Date: 04/26/2005 - 04:28 pm Title: Spike, The Schizophrenic
wonder why spike is so bi-polar...lol...i think it has to do with something faith said...i really liked this chapter cos it's the first glimpse we have that something bigger is happening, like the actual feelings towards eachother, spike acting like a total asshole and buffy really caring what spike thought..cos if she didn't she wouldn't have returned...he likes him..even in his worst moments...lol love the banters...really loved this chapter...thanx so much!!! you did a terrific job...can't wait for more...cos this was a cliffhanger from hell ;)
Date: 04/26/2005 - 04:05 pm Title: Spike, The Schizophrenic
Oh my - they really know how to hurt each other! Wonder what Buffy's story is: what she seems to be in school and what Spike saw at Buffy's home is so different.
Date: 04/26/2005 - 04:04 pm Title: Spike, The Schizophrenic
Please keep it up. I luv it.
Date: 04/26/2005 - 03:48 pm Title: Spike, The Schizophrenic
Oh man, I can see it now. Heated fight then great make-up sex! Keep it coming! I live for this stuff LOL! Kuddos
Date: 04/26/2005 - 03:45 pm Title: Spike, The Schizophrenic
You're doing a great job making the characters sympathetic while keeping the tension between them. Spike's reaction to Buffy's home and Joyce's illness was inwardly warm, but Buffy's distrust keeps him from opening up. I liked Oz' calm "If you do anything to hurt her again, you know I'm going to step in, right?" It was very matter of fact Oz.
Date: 04/26/2005 - 03:42 pm Title: Spike, The Schizophrenic
okay... wow... that was harsh... but, still loved the chapter, but i hope there will be serious consequences for what he did... but, still, loved it.. thanks...
Date: 04/26/2005 - 03:31 pm Title: Spike, The Schizophrenic
Wow, what Spike said was really mean. Almost too mean. Almost out of character mean.
Date: 04/26/2005 - 03:26 pm Title: Spike, The Schizophrenic
Ewww.... they're so mean to each other. I can't wait to see what it takes to be nice to each other.
Date: 04/26/2005 - 03:18 pm Title: Spike, The Schizophrenic
wo, poor buffy, spike realy has to make it up to her big time, im very curious what buffy will say to him in the backyard! its a great story!
Date: 04/26/2005 - 02:30 pm Title: Spike, The Schizophrenic
He's and 'a**hole!' lada lada la.... Okay, I hope Spike gets una**holey real fast. Or Oz will have to bit**slap some sense into him. I love this story though... Luv, spuf
Date: 04/26/2005 - 04:48 am Title: Payback's a Bitch
Oh yeah, The stuff is fixing to hit the fan! When these two finally get it on, I think we all will need a cigarette LOL! Kuddos
Date: 04/25/2005 - 10:11 pm Title: Payback's a Bitch
wow great update!!!!
Date: 04/25/2005 - 08:09 pm Title: Payback's a Bitch
Aww!! What a cute chapter! Can't wait for more, so please update soon!
Date: 04/25/2005 - 07:59 pm Title: Payback's a Bitch
great update loved it
Date: 04/25/2005 - 07:41 pm Title: Payback's a Bitch
Ooops!! Jeez! I almost feel bad for Spike!! She's really running him ragged! But I guess it will get better all in due time right? Good chapter, update soon!
Date: 04/25/2005 - 04:45 pm Title: Payback's a Bitch
Loved this: “You’re mine,”
And Spike was very careless that he didn't check the things Buffy bought for him. :-))
Date: 04/25/2005 - 04:02 pm Title: Payback's a Bitch
Fantastic! The angst and tension rose to a height in this chapter. The question is, will it go even higher or is it time for them to be a little nice? Where's that car wash?? lol. More please :)
Date: 04/25/2005 - 03:42 pm Title: Payback's a Bitch
The banter is entertaining, and I love that they're still at each other's throats. I liked the line, "It looks like Studio 54 threw up in here." Funny, concise image of the clothes.
Date: 04/25/2005 - 03:12 pm Title: Payback's a Bitch
As much as I want Buffy to make Spike suffer more, well, I do love Spuffy! Anyway, I wanted to thank you both for having Buffy defend Willow to Spike. I just know he was going to insult the poor thing and to have Buffy tell him to knock it off was wonderful. Let's just hope that Spike realizes what a truly lucky person Buffy is to have a 'real' friend like Willow, instead of one his so called, phoney friends. Wonderful story, I look for it everyday! Luv, Spuf
Date: 04/25/2005 - 02:15 pm Title: Payback's a Bitch
Oh, man, I'm getting worried - it seems their walls are just getting higher and higher. I wonder when and how you'll start to chip away at that separation, humble certain people, make them smile at each other? I'm hopeful and totally confident in your writing abilities! Can't wait.
Date: 04/25/2005 - 01:52 pm Title: Payback's a Bitch
aww how cute i love this chapter it was so fuuny. i cant believe she did that and that he believed she didnt do ne thing to the clothes, he shoud have suspected it. ne ways i love this story and cant wait to to read more. please update as soon as u can i cant wait to read the next chapter thanx
Date: 04/25/2005 - 01:22 pm Title: Payback's a Bitch
LOL they are just digging themselves deeper and deeper.....to be honest I can't believe he hasn't killed her yet......I know I would've.......I would be driving her home and making her give me the money for the clothes....but then he was silly not to inspect what she bought before leaving the mall.....silly man.
Date: 04/25/2005 - 12:08 pm Title: Adding Insult to Injury
love this update... great work, guys... thanks for the spuffy fix... i've been needin it all week..
Date: 04/25/2005 - 05:52 am Title: Adding Insult to Injury
cant wait for more!
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