

Date: 03/02/2006 - 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 10
wow. completly awesome! so completely totally awesome! :D love the story. you capture spike's charicter nicely keep up

Date: 02/21/2006 - 01:09 am Title: Chapter 10
Knew that Immortal had to have some evil purpose in all this. And I still kinda hope that Illyria doesn't get all corrupted... though I love the idea that she was able to turn the army away. That's a real nice little idea. And Dawn still being a key that doesn't really do anything... wonder how much info the Immortal actually got... Wow, really got me hooked. Looking forward to the next update.

Date: 02/21/2006 - 12:57 am Title: Chapter 9
Many more questions and I still love it. And the random note, I so wouldn't be surprised if Andrew sent it. So like him to cut out magazine letters. And at least Buffy and Spike do have each other for now, though I do wonder if both of them may play some role in this prophecy... And the little line about blind Giles, priceless. And, also knowing Illyria is in this world, would love to see her, too. Great chapter. Can't wait for more.

Date: 02/21/2006 - 12:46 am Title: Chapter 8
Hmm... all in a bit of danger, where have we heard that before, and how often. Love how all of this is tying togehter, including the whole Buffy/Immortal relationship. Love any idea that makes that a sham. Great chapter. Love our boy comforting her.

Date: 02/21/2006 - 12:36 am Title: Chapter 7
Giles in research mode and Spike being fun and naughty in his sleep. Not to mention Dawn's roundabout way of saying she was glad Spike was back. Great chapter.

Date: 02/21/2006 - 12:28 am Title: Chapter 6
Hmmm.... trouble's a brewing? Perhaps it has something to do with our favorite couple? Can't really say I know anything, but you write amazing dream sequences... and this one really did sneak up on you. Great chapter.

Date: 02/21/2006 - 12:17 am Title: Chapter 5
So perfect that they start out on the steps and end up culddled up in bed. Some of the best moments. Really love her tearful confession. Great chapter.

Date: 02/21/2006 - 12:10 am Title: Chapter 4
That was quite marvelous. Laying all that baggage out there, trying to piece things together, not really know what to say or what they wanted to hear. Wow, so very powerful. A really amazing chapter.

Date: 02/21/2006 - 12:02 am Title: Chapter 3
I really don't have a clue what that dream meant, but my goodness, that was amazing and well described imagery. I can only imagine what we'll find out about all those metaphors... or maybe its all things actually to come. Really great chapter with some very fun comic releif at the end. Marvelous.

Date: 02/20/2006 - 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 10
Wow.. interesting news.... Willow is responsible to get the Immortal and Buffy together? And he is a key maker?... Looking forward to the next chapter!

Date: 02/20/2006 - 09:50 am Title: Chapter 10
Good update! I like how the plot is progressing. The new Immortal and Illyria info is really interesting.

Date: 02/20/2006 - 12:26 am Title: Chapter 2
"We haven't even begun to dance . . . . William." --That's a telling little remark to make upon their reunion. I Can't wait for more... which I will have to do because it's a little bit later. Great chapter.

Date: 02/20/2006 - 12:17 am Title: Chapter One
Well, that's all kinds of not good news to get in the morning. Love the way you started this.

Date: 02/19/2006 - 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 10
Just caught up on this fic. I like a good adventure, and with the arrival of the rest of the Scoobies I think this is going to be a great ride.
Love the tentative re-builing of trust and caring between, not just Spike and Buffy, but Dawn and Spike, too. Hope the rest of the Scoobies are as welcoming *frowns warningly at the Xan-Man*, and I hope poor loveable Andrew can be put right. He's a great comic character.
Looking forward to more updates. Thank you, pet.

Date: 02/19/2006 - 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 10
Willow's the one who set her4 up with the Immortal. Wow. As if seting her up with ZRiley wasn't bad enough

Date: 02/19/2006 - 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 10
good update

Date: 10/03/2005 - 11:01 am Title: Chapter 9
good...very good. seeya

Date: 10/03/2005 - 08:08 am Title: Chapter 9
Huh? Who wrote the letter (the one with the letters cut out of newspapers)? The sounds as if Andrews has done it by himself.. like it is done in old movies. Yeah - at last Buffy and Spike have one another now.

Date: 10/03/2005 - 07:48 am Title: Chapter 8
Mmm - I missed a chapter as it seems. So the Immortal told Andrew some lies.. baaaad Immortal! Oh no! Andrew run amok... - was it the influence of the Immortal? I'm not sure if he (Imm.) can do that. Well; Spike thinks the same. Danger? Yes, that's obvious.

Date: 10/02/2005 - 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 9
Loved the Spuffyness at the end of the chapter. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Great chapter!

Date: 10/02/2005 - 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 9
excellent update more please

Date: 09/26/2005 - 03:07 am Title: Chapter 8
Exciting chapter! Good update. Interesting use of Andrew. Andrew being possessed would be a good explanation for his actions in TGIQ ( I mean really Andrew with two women). Can't wait for more!

Date: 09/26/2005 - 02:28 am Title: Chapter 8
nice chapter, altough buffy really must start opening her eyes, she want s normal yet she still slept with that supernnatural disgusting immortal.

Date: 09/26/2005 - 01:12 am Title: Chapter 8
may i just take this moment to say "wow". this is the best story that i've read in a long time. i can't wait to see what's going to happen, please continue and update frequently *please?* LOVE IT!!!!

Date: 09/25/2005 - 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 8
good update