

Date: 10/10/2005 - 08:53 pm Title: Chapter Six
I wouldn't mind seeing something happen with Aiden and Emma. Although, I wouldn't mind you playing with us and having it switch to Dawn/Aiden. The Spuffy part made me go 'awww'. Spike is so lovable toward his family.

Date: 10/10/2005 - 07:12 pm Title: Chapter Six
cna you clarify that sex scene for me? I wanna see it again. . . . Nice update. . . makes up for the fact I'm not . . . . at least I have something good to read.

Date: 10/10/2005 - 06:54 pm Title: Chapter Six
Hey I can do it, I can take one for the team if neither Dawn or Emma are willing to have a go at the tall dark blue eyed wonder. I happen to like older men. LOL. Glad Buffy was able to open up about her issues and of course Spike will assure her. I hope that the shit doesn't hit too hard,but hey this is Buffyverse where anything can happen. Keep this going, love it all.

Date: 10/10/2005 - 06:42 pm Title: Chapter Six
Great update. I don't know why ppl are still looking to use the key. I am glad that Spike and Buffy were finally able to talk and that Buffy was able and willing to really talk to Spike about what was going on with her. Great that Dawn has Emma and I hope that she will actually help them an don't hinger them.

Date: 10/10/2005 - 06:39 pm Title: Chapter Six
absolutely loved it more please

Date: 10/10/2005 - 06:17 pm Title: Chapter Six
Nothing confusing here. Very glad they made up, and the Dawn/Emma friendship is good. They naturally click.

Date: 10/10/2005 - 06:04 pm Title: Chapter Six
*applause* very good... love that they made up..*sigh* and major sparks with Aiden and Emma...go on get ya some girl...rofl

Date: 10/10/2005 - 05:56 pm Title: Chapter Six
Great chapter. Awesome job. Cant wait for more.

Date: 10/10/2005 - 05:41 pm Title: Chapter Six
i thoiught ti was a great chapter! I love Dawn's conversation with Emma ! That was very cute! I also really loved how cute buffy and spike are together. Excellent chapters and I cannot wait to see whats in store for them.

Date: 10/07/2005 - 08:42 am Title: Chapter Five
Finally some action :) Keep it coming, wanna see where this is going

Date: 10/06/2005 - 07:03 pm Title: Chapter Five
Great story so far. I love Emma, she's such a great addition to this story. The plot is really engaging, can't wait to see what happens next.

Date: 10/06/2005 - 04:08 pm Title: Chapter Five
Oh - I love your sudden turn! I didn't see it coming - very good!

Date: 10/06/2005 - 12:17 pm Title: Chapter Five
Hmm interesting twist. Cant wait for more. Love the story so far. Great job.

Date: 10/06/2005 - 12:01 pm Title: Chapter Three
Whoa big cliffhanger. Awesome chapter.

Date: 10/06/2005 - 11:47 am Title: Chapter Three
Wow Emma really is pretty from the banner you have. Hopefully Buffy and Spike will be able to make up soon. Loved the chapter. Awesome job.

Date: 10/06/2005 - 11:34 am Title: Chapter Two
Very nice chapter. Loved the spuffiness and jealous Buffy. Wonderful job.

Date: 10/06/2005 - 11:21 am Title: Prologue & Chapter One
Fantastic start. Love hormonal Buffy. Awesome job.

Date: 10/06/2005 - 12:13 am Title: Chapter Five
good update more please

Date: 10/05/2005 - 09:15 pm Title: Chapter Five
great update. I am so glad to see it continue.

Date: 10/05/2005 - 08:54 pm Title: Chapter Five
Very interesting plot twist. I can't wait to find out what happens next to our heros. Good update!

Date: 10/05/2005 - 08:37 pm Title: Chapter Five
I like the shift of things. I love big adventures and it sounds like you have one in store for us. Oh, and the key thing is cool. I always thought something else should happen with Dawn and her 'glowing green energy'.

Date: 10/05/2005 - 07:57 pm Title: Chapter Five
twist and turns, shit that was a damn tornado there LOL...loved the chachi demon name when shortened. Would like to have a look at this guardian guy up close and personal. sounds yummy. Ok back to the story, demenionsal travel can't be fun on a nausea stomach. But hey she has her champion with her and only all Hell can break loose right?? *laughs* keep this going I love it

Date: 10/05/2005 - 07:31 pm Title: Chapter Five
I like the new alternate universe plotline. Exploring a different dimension leads to all sorts of fun details. Putting Dawn in danger on a couple different levels is going to heighten the suspense, too.

Date: 10/05/2005 - 06:44 pm Title: Chapter Five
Ohhhhhh we're not in Kansas. . . so Chachi is gonna try and destroy the world. . . . where's Joanie. . . hahah. . . sorry. my bad. Love this chapter. . poor Buffy interdimensional travel when pregnant has to be a bummer. . .

Date: 10/05/2005 - 06:18 pm Title: Chapter Five
Please write more *begs*