Date: 05/11/2005 - 02:06 pm Title: 37
Poor choice of a dad... this Brian. I'm sure he want come to Buffy and be a part of his child's life. It will only be Spike's :-D
Date: 05/11/2005 - 12:13 pm Title: 37
Wow, Brian, what a charmer! Buffy's reaction to Spike was in character and I'm looking forward to their next conversation. I don't think she's going to be too happy with the punch and subsequent humiliationt even though he was defending her honor.
Author's Response: She may surprise you :)
Date: 05/11/2005 - 07:34 am Title: 37
whoa - the action, the action! That was a great one!
Date: 05/11/2005 - 05:46 am Title: 37
yeah!!!!!!! go spike! woo hoo! loved it!
Date: 05/11/2005 - 01:41 am Title: 37
once more with feeling, heehee. what an intense chapter...buffy/spike then spike/brian. wonder what else you have in your bag of tricks. =)
Date: 05/11/2005 - 01:14 am Title: 37
Way to go Spike with the scaring of weenie little girly men. Too bad their isn't a program to sterilize assholes. I hope Buffy and Spike are able to get over this little bump in their relationship, and its gotta be a plus that he doesn't want to be involved with the baby. Another fabulous chapter. Please, update soon!
Date: 05/11/2005 - 01:01 am Title: 37
Boy, I sure see both sides to this story. I hope that confrontation proved to Buffy that that butthead has NO RIGHTS WHATSOEVER. Great update. Hope they go home and make love and no more fighting over Brian's "rights" - he's just a waste of skin! More please!
Date: 05/11/2005 - 12:54 am Title: 37
Excellent chapter. I know Spike will see her point after he calms down. She has to be glad that he was standing there when that jerk said what he did, right? Not sure if I'm glad she was shaking when she asked to go home.On pins and needles now. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Date: 05/11/2005 - 12:01 am Title: 37
great update and i am glad that they didnt let the argument affect their relationship
Date: 05/10/2005 - 11:51 pm Title: 37
All I have to say is "oy."
Date: 05/10/2005 - 11:43 pm Title: 37
Good job Spike!! But something tells me you're in big trouble now.
Date: 05/10/2005 - 11:32 pm Title: 37
Hot damn...I love it when Spike goes neanderthal...all possessive and grrr....yummy!!! And I love how he punched Brian after that comment...what a jerk!!! If I were Buffy, I'd jump up and down happy that someone loves me that much...but I doubt that'll happen...she seemed pretty scared of Spike's display...hope it doesn't ruin their relationship....can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
Date: 05/10/2005 - 10:49 pm Title: 37
good job spike! i love the story please update soon thanx.
Date: 05/10/2005 - 10:38 pm Title: 37
loved it. i hope that buffy isn't too mad about what spike did. she probably wil have something to say about it. keep up the great work. i loved this chapter.
Date: 05/10/2005 - 10:21 pm Title: 37
Man, do NOT tell me Buffy is going to chew him out for doing exactly what he shuld have done!
Date: 05/10/2005 - 10:09 pm Title: 37
update soon i luv this story too much plz luvs tins
Date: 05/10/2005 - 09:59 pm Title: 37
wow...i mean...just wow...buffy should have let him pummel him..like he deserved...i've never wanted to be buffy more than in this chapter, so i have spike of coures...awesome job!! thanx so much!! it was terrific!! glad someone put brian in his place!!
Date: 05/10/2005 - 09:50 pm Title: 37
LoL...That was so cool! I mean it was wrong. Spike should have controlled himself better. Buffy is probably gonna give him shit later. I bet he made Brian piss his pants though...lol! I'm guessing anyway. I just hate guys like that. This was a great chapter and as always, I can't wait to see what happens next=)
Date: 05/10/2005 - 09:46 pm Title: 37
I was waiting all day for that. I liked the whole Spike beating the crap out of the guy cuz I wanted to too but I was hoping there'd be a little more there than just a chapter. Oh well, great story keep it up.
Date: 05/10/2005 - 09:23 pm Title: 37
OMG! Brian's such an ASS! I can't believe that he's got babies all over the place! What a PRICK . . . sorry, just a little vehement about this! I'm really glad that Spike was there to kick his ass, and rescue her (not that she totally needed rescuing or anything . . ) Anyways, can't wait for more of this incredible fic, so please post the next chapter soon! Take care, C ; )
Date: 05/10/2005 - 09:21 pm Title: 37
I liked it alot, i like how they fight, but don't jsut flounce of all wounded and self pitying, they actually attmept to apply some rationality to things, it's so very shiny and new. I always enjoy protective Spike, it's super sexy and yayful. I'm wondering where you're going to take it from here, will Buffy be all mad? The suspense! Anyhoo, looking forward to more, excellent job as usual, take care
Date: 05/10/2005 - 09:17 pm Title: 37
Yes! Go Spike! Brian so needed that! I'm also glad that Buffy made the points she in the conversation with Spike. Very very good chapter! Looking forward to more!
Date: 05/10/2005 - 09:17 pm Title: 37
I like the line " She was shaking in her little sandals." Thought that was cute for some reason.
Date: 05/10/2005 - 08:58 pm Title: 37
Uhoh. That temper is gonna get him in trouble, isn't it? I hope she lets it go. . . but knowing her. . . . I hope they work it out.
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