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Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 04:20 pm Title: Raging Emotions

That was so sweet! I really like the varid emotions that you bring out in each chapter, great writing

Reviewer: Whitelighter354 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 04:06 pm Title: Raging Emotions

Love the chapter!!! That was so F***ing awesome! Even though it wasnt the reaction I had expected! I figured he would have this really big breakdown and they would cry with each other. But your Ashlee, you always keep us on our toes! :) I am glad that Spike is getting revenge on Angelus but I hope he doesnt get hurt. Please update soon! I love it so much! :) Dell

Reviewer: Tahmoe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 03:44 pm Title: Raging Emotions

I'm so pissed at myself. I was shocked to read she was pregnant, wondering what the hell just happened. I read the last chapter and totally missed it. I had to go back and reread the part about the nurse mentioning the baby. I'm such a loser. Anyway, this chapter was sad minus these two people who are obviously in love fighting like the Buffyverse. I guessing she got pregnant when they had that quicky against the car or maybe that night when he bit her. Anyway, excellent chapter and update as soon as you get back. Have fun on your trip.

Reviewer: Lindsay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 03:32 pm Title: Raging Emotions

okay, admittedly ive been following this fic for awhile but ive been off, so i havent left a review. I hope this makes up for it. This is one of the best fucken stories ive read here so far. It's emotional and cold at the same time. But thats life, maybe not the situation their in but the feeligns and hardships their going through is dead on. I am so impressed with your abilities to capture real life romance and hurt, it really astounds me. every chap has me wanting more and more and i never know what the next will bring, which is a good thing in my books. Angel is the perfect bad man and Spike is the perfect bad guy/good guy. No guy is perfect and i think youve done an excellent job portraying that. To top it off Buffy herself is the epitamy of a woman, fucked up and just trying to deal with things as best as she thinks she can. Wonderful job, i really really mean it. This fic is amazing and i cant wait for the next update. XOX Linz

Reviewer: spuffette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 02:42 pm Title: Raging Emotions

Oh, goody! Spike is so gonna kick Angel's stupid ass!!! Yeah! Oh, thanks for having Buffy tell Spike it was his, right off. Sometimes the 'who's' the daddy thing goes on too long! Great chapter, as usual. spuf

Reviewer: Elanor Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 02:37 pm Title: Raging Emotions

Ohhhhhhh -- this is gonna be crazy, I can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 02:34 pm Title: Raging Emotions

Have fun on your trip!
Buffy noticed that Spike was near, huh? She seems to have a sixth sense about that. Oh my.. what will Spike feel when he notice that it was him that had blown Buffy up - and lead to Angelus killing the baby? Loved how they found comfort in the grieve from the other. Till next week!

Reviewer: baby spikes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 02:28 pm Title: Raging Emotions

awww... such a sweet chapter... can't wait for more!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: 3988Akasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 02:22 pm Title: Raging Emotions

Aw, an almost make up scene! I love how you're keeping it real between the characters and not making it overly lovey-dovey. It's just like two people in their situation would react and I love you for it. I really do want to see Angelus get is pansy ass kicked. The bastard.

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 02:03 pm Title: Raging Emotions

Wow.... and it gets even better. You're so good at this. You played that conversation so well. I never would have thought to have him think it was Angel's.. and to then confirm she didn't really know. And that he even came to see her thinking it was Angel's baby.

Reviewer: Slayerette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 01:41 pm Title: Raging Emotions

Fantastic chapter - as always. One thing though - i felt as if you hadn't really portrayed Spike's emotions when he found out that he was the father of the child. Is he really supposed to be that cold?

Author's Response: Spike thought the baby was Angel's, so yes, he was supposed to be cold and indifferent at first. Glad you liked it- thanks for the review :-)

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 11:50 pm Title: Rock Bottom

Man, I'm away for a few chapters and all hell breaks loose...again. Awesome chapters. And the baby? What a surprise. My mind is reeling with all the possibilities of what will happen next, not the least of which is Spike's reaction when he finds out that she was pregnant with his baby and that Angelus beat the life out of her because someone saw them kissing. Needless to say at this point, but I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!

Reviewer: Hazel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 11:00 pm Title: Rock Bottom

Wow. *sigh* Wow. Please update!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 09:42 pm Title: Rock Bottom

Wow! Great updates (great tale) can't wait for Spike to find out about the lost baby! It's such a bittersweet tale with them fighting their attraction to each other (and it's obvious they are in love) because of their "careers". More please.

Reviewer: crazy- bitch :D Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 03:37 pm Title: Rock Bottom

omg aaaaaa u got to put the other chapter up i wanna c wot happens lol good chap i was never exspecting her to be pregnant wid spikes baby and lose it .

Reviewer: Tahmoe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 01:28 pm Title: Rock Bottom

Nothing wrong with filler chapters and still enjoyed reading it. Update soon I can only go so long without my Spike...LOL

Reviewer: Chelsea Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 08:38 am Title: Rock Bottom

Excellent. I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Roz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 06:40 am Title: Rock Bottom

Love the story and you update so frequently that i love you!!! :) Keep up the fantastic work you rock. x

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 02:31 am Title: Rock Bottom

good update and i cant wait for the spuffy interaction in the next chapter and i hope she lets spike know about the baby

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 10:27 pm Title: Rock Bottom

Kimber said Butty...heheh. :) Love the update. The pregnancy was very unexpected. I like the unexpected. Curious, how much time has passed since the beating? It has to be a bt for her to only have a bit of bruising left, right? I know when I get bruised it can last for months. Maybe it's just me.

Author's Response: It's been over two weeks. Three by the next chapter. I think it's mentioned...somewhere :-) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 10:21 pm Title: Rock Bottom

This is such a great chapter please update soon

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 09:57 pm Title: Rock Bottom

Where's Spike? I kept waiting for him to make an appearance. It was so sad to see her so alone. Great followup chapter to the last cliffhanger. You could just feel the ache. You still have me hooked. It will be hard to be patient. I can't wait for the Spuffy loving!

Reviewer: jennybean Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 09:02 pm Title: Rock Bottom

What a twist! I sort of had a feeling that she might be pregnant b/c Angel kept hitting her in the stomach, but it was just an inkling. I really wish Spike was in this chapter - i wanted to see how he takess the news of losing the baby. If they grieve together or if he blames her. And I want to know if the flowers were from him or Angel. I think if Spike didn't show up in the hospital it may be because he's off trying to find Angel to kill him. I really hope you post the next chapter soon b/c I'm going crazy with all my speculation.

Reviewer: flibble Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 08:14 pm Title: Rock Bottom

Oh my God! She was pregnant with Spike's baby. That's so sad. Glad that she's recovering though. Will look forward to the Spuffy interaction in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Becky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 07:53 pm Title: Rock Bottom

oh my gosh that is so sad! i cant believe that she was pregnat i mean how! well i mean i know how but ugh i get what i mean i hope you do too. And who were those roses from? Why didnt spike go see her is he still staying away because she told him to? oh gosh i'm dying here! ugh update really soon i want some more spuffyness! well soon spuffyness anyway not right away spuffyness but i need more of this story! please please please update!

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