I hate when I near the end of the chapter cause I am already dying to read more. I'm hopegul good things happen when they get back. One... good... night..........................

Loved it.

Author's Response: Lol, I don't know about that, but I'm going to try and work in some smut next chapter...somewhere....lol. Thanks for the review!

The story as a whole is really interesting and credible, while having enough of a danger element to keep someone, such as myself, who usually refuses to read "human" stories entertained. Good writing, good grammer with very few mistakes. I enjoyed the new chapter. Keep em coming!

Author's Response: What made you start to read? Whatever the reason, I'm glad you liked it :) Thanks for the review!

This is the first human fic I've really gotten into, it's very disturbing--I just read it in one sitting and I don't usually read WIPs but now I'm hooked! Don't screw up your finals of course, throw some of this energy over there and when you've kicked their ass, come back over here and kick Spike's a little more :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it, even though it's disturbing ;)

I have never been so completely blown away by a writer as I am with this story this is the best bit of fiction I've come across in a long time. You should get awards for this it's just that good.
I'm in a jumble to see what will happen when they get back and out of the car I almost want to beg for him to take care of her but that's not fair to ask of any author .
A freind sent me a link to this fic and I'm addicted now
I'll keep looking for more

I give this story a 10 out of 10 Cause it has everything.

Author's Response: What a nice friend :) And thank you for the wonderful comments - they really made my day!

Nice update .... an evening out, a little excitement, a bit of insight into how Spike's emotions are pulling him closer and closer to realizing what Buffy means to him. Love the bit with Angelus coming to the rescue (and love how you got Rack in there too!). This gang thing works so well and you write it so perfectly.
And Parker's dead? -- too bad, so sad (not!).
Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Lol, I'm glad you like all the characters - there are a few more to come! Thanks for the review!

First, I hope finals went well for you. Second, I’ve been checking at least every other day for your next posting and was so excited when you did. I swear to the PTB, if you don’t get some kind of award after you’ve finished this story, I am sooooo gonna go medieval on someone’s buttocks!!!
I agree w/ those whose reviews mention the subtle touches here and there between B/S (you did that on purpose haven’t you, ‘minx’?). You can see that Spike, through subtle gestures, has moved from what started as pure lust to the beginnings of a genuine ‘caring’ (don’t think it’s love just yet) for Buffy. This point is further reinforced during the part where Spike finds Angel w/ Buffy and it being an‘image of a book outta the past’.
Buffy’s little quips (in the car – ‘spend more time w/ you’ and the club – ‘I know how much you like watching me' (LOVED it, lol) are starting to make her Spike’s ‘match’ if only in the verbal arena. Would love to see her at some point actually kicks Spike’s physical a*#. She deserves some satisfaction.
When I look back on the progression of individual change, I see Buffy’s character becoming stronger and stronger, while Spike’s seems to be going almost the opposite. Bad choice of word actually, I only mean that in the sense that Buffy affects him to the point where it seems like Spike has grown gradually more and more obsessive/possessive/protective of her, slowly making him appear weaker and weaker to the gang, (wonder if he’ll grow a real conscience at some point, tee hee).
I think she’ll be his ‘undoing’ in the gangs’ eyes. That he could potentially become sloppy say if he’s the slightest bit distracted by her emotionally, and put them in danger during ‘jobs’. Can’t wait to see Angelus’s dark side exhibit itself at what he cooks up, now that he sees how much Buffy means to Spike. Also can’t wait to see how Spike will deal w/ Buffy after he gets her home.
Oh, Parker died from bleeding to dead, I meant to ask, is it strictly as a result of Buffy’s assault, or is there something/one else responsible? I mean she ‘wasn’t surprised’ so that makes me think someone else delivered the final blow. Cuz otherwise I would assume if she felt responsible, there would have been major guilt/grief on her part.
Keep up the great work, hopefully won’t be too long till chapter 15???


Author's Response: Oh, don't worry - getting such encouraging reviews feel like an award already! I'm glad you like the little touches ;) and the snarky lines! I agree about the comments about Spike - he is supposed to be getting "weaker" but I'm trying to progress it slowly since I don't want him puppy-whipped the ENTIRE fic, lol. I'll work in an explanation or flashback for Parker. Thanks for the review!

WOW! still loving this story and I'm so gald I found the time to catch up with the last few chapters, so much has happened! Spike seems determined to drag Buffy down to his level, with the whole 'kill Parker' thing...yet, thankfully she's resisted so far...(YAY Buffy!!!!) but how much more can the poor girl take? everything is still so violent...Spike seems to be softening at the speed of a sloth, and it doesn't look as if he'll get the chance to turn things around in the relationship before Angelus makes a move...OH BOY!!! coz clearly he's brewing something nasty....More sex, violence and double dealing...soon, please...Oh, nearly forgot...I loved the flashback stuff, they added real interest to these great chapters...and again...more soon please ;-)

Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad you liked the flashback stuff - seems that was an acquired taste, lol. Good comments on all the other stuff too - thanks!

Ahhh!

I so want to see what happens now when they get back to home. Buffy is all sick and Spike is ticked. What happens next!!!!!!

Great update look forwatd to more :P


Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Oh la la....and the tension mounts........poor Buffy so unaware of the politics and how she is playing right in to Angelus hands.......and Faith for being a twit in not realizing that Buffy was acting out of ordinary and high....but then why should she care...except she didn't do her job and I wonder if Spike will punish her for it. Hmmmm. So want more more more

Author's Response: Yea, Faith doesn't really care about anything, and Buffy is very unaware, but it'll be fun when she starts to become perfectly aware of where she stands ;) Thanks for the review!

I loved the new added chapter for me the best part was in the car drive over before getting out he lightly touched her shoulder and she didn't flinch from his touch. I know it's a tiny thing but I love the smallest of things in good story telling.
Hope if you can you'll add more.

Author's Response: Yes! Someone noticed it :D Thanks for the review!

ooh this story is getting better abd better. please keep on updating!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

I sure hope you will continue this wonderful epic story. You bring the characters to life. I love it.

Author's Response: Glad you like them - I worry about the characters sometimes, lol. Thanks for the review!