Date: 05/03/2005 - 02:09 am Title: 32
Ch. 31=You go, Fred!! I totally support the ass-kickage of Harmony...I'm right behind ya sweetie!! Buffy's speech was spot on perfect...loved that she's seeing the light about Spike too! Ch.31=Freaking A!! Great chapter!!! Harmony's shrieks totally remind me of those dog whistles...great analogy!! Oh mama, and Spike's icy voice...yum!! I love it when he goes all dangerous...great!!! Can't wait for more!!!
Date: 05/03/2005 - 02:06 am Title: 32
It is incredibly wrong and mean of you to leave this hanging like this! :) Well done so far- I'm reallyq uite eager to see how they handle the 'fake' engagement portion of it :) Kerry
Date: 05/03/2005 - 01:59 am Title: 32
I LOVED IT! *And then door burst open, hitting the wall with such force that it shut on the person who had flung it open.* LMAO! I love the comedy of it...and then Spike's chilling threat. Don't know about Buffy, but DAMN! That manly protective thing just makes me want to jump his bones. Hoping that Buffy gets to do a little of that in the next chapter?!
Date: 05/02/2005 - 11:39 pm Title: 32
can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 05/02/2005 - 11:38 pm Title: 31
way to hit them with the mirror!
Date: 05/02/2005 - 11:35 pm Title: 30
sorry had two late nights love the fred jonathan thing!
Date: 05/02/2005 - 11:33 pm Title: 32
I would tend to thing that it wouldn't be a peaceful event... leaving the bride-to-be for another women on the morning of the wedding... not a calming situation. Though breaking up the wedding in the church would have been even less calming. and then, there would have been an audience. So much for the road not taken. A bit curious about the aftermath. Cause really, we all know Joyce is only upset because Harmony has nowhere to go :) Simply fabulous chaos, update soon!
Date: 05/02/2005 - 11:00 pm Title: 32
that was great...great scene, you did an awesome job...thanx
Date: 05/02/2005 - 10:12 pm Title: 32
Oh my gosh - what a great chapter! I think that the chaos was very realistic, cause how else could someting like this happen! I'm sorry that Joyce blamed Buffy though... Anyways, I can't wait for more, so please update soon!
Date: 05/02/2005 - 10:09 pm Title: 32
That was awesome, I so fell out of my chair from the excitement. Okay, not really. But it was still totally awesome. Are you sure Harmony knows what fornicate means? I mean it can be a big word...lol! I'm just saying. Yeah, thinking you can tell how much I really don't like her. I'm glad Jonathan finally stood up to her and got with Fred. Screw the height difference. That man will be shorter than any woman...lol! Buffy is taller than him for crying out loud. Okay, no more drinking for me. Love it=)
Date: 05/02/2005 - 10:08 pm Title: 32
You handled that break up greatly I loved it!
Date: 05/02/2005 - 09:59 pm Title: 32
I loved that Jonathon stood up for himself and that Buffy told Harm off. It was chaotic but so is ruining a wedding on the day its supposed to happen, so kudos, the chap was perfect. I also loved the Buffy Spike banter at the end, so cute :)!
Date: 05/02/2005 - 09:45 pm Title: 32
I actually thought that Harmony would of wailed a bit more and maybe in a fit of pique torn the flowers out of all the bridesmaids hair or smacked someone upside the head with her bouquet (If she couldn't get to Buffy - anyone would of done just as well) so your chaos was actually very nice. I really did love the chapter and I'm so happy for that very successful break up. So what else can Spike and Buffy get into before returning to their own lives? More please.
Date: 05/02/2005 - 09:24 pm Title: 32
Does happy dance in my chair... they was sooo sooo sooo great! i luv how fred was sooo well not really fred like but upfront and stuff. and hte end of this chapter was soooo funny! i luv it all plz update soon!
Date: 05/02/2005 - 09:23 pm Title: 32
Yay!! Saving the day!! I love the end part there!! The rubbing off and such!! SOOOO funny!! I love it!!
Date: 05/02/2005 - 08:50 pm Title: 32
I think that chaos was the way to go - breaking up a wedding shouldn't be calm, should it?
Author's Response: I didn't think so. I mean, it's not like Harmony would have actually handled it well or that anyone would be thrilled to know the wedding was off. I opted to not go for huge speeches and freak outs.
Date: 05/02/2005 - 08:47 pm Title: 32
It seemed failry realistic, in my experience those situations become increasingly chaotic, everything seems to explode all at once. Super, take care
Date: 05/02/2005 - 08:36 pm Title: 32
absolutely loved it
Date: 05/02/2005 - 06:13 pm Title: 31
i'm so shocked right now...have no words...plop... great chapter...best ever i think...awesome job...thanx
Date: 05/02/2005 - 01:45 pm Title: 31
Awww! Buffy's speech was so sweet. And I guess I am the lone minority that actually feels bad for Harmony, just because there's so much work put into weddings (not because I like her or anything). lol
Date: 05/02/2005 - 12:29 pm Title: 31
Life is uncertain. Eat desert first :-) I never thought it – but Buffy is right: Fred and Jonathan – they are best friends just like Buffy and Spike. Awe, and Fred is ready to stand up for Jonathan – against Harmony! Yay – good chapter *smile*
Date: 05/02/2005 - 12:29 pm Title: 31
Life is uncertain. Eat desert first :-) I never thought it – but Buffy is right: Fred and Jonathan – they are best friends just like Buffy and Spike. Awe, and Fred is ready to stand up for Jonathan – against Harmony! Yay – good chapter *smile*
Date: 05/02/2005 - 11:50 am Title: 31
man, if there was an award for 'Best Speech' i would be nominating you right about now. well done *applauds* --xXx--
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