* My ramblings have progressed to babbling. I'm done now. =)

Date: 06/27/2005 - 04:38 pm Title: Conversations kill
I don't know what you wanted the chapter to be, sorry. I loved reading it though. Wishiing Xander luck for his Cordelia. And glad that there's someone who cares for Buffy - even if she thinks she's alone with her baby - nobody loves herl I'm sure her mother must love her too - but she's not there. :))