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Reviewer: greyangel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2005 - 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 15: 'A Clean, Comfy Loft'

Oh! that was so nice, I've been pretty busy lately, and had very little time to read my favourite stories, but now I'm all kinds of happy to be all caught up like this sweet tail...my only complaint is, where's the next chapter??? LOL...need more soon sweetie.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm trying to get the next chapter out soon. I have got to finish AMOM, someday! (tee hee) spuf

Reviewer: Mole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2005 - 08:10 am Title: Chapter 15: 'A Clean, Comfy Loft'

Cordelia is a bit blunt, much, isn't she? But of the good kind....so, let's see soon hat the next chap has in store!!!

Author's Response: The women in my family tend to shoot from the hip first and ask questions later. That's how I tried to write Cordelia in this chapter. She's tough, but then again, she has to be with four kids, married to Doyle and living in the wilds of Arizona in 1876! (tee hee) I actually had female reletives like this and they were quite something! Thanks spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2005 - 12:56 am Title: Chapter 15: 'A Clean, Comfy Loft'

i hope that if you do the love scene in the next chapter that you will make it long and descriptive

Author's Response: Well, I would like to do the love scene, definitely. I am going to try and make it long and descriptive, but I do get a little shy about sex scenes. Thank you, spuf

Reviewer: Suzee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2005 - 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 11: 'Bad Girl Buffy'

Okay so obviously I've read this chapter before, but I don't think I've reviewed it before..and me, being my incredibly screwed up self, wanted to leave you this story-s 100th review :D Yeah, I'm a dork, but a dork who loves your fic.

Author's Response: Thank you and you are not a dork! spuf

Reviewer: Chelsea Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2005 - 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 15: 'A Clean, Comfy Loft'

Oooo! I can't wait for the next chapter. Awesome job so far!

Author's Response: Thank you. spuf

Reviewer: Chelsea Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2005 - 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 14: 'Fevered'

Wow. Good chapter. I'm wondering when this Graham thing could turn into a problem. Great job.

Author's Response: Thank you. Graham is a problem, but the posse is the gang's biggest problem right now. spuf

Reviewer: chris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2005 - 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 15: 'A Clean, Comfy Loft'

great chapter, and I love Cordelia...what a woman...Lol Glad she managed to get through to Buffy too..now we can look forward to the hot stuff !!

Author's Response: Thanks. I tend to base the characters I write on people I have known! I had an aunt that was well...blunt? spuf

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2005 - 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 15: 'A Clean, Comfy Loft'

Oh ho ho, sexy sexy! I can't wait to see the next chapter now;) I love the fact that Cordy openly asked Buffy if she was a virgin- so true to her character LOL Excellent update and bring on the sweet Spuffyness!

Author's Response: I love brually honest Cordelia. It's always been part of her charm. Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Suzee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2005 - 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 15: 'A Clean, Comfy Loft'

So, let's not foucs on how I missed this chapter being here and focus on the goodness that was this chapter and that will be the coming chapter :-) You really do write such great stories.

Author's Response: Thank you again. I try really hard to make each chapter count. spuf

Reviewer: Suzee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2005 - 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 14: 'Fevered'

You're such a good writer..have I ever said how great it makes me feel when you've reviewed my stuff? It does because of how great you are ;) and this was a fabulous chapter, you did so well showing their emotions, but making it ture, too. :-)

Author's Response: Well, thank you very much. That is quite a compliment coming from you. Thank you, thank you. spuf

Reviewer: Spikes gal pal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2005 - 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 15: 'A Clean, Comfy Loft'

Noooo don't stop it there, I love this story,and the slow burn with Spike and Buffy.

Author's Response: Well, I promise we will find out about what's going on in that hay loft! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2005 - 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 15: 'A Clean, Comfy Loft'

You certainly pegged Cordelia as the perfect outspoken aunt. I love how she "shoved" Buffy right into bed with Spike. :)

Author's Response: Cordelia is a real pip in this one. I just had to write her into the plot line and thought her being Angel and Spike's aunt would be fun! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2005 - 11:24 am Title: Chapter 15: 'A Clean, Comfy Loft'

Gotta love Cordy lol. Great chapter. They're just so cute together!

Author's Response: Thanks. Cordy is blunt, but I like her that way! spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2005 - 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 14: 'Fevered'

Awe :) Spike is deep in love with Buffy. And it was really little Hank's birthday; Buffy did miss it. I didn't think you'd kill Buffy, but I'm very glad the the fever broke now. Well about the dreams? I don't know.. It's possible because she has the gift.

Author's Response: Yes, deeply in love with her. The dreams could possibly be prophetic! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2005 - 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 13: 'Regret'

If I understood correctly Hank didn't believe what Samual told him about Buffy. Poor Buffy - maybe she should have waited and asked Spike.

Author's Response: Hank is confused. Things will get better, then worse, then better then... Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2005 - 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 12: 'The Magic: Love And Desire'

Thanks for the Spuffyness - loved it. Hehe - so Buffy knows now what she is: “I ‘am’ William’s girl. Always will be” As for your question: I'm too late :-D I'll read on and find out!

Author's Response: Oh, yes, Buffy was always William's girl! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Spikes gal npal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2005 - 05:48 am Title: Chapter 14: 'Fevered'

Oh what a wonderful emotional chapter,will and the children dreams Aww...and it looks like we're grtting to a Spuffy moment*looks hopeful*

Author's Response: Yes, we are getting very, very close to Spuffy now. Thank you for reviewing. spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2005 - 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 14: 'Fevered'

absolutely loved it when he was there by her side

Author's Response: Thank you. spuf

Reviewer: Allison Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2005 - 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 14: 'Fevered'

Buffy dreaming of kids and not being able to find them? That'd better be prophetic at some point LOL Nice detail about it really being her little brother's birthday. I'm happy Buffy's okay now and that Riley helped her so much, but Graham deserves castration or something really vile. Syphillis, perhaps? Anything to really hit him where it hurts:) Excellent update!

Author's Response: Thank you for sticking with my story. I'm so down lately, so blue I guess. I can't seem to get motivated. Although, I do have over half of the next chapter written. Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Mole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2005 - 06:05 am Title: Chapter 13: 'Regret'

Glad to see the update! I'm looking forward to the Spuffy reunion....

Author's Response: Thanks. Spike and Buffy will be okay, soon. spuf

Reviewer: Franchesac Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2005 - 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 13: 'Regret'

I think the chapter is fine. It is a little flat compared to some of your others, but only noticed once I read your A/N at the bottom. Spuffy smut will make it all better. :) More soon?

Author's Response: Thanks. Buffy's going to be a bit confused, temporarily, and Spike will feel guilty for it. But...I'm promising it will work out for Spuffy. spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2005 - 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 13: 'Regret'

good update

Author's Response: Thank you. spuf

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2005 - 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 13: 'Regret'

I hope Buffy will be alright, but her being confused will be interesting to see. It sucks that Buffy didn't understand what Spike really meant, but he dug his own grave by not telling her Wilkins is dead. Excellent chapter!:)

Author's Response: Thanks. The confusion won't last long, don't worry. This is where Riley Finn is going to actually come in pretty handy (tee hee)! And no, not in a romantic way, promise. spuf

Reviewer: Mole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2005 - 04:13 am Title: Chapter 12: 'The Magic: Love And Desire'

Great chap! I think, THE SPUFFY should wait for a little while, at least until they have some kind of privacy from the lots of Graham, etc. But in general, I'm open to it...

Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, I want them to have privacy. I don't suppose there's any abandoned barns about Utah at that time, eh? spuf

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2005 - 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 12: 'The Magic: Love And Desire'

i have to be honest and say that i would love it if you made buffy 'give herself' to spike in the next chapter but if you don't, that's okay. i still can't wait for more. loved it. great job.

Author's Response: Thanks for the input. I'm still a little unsure about this, but it will happen, promise. spuf

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