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Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2005 - 10:46 pm Title: Angel, realizations and claiming

oooh bitey! this is getting really good, even though I know there's just one chapter left! =)

Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2005 - 10:44 pm Title: A vison, a slayer, and a vampire

very nice...can't wait til the two meet! =)

Reviewer: Kari Mouke Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2005 - 08:37 pm Title: Understanding, Revealing, and Relaxing

All done! I just adore a primal Buffy who lets a little bit of the dark in, and when that dark is Spike flavored all the better! Stupid Ange. Nuff said.

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2005 - 07:54 pm Title: Understanding, Revealing, and Relaxing

Great Chapter Great Story. Love it. Please continue to write and update soon and often. Can't wait to see what happens later on .

Reviewer: Blazing Fire Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2005 - 07:28 pm Title: Understanding, Revealing, and Relaxing

I just sat here and read this story from beginning to end. I loved it. I just love the part about Angel throwing the fit after losing Buffy. I've always loved Spike with Buffy. I was just never all that crazy about Angel being with Buffy. It should have always been Spike.

Reviewer: ~*~Tasha~*~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2005 - 06:01 pm Title: Understanding, Revealing, and Relaxing

I do hope you consider a sequel Daisy. It was a pleasure to work with you. You do have some very good ideas.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2005 - 03:53 pm Title: Understanding, Revealing, and Relaxing

Neat little tale. Her dominating Angel was fun, :)

Reviewer: Starshine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2005 - 03:00 pm Title: Understanding, Revealing, and Relaxing

Awesome Sweets Keep up the good work!!

Author's Response: thanks can't wait for more of yours too

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2005 - 02:50 pm Title: Understanding, Revealing, and Relaxing

Loved the third chapter too. So the Master is killed and Spike now Buffy mate - bad luck, Angel ;-)
I wonder if you plan to write an epilogue or a sequel?

Author's Response: maybe a sequel

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2005 - 02:38 pm Title: Angel, realizations and claiming

Loved the claiming, both demon think of the other as equal, the fight balanced :)

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2005 - 02:31 pm Title: A vison, a slayer, and a vampire

I like the plot of the story *primal Slayer because of the Master's attack* and will read the rest of it, too.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2005 - 09:30 pm Title: Angel, realizations and claiming

Yum Claimy-goodness! Very hot update. Love the dom-Buffy. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Dannii Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2005 - 05:06 pm Title: Angel, realizations and claiming

LOVE IT

Reviewer: Tasha Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2005 - 02:51 pm Title: Angel, realizations and claiming

Interesting developments, Daisy. {Smiles} Look forward to the next update. I can just see Buffy running around dusting vamps that won't submit to her. She always was a bit of a dominatrix. {Chuckles}

Reviewer: Spuffy Reader Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2005 - 02:35 pm Title: A vison, a slayer, and a vampire

After witnessing such positively glowing reviews from authors like Kari, Tasha, and Uncaged, I almost hate that I can’t add my praise to theirs. But, while your first fic shows promise, some things about it could use improvement. The first of which is grammar and punctuation. Most readers won’t even look beyond a gaffed summary to bother to reading something, as their first impression of a new fic has been made. It’s an easily correctable fix, something that a second pair of eyes would most likely have picked up. Also, the shortness of your “chapters” is surprising. It’s like your fic is a compilation of drabbles than an actual story. And, like the previous review mentioned, the constant alternating between first person POVs makes it difficult to follow. Most authors pick one character and stick to it when writing that way. (Most avoid it entirely as a fic loaded with a bunch of “I’s” is rather repetitive, and boring.)

Reviewer: stupidbint Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2005 - 02:02 pm Title: Angel, realizations and claiming

I just have to say... I am very confused. Is there a reason for using 1st person for more than one character? Something I am missing? I think a little bit of continuity would be very welcome here. Premise wise, I like it but this is pretty much giving me a headache trying to figure out who is talking, etc. Sorry, not trying to rude, just being honest here.

Reviewer: Kari Mouke Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2005 - 01:32 pm Title: Angel, realizations and claiming

Daisy - that was so hot! I just love, love, love this feral Buffy. I can't wait for the next installment so here's a little begging: please, oh please, oh please give us more Miss Daisy!!!

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2005 - 01:22 pm Title: Angel, realizations and claiming

WOWvery strong chapters. Looking forward to reading more. Please update soon and often.

Reviewer: Lily Constancy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2005 - 11:51 am Title: Angel, realizations and claiming

I like the whole submit thing and then the claiming thing. Only one more left?!? Noooooo!!! But it's getting so good!!! ::poutst:: okay. Update soon, yeah? Great update!!! ~Lily

Author's Response: thanks lily. maybe i'll try another episode soon.

Reviewer: Tasha Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2005 - 12:44 am Title: A vison, a slayer, and a vampire

Please write more, Daisy. I know the spacing can be a bugger at times. I do like the idea behind this story. If you want someone to do some spacing or beta, I'd be happy to help. You know where to find me at the MIsfits. {Smiles}

Reviewer: UncagedMuse Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2005 - 05:46 pm Title: A vison, a slayer, and a vampire

Very interesting start!! Would like more sooon please.

Reviewer: Kari Mouke Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2005 - 01:14 pm Title: A vison, a slayer, and a vampire

My favorite subject matter, Daisy: primal/slayer Buffy and a Spike in need. I can't wait to see where you take us!

Reviewer: demonica mills Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2005 - 07:55 am Title: A vison, a slayer, and a vampire

looking good chica =)

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2005 - 02:55 am Title: A vison, a slayer, and a vampire

seems this is off to a good start. Please continue to update soon and often

Reviewer: Lily Constancy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2005 - 02:08 am Title: A vison, a slayer, and a vampire

Good start!!! This has the potential to go sooo many different directions... can't wait to see where you take it!!! ~Lily

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