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Reviewer: good story Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2005 - 01:35 pm Title: Third, Draw Some Boundaries

Okay, while I like your story, I can tell you that the socal services scenes are a bit over the top. 1. He could not just barge into a home as he did. This was his first visit of a new case, he should have pulled out ID. Instead he used his height and weight to force himself in the door. 2. He showed no respect. Buffy and Spike need to show a backbone with him. He can't just storm the place and search. Plus he must make an appointment with them each time he visits.. 3, He can't search dawn's room just because he sees condoms (Buffy's bright idea bits her on the ass) 4. Social services could not and would not put cameras in a persons home. Especially without a judges premission, Buffy is not thinking properly, man she needs to move her and Spike into her mother's room. She is an adult and still sleeping on her 16 year ol room with twin bed. No social worker would by a relationship. Hello her mother room has a bigger closet.

Author's Response: Hee...I do understand your critique. *nods* It is legitimate. Don't worry...your concerns are addressed in a later part of the fic. I already have up to chapter 14 written. Just trust me on this... ;o)

Reviewer: Ariel Dawn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2005 - 01:07 pm Title: Fifth, Uncover the Truth

I'm loving this fic! Such a great take on the idea! Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: carri Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2005 - 12:38 pm Title: Fifth, Uncover the Truth

very good chapter!!! I hope denial-Buffy will open up more and more to Spike ..

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2005 - 07:06 am Title: Fifth, Uncover the Truth

It almost seemed as if Spike did get through Buffy - just for a moment. Looking forward to read more - how will Buffy react etc. :)

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2005 - 06:56 am Title: Fourth, Smile for the Cameras

Hehe.. Spike never knows when it's best to say nothing at all :) Loved it.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2005 - 06:38 am Title: Third, Draw Some Boundaries

Now I know why Dawn was so afraid... she had reason to be. But it could have gone worse with the social worker, a lot worse. Buffy could have lost Dawn. But the cameras will make it interesting. Is it possible to do something like that btw? For social service, I mean.

Author's Response: Just give the fic a little time...your concerns will be addressed. *nods* (No, it's not possible for social services to do something like this...)

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2005 - 06:17 am Title: Second, Stock the Shelves

I really love how the three (B, S & D) act together. What may have Dawn done that she fears the social worker visiting her room?

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2005 - 05:46 am Title: First, Make a Plan

I saw this one at VK, but I didn't read yet - will do here. It's a very good start, love to read more and will do now.

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2005 - 01:12 am Title: Fifth, Uncover the Truth

good update

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2005 - 12:41 am Title: Fourth, Smile for the Cameras

love it and waiting for more!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2005 - 11:04 pm Title: Fourth, Smile for the Cameras

definitely loving it so far

Reviewer: Tam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2005 - 10:21 pm Title: Fourth, Smile for the Cameras

What a wonderful fic! :D I usually don't care for POV stories but I really like this one!

Reviewer: bloodshedbaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2005 - 10:20 pm Title: Fourth, Smile for the Cameras

awww! I just read this story and it's soo sweet! Well, there's the angst and all that but it's so awesome! I love helpful Spike and this Buffy is a nicer-less bitchy Buffy. I like that!!!

Reviewer: Sawa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2005 - 07:07 pm Title: Second, Stock the Shelves

Update! Update! this fic is really good!!!!!!!!!!! I think it's a wicked idea to have Spike have to stay because of the social worker. It's also hillarious!:)

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2005 - 04:22 pm Title: Second, Stock the Shelves

great updates so far

Reviewer: Enchantress Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2005 - 05:40 pm Title: First, Make a Plan

that doesn't sound so great.. terrific story, tho. I'm really loving this :-)

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2005 - 08:15 am Title: Second, Stock the Shelves

Now hat is in her room that made her go white?

Reviewer: tina Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2005 - 07:39 am Title: Second, Stock the Shelves

uh-oh, wot's wrong.. really liking this btw

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2005 - 02:08 am Title: First, Make a Plan

Please continue with the story. It is off to a good start. Looking forward to reading the next chaplters.

Author's Response: I definitely will! Thanks for the feedback, dear! :o)

Reviewer: Enchantress Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2005 - 01:57 am Title: First, Make a Plan

I love this so far :-) Will be waiting eagerly for more.

Author's Response: Thanks, hun! :o) Glad you enjoyed it so far...

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