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Reviewer: SlayrGrl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2005 - 12:55 pm Title: Chapter Four

wow... cliffhangers are evil, but I'll definatly be waiting to see what happens next. Great story, update soon!

Reviewer: Time of Change Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2005 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter Four

Eeeeeeee! Evil cliffhanger! I like Emma. Well, actually I feel terribly sorry for her. I really like your Dawn.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2005 - 04:09 pm Title: Chapter Four

Oh, I hope Dawn is right: She'll be taking him back in no time Oops. Buffy did come for Spike; I was very glad about it. I would have been very hardbreaking. And then: there was a loud crash and a flash of bright light, and the four occupants of the room were gone?? I hope you can update soon. Yeah, indeed: Evil cliffhanger here :) Nope, I didn't see that coming.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2005 - 12:18 pm Title: Chapter Four

I love the little details you put in each chapter - Spike knowing about Dawn having beer in her fridge highlighted his involvement in her business even though she's living in another apartment, nice job. The dialogue throughout this chapter flowed nicely, and I especially liked Dawn and Spike's reflections on Emma and Buffy. Thanks for having Buffy come to her senses so quickly. Jealousy demon or pregnancy amnesia had me giggling. I also liked that Spike was up front with Buffy about her hurtful behavior.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2005 - 10:28 am Title: Chapter Four

But vague disclaimers are no one's friend and you must be beaten to death with a shovel for doing this to us again...

Author's Response: Well, I couldn't give away the plot...

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2005 - 02:10 am Title: Chapter Four

good update and cliffhanger

Reviewer: Elanor Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2005 - 11:26 pm Title: Chapter Four

Love this! Glad the Emma thing was resolved -- can't wait to see where they all poofed off to!

Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2005 - 09:03 pm Title: Chapter Four

Oohhhhh update! Good really good. . . where'd they go?

Reviewer: wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2005 - 08:42 pm Title: Chapter Four

EVIL EVIL cliffhanger...there will be beatings with Spike's LMAO. Excellent Chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Does that really count as punishment? LOL

Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2005 - 08:19 pm Title: Chapter Four

Aww, I really liked hearing everyone's point of view on the issue. Glad Buffy and Spike aren't *that* stubborn and got everything sorted out quickly. And it was really nice to see Dawn!! I like how you wrote her. =)

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2005 - 08:16 pm Title: Chapter Four

what did you do????!!!! oh this is getting good. REALLY GOOD!!!! post soon. great job.

Reviewer: SinisterChic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2005 - 07:59 pm Title: Chapter Four

*blink* Wow, that was unexpected. You're mean, but you already knew that, right?

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2005 - 06:51 pm Title: Chapter Four

loved the way you handled this...............i can't wait to see where they go..................

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2005 - 06:39 pm Title: Chapter Four

Great chapter! I'm really happy Buffy and Spike kissed and made up. I really liked Dawn in this chapter. Exciting cliffhanger. Can't wait to find what's where they ended up.

Reviewer: Wendy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2005 - 05:58 pm Title: Chapter Four

Very disappointed in Spike here. He stayed at Dawn's even though Emma was there, and he has still to apologize for his insensitivity to Buffy's feelings and placing Emma's feelings first. He needs to explain to Buffy soon why Emma's feelings were more important to him at that time than Buffy's. (Even though there is no good explanation)

Author's Response: He stayed at Dawn's because he doesn't know anyone else there he can stay with. It's not like Emma's going to be sleeping the night there. Also, he hasn't had a chance to discuss anything with Buffy...flash of light, people disappearing. Give him a bit of a break.

Reviewer: Kendra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2005 - 05:51 pm Title: Chapter Four

Glad Buffy and Spike finally made up and Buffy is no longer jealous of Emma. I really like her. She seems kinda like me. Except for the being pretty part. But what is with the flashing and vanishing? Hmm. Possibly the start of the story behind this story? Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2005 - 06:13 am Title: Chapter Three

Buffy can't take Emma being friendly with Spike.. *sigh* But Spike should have known - if he would spare with Emma he would hurt Buffy a lot more as he did with words. And know it gats angsty *deep sigh*

Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2005 - 02:55 am Title: Chapter Three

I changed my mind. It's Spike that I'm starting to dislike (in this story). I'm all for Buffy kicking his stupid ass out. =)

Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2005 - 02:54 am Title: Chapter Two

Heehee, very cute banter. But oh no about Spike telling Emma about the baby. And I'm starting to disike her. =(

Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2005 - 02:53 am Title: Prologue & Chapter One

Aww pregnant Buffy and planning a wedding! I love this story already! =)

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2005 - 04:42 pm Title: Chapter Three

what the HELL is wrong with buffy??? i'm wanna say that buffy has a valid reason for acting like such a bitch and that maybe emma isn't what she seems but as I was reading the end of this chapter, i was thinking "Buffy has really REALLY lost her mind." then i laughed at some of the stuff she said. great job. loved it lots. post soon.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2005 - 11:20 am Title: Chapter Three

Okay, voodoo doll is away. Can I keep Pedro - the anatomically correct gag doll from Chile??? http://www.doonesbury.com/strip/retro/timeline/90s/900330.html spikespet2002@yahoo.com

Reviewer: Ashley Granchester Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2005 - 09:42 am Title: Chapter Three

This is the first time I review one of your stories. First of all, let me tell you that I loved Daylight and I'm also loving the other stories in your site. This story is great and the last chapter just left me wanting to cry and wanting for more. Please keep it up and post soon. Ash.

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2005 - 04:59 am Title: Chapter Three

loved the chapter keep it coming....I don't mind jealous buffy because she deserves it al little but please let spike be good..................

Reviewer: Winslowpenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2005 - 02:58 am Title: Chapter Three

Wow. Wow. Buffy is completely wrong and reacting horribly. I understand emotions, hormones, etc. But you can't always act on them. But I am surprised that Spike literally choose Emma over Buffy. Told Emma to stay even after Buffy told her to leave - Went to see how Emma was feeling instead of Buffy. - Went to spar and work off tension with Emma instead of helping Buffy with wedding plans. Now Buffy was wrong, but if my husband acted that way and put someone else's feelings before mine, I'd react strongly, too. It wouldn't be as much about if I trusted my husband as much as it would hurt for him to care more about someone else than he did me at that moment. - But, I wouldn't have kicked Spike out. I would have talked to him and explained my hurt, etc. - well, no, if it was Spike, I would jump him and shag him silly - anyways, not the point -

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