Great story, well written, only a few errors. On bigger error is that Solum said he dug up to cause the cave in, but he's firmly established he can't dig up...

but....but... but... the coat! *sniffs*

loveeeed reading this one.. the story was ful of surprises and inexpected turns.. and that Ugal-whatta-huh thingy was awesomly written! loved reading even at it's POW!
when the end of the story was comming nearer and nearer all i could think about was that i was glad you've finnished it.. i don't know how could i wait to see what happened after that last cliff-hanger :) and have i already told you that i loved reading it??

ps.: i hope Spike gets back his coat... you know he can't be without.. khm... at least not for too long ;)

Creepy ending! But Awesome!!

Original and intriguing. I'm waiting for a sequel...

What a great ride! The caves, the demons, the growing attraction bbetween Buffy and Spike, the conspiricies and finally Matsuma's decree ----this was a terrific story. Brava!
A sequel would be wonderful.
Thanks.

Great story. I'm glad that you took up the challenge - I, too, love all the spuffy classics with them stranded together forced to take on a common enemy. Your ending is very classic original Buffy stuff - like eggs from the Praying Mantis Lady (Teacher's pet episode) that were left behind. . . They often left a lot of unsolved monter issues at the end of the episodes early on. I thought it was a nice touch. Thanks

Great story. Even though the premise has been used before, the story was very original. Who would have thought that bathing with moss could be sexy? But you managed it. I felt that the ending was a little jarring. It all seemed to happen a little too quickly, although the use of flashbacks was nice. But, like I said, great story.

You just had to add that bit about the Ugallu, didn't you. Damnit. And I loved the end. I really thought you would do it - have Spike kill off Buffy or at least turn her.
Even that first bit with Solum and Spike didn't convince me that she was still alive or at least undead. So good stuff. Fantastic end adn I will just have to live with being creeped out by the Ugallu

loved the story ! I think you should leave it as it is and not write a sequel. It won´t be as exciting now when they are mates.

I especially loved the sex scenes...wow good job!

good story really enjoyed it thank you

Well it's not Sunday but the update is very welcome. Now I read your A/N. Lets pretend it's Sunday then :) BTW, the story is set "Completed NO". If you will do an epilogue, you're welcome. Or simply set it on "Complete YES". So I never mind an epilogue *gg* or visiting this 'Verse again in short stories etc. It's hard to let go, but as a writer you know this too. It was fun reading so far, now on to the next chapter:

Oh tease, I first was insecure what happened to Buffy, but there she is. Human or not is still to see. Ah, I see. Spike claimed her and did not kill her. That's what I hoped for. Seems it changed her a bit, made her 'more' (stronger, sharpening her senses) and she claimed him back. That was what Solum asked why they did it. And Ipwet fell! Seems as if Matsema saw more than she thought he would notice. That was unexpected.. Matsema knows that there is a lot in store for our pair? Prophecies? At last a lot of plans for them. :) And it seems that Buffy wants to have her honeymoon now. The only bad thing? The Ugallu escaped too and it is very patient. So they'll have a follower, huh? And Spike doesn't have his coat, or? Looking forward to more of this 'Verse or other stories of you.