Date: 05/05/2005 - 11:55 am Title: Chapter 12
i just started reading and i LOVE it SO MUCH!!!! its awesome
Date: 05/05/2005 - 11:33 am Title: Chapter 12
Okay, Spike is being a little unreasonable. I can understand where he's coming from, but Buffy has a point. Thomas is Scotts son, and he does have a right to know. Especially if say Thomas got sick or needed blood and Scott had the information that Buffy might need to help her son. WhatScott did was completely wrong and I can agree with Spike on that to a point, but still. He shouldn't be so quick to judge and make demands. Biologically speaking, Scott is Thomas father and spike needs to accept that.
And you can tell them I said that lol. You're doing great, love it! :)
Author's Response: Yeah, I agree. He is being a little unreasonable. Scott is Tommy's father and he's just gonna have to deal, no matter what happened in the past. I needed some angst and I really couldn't think of anything else to do...lol! He'll come around though. I'm a sucker for the happiness. I'm glad you like it because you know I'm such a huge fan of yours=)
Date: 05/04/2005 - 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 11
Hey about my last review, sorry about the Xander mix up lol, i heard best friend and my mind went automatically to the show, sorry again. I'm glad i made you feel a little better. Now about the chapter. I love that Lorne is her uncle, im so happy to see him in this fic. hes incredible. Spike and babies, just the image makes me happy (well theyre our babies in the image but thats not the point lol). I'm so happy their in love now and that he excepts the things in her life so willingly (baby and highschool). I cant wait for the next update, i am in love with this fic.
Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate that. I can understand how you would immediately go to the show. I do that all the time, so it's cool. Lorne was one of my favorite characters and I thought it would be cute if he was her uncle. I wish my uncle could be that cool. I'm glad you're still liking it=)
Date: 05/04/2005 - 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 11
LOVE it, Im glad they didnt take long to get together
Date: 05/04/2005 - 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 11
Such a sweet chapter!!! I adored it great job
Date: 05/04/2005 - 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 11
Aww, that's so sweet the way Spike is with Thomas and how he wants to be the father! Love the story - very sweet and I can't wait to read more :)
Date: 05/04/2005 - 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 11
So sweet! I love this story. So tender and loving. And Spike with Thomas...swoon! :) Love it.
Date: 05/04/2005 - 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 11
So sweet! I love this story. So tender and loving. And Spike with Thomas...swoon! :) Love it.
Date: 05/03/2005 - 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 10
first off im sorry your not feeling well. Secondly for someone whos not feeling well you still managed to put up an incredible chapter. I feel so bad for Bufffy, was it Xander who did it? (the whole best friend thing has me wondering). I also feel for Spike, i dont understand people who can have abortions and not tell their "mate". Its so cruel. No matter what you decide to do with your unborn child (because it is everyones right to do what they think is best) it doesnt belong to just you, it takes two people to make it. I'm so glad she thinks he can make her happy and that he wants to. I love the songs youve chosen to use in this fic. Please update soon, i loved it.
Author's Response: Thanks, you did manage to make me feel a little better. I would never have Xander rape Buffy though. I love Xander and I could never see that happening. I'm also not sure how that would happen. Buffy didn't even meet Xander until he showed up at her school and they never went to school together or anything. Him being older than her and all. I guess with the best friend thing it's easy to get that confused. Yeah, that was cruel what Dru did. That honestly just came to me when I was typing, didn't even have that planned. Okay, think that's long enough. I'm really glad you like it=)
Date: 05/03/2005 - 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 10
This is such a pretty Website. LOL. Love the story man. Awesome. Keep me posted on the next Chap. I'll save the site on my fave.
Date: 05/03/2005 - 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 10
incredible update i loved it cant wait for another one
Date: 05/03/2005 - 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 10
So glad she told him everything..poor Buffy!!! I'm glad that he was so good about it. Both of them have baggage, but they're working on it together and hopefullly will be able to help each other heal. I commend Buffy for keeping her child in spite of what happened :) Good job!
Date: 05/03/2005 - 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 10
awwww. so sweet, and a shock revelation from Buffy. I really liked it. i hope you update soon!
Date: 05/02/2005 - 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 9
Wow, this fic has def. sucked me in. I love the song choices, very suited for this story. Of course he wrote it about someone...her right?lol, cant wait for more!
Date: 05/02/2005 - 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 9
great update and i am glad that they kissed
Date: 05/02/2005 - 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 9
Like it...nice lyrics.. especially with it being GOTR. Waiting for the next chapter.
Date: 05/02/2005 - 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 9
Incredibly evil for leaving it there! Want more. Love how he deterred Oz from setting her up lol.
Date: 04/30/2005 - 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 8
great updates still loving it
Date: 04/30/2005 - 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 8
Awww how wrong is she!
Date: 04/29/2005 - 01:24 am Title: Chapter 7
this was another great chapter. i love the songs that you have been using to (except avril sorry) please bring more on soon
Date: 04/28/2005 - 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 7
I'm loving the plot and the characterizations. You need to work on your dialogue, the structuring is confusing sometimes. Generally the rest of the paragraph should agree with who is speaking. I'm not phrasing it very well but for example: "..." Buffy smiled. Spike groaned. "...." I would expect the dialogue beside the buffy line to be said by buffy and likewise the dialogue beside the spike line to be said by Spike. I respect that if in the middle of a Buffy rant you wanted to say that Spike looked sheepish you wouldn't start a new paragraph but if Spike said anything you'd want to start a new paragraph with Spike looked sheepish instead of taking it on the end of the Buffy rant paragraph. And now we've just seen a spectacular run on sentence so I understand if you don't want to take my grammatical advice. Just pick a book with a lot of dialogue and see how it's structured there. Keep up the good work.
Date: 04/28/2005 - 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 7
I love the end there when he put his head on the door. Very telling of how he feels. Great job! :)
Date: 04/28/2005 - 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 7
Sweet chapter!
Date: 04/27/2005 - 03:11 am Title: Chapter 6
kind of short, but definelty of the good. please update again asap
Date: 04/26/2005 - 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 6
great update cant wait for another one
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