Date: 06/05/2005 - 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 10
That was very hot. I think even hotter than uncontrollable Buffy.
Date: 06/05/2005 - 11:59 am Title: Chapter 9
Hmmm, sounds like Angel wasn't as "dominated" as Buffy might of thought. Glad she did get them out of there, but YUCK! at that nasty old Angel blood. More please.
Date: 06/04/2005 - 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 9
Whoa, a lot of action in that chapter. Quick question: Since Buffy was able to dominate him did she win the rights to Spike?
Author's Response: She dominated Angelus and won the right to claim Spike. But she hasn't claimed him yet, that still to come. Thanks for taking the time to review!
Date: 06/04/2005 - 04:10 am Title: Chapter 9
I hope this does mean that Buffy won the claim over :)) because she didn't kill Angelus. Yay for Buffy :)) Looking eagerly forward for more
Date: 06/04/2005 - 03:43 am Title: Chapter 9
Luved it.. :D :D great way to win LOL Angelus creeps me out! :S more soon please! xx
Date: 06/04/2005 - 03:07 am Title: Chapter 9
Just caught up with this story! It's really good! Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to more!
Date: 06/04/2005 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter 9
good update
Date: 06/04/2005 - 12:35 am Title: Chapter 9
wow! excellent fight! i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 06/03/2005 - 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 9
oh my gosh that was so awesome. i cant wait to see the show down between buffy and angelus. i also cant wait to find out about spike and buffys demon calling to each other and see where it takes them. please update soon.
Date: 06/03/2005 - 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 9
That was a gorgeous chapter!
Date: 06/01/2005 - 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 8
Love your story! Its very orignal and I like the fact that Buffy isnt a vampire but still some form of demon. Loved Buffys and Spikes reaction to each other in game face. Cant wait for more, update soon!
Date: 06/01/2005 - 12:17 am Title: Chapter 8
Well, the jig may be up, but Buffy challenging Angelus over Spike - that's just PERFECT! Can't wait for that to unfold - and will Spike feel about that? Very entertaining tale. Looking forward to finding out more about Buffy's "demon" and just why Her demon and Spike's demon seem to want each other so much! More please.
Date: 05/31/2005 - 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 8
Wow .. I was unsure first, but Angel really had a claim on Spike. I loved that Buffy noticed the distress Spike was in (because of the biting??) and the best: Buffy challenge the claim! Hope you're able to update soon.
Date: 05/31/2005 - 11:47 am Title: Chapter 8
ohh more soon please. i can't wait to see buffy beating up angel. great story, but did we really need the cliffhanger. jk. awsome and can't wait for more
Date: 05/31/2005 - 12:15 am Title: Chapter 8
OH YEAH !! Spike was still not at full strength or he would have kicked Angelus' arse. I am glad that Buffy felt Spike (though I'm sure there are a lot of questions about how they are connected) and came to his aid. Seeing her challenge Angelus' claim over Spike was awesome and perfect! Even if Angelus tries his "Sire" voice, I'm hoping it doesn't work on Buffy because she really isn't his Childe or a vampire truly. I really really really can't wait to see what the next update unfolds for us. Looking forward to it.
Date: 05/30/2005 - 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oooh! Very nice twist!! Can't wait to see what happens! You are doing an AWESOME job here and so is your beta. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Date: 05/30/2005 - 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 8
great chapter! very exciting! I just wanted to mention though that you say that angelus and spike both that off their shoes and shirts and then you mention that spike uses his booted foot to kick angelus.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you like it so far. I can't believe i overlooked that, lol, i'll go back and fix it. ;)
Date: 05/30/2005 - 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 8
Love Buffy doing the challenging thingy.
Date: 05/30/2005 - 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 8
Whoa! I didn't see that one coming. It is so like Spike to let his bravado get ahead of his brains. I wonder what Angelus will do in light of the challenge.
Date: 05/30/2005 - 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 8
good update
Date: 05/30/2005 - 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 8
hahah YES!!! cant wait for the next update sud be so gud! :D cya huni xx
Date: 05/30/2005 - 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 7
Uh-huh: Angelus did not only 'smell a rat' - he caught Spike. That is sooo not good - and the dust? Seems like Dalton ist gone by now... Hope you can update soon! *smile*
Date: 05/30/2005 - 03:13 am Title: Chapter 7
GREAT UPDATE
Date: 05/29/2005 - 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 7
Awsome story. Please, please, please update soon. Poor Buffy having to deal with the Council and Angelus at the same time. I wonder how bad the confrontation between Spike and Angelus.
Date: 05/29/2005 - 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 7
Poor Dalton. Little pile of Dust. I wonder what Travers is up to. Angelus waiting for Spike is so "not of the good". Please update soon.
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