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Reviewer: Noelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2005 - 09:32 pm Title: Twenty four

Oh, no I can just imagine what that letter says. I hope it doesn't say that Spike knew about Fred and Angel but I think it does...

Reviewer: Noelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2005 - 07:49 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Just started reading this fic and I love it. Best line of the whole fic: "She's not the best part of you and me, Angel. She's the best part of me and Spike." I was kinda confused about the first part of the fic because Spike kept mentioning how little he knew Buffy in high school, and I definitely didn't expect it to be Fred/Angel! Good twist, this fic is really interesting.

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Date: 12/12/2005 - 07:42 pm Title: Twenty four

...ops! i hope this cat could go through a little CPR!! lol
well, that seems quite right... he last chapters we waited for this revelation... and now we are waiting again to know how she will react! talking about evil...

Reviewer: Suzee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2005 - 03:50 pm Title: Twenty four

You're getting evil with these endings, Missy! I'd demand that you update very, very soon but that wouldn't be nice so I'm not going to....instead I'm just going to attempt to wait patiently for you to update ;-)

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2005 - 02:06 pm Title: Twenty four

Ack!! Now *I* am the curious cat! Please update soon! I can't wait to find out what's in that letter.

Great chapter, btw. ;)

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2005 - 01:35 pm Title: Twenty four

I hate suspense. I have been catching up and now I have to wait to find out what is inside the letter.

Reviewer: lara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2005 - 08:37 am Title: Twenty four

WAAA! what a stupit thing to do, stopping now! "grr"
Story rock's though!

kisses

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2005 - 04:57 am Title: Twenty four

The *thud* I heard at the end of the chapter was the other choose crashing to the ground, right? And btw, YOU'RE EVIL for leaving off there! PLEASE update SOON!

Reviewer: jennybean Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2005 - 04:55 am Title: Twenty four

Ok - I knew that was going to come back and bite him on the ass....

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2005 - 03:52 am Title: Twenty four

Argh! Should have known things were going too well. Now I will be on pins and needles until I read the next chapter. i hope it won't go too badly!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2005 - 03:30 am Title: Twenty four

uh oh i wished that she never would have found out about fred and spike

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2005 - 03:08 am Title: Twenty four

the whole time I was reading that, was waiting for it to all blow up! LOL cant wait to see what that letter has to say :)

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2005 - 02:47 am Title: Twenty four

OH SHIT!

I don't like that letter and Fred better keep her big mouth shut. I have a confession, I never liked Fred in Angel. I thought she was a phony from day one and latched on too easily to any available man that showed an inkling of an interest in her.

Sorry, just me.

Anyway, I guess this is where it gets angstsy again, right?

Good chapter though.
spuf

Author's Response: I felt the same way about Fred too!! LOL

Reviewer: katakata Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2005 - 02:24 am Title: Twenty four

Grrrrr...arrrrrgh! Please update soon, I can't even begin to figure out which of the myriad scenarios running through my head right now is most likely to come to pass so won't bother trying to hazard a guess. Will wait for an update to put me out of my misery...waiting. Waiting. Still waiting, LOL.

Oh and btw - I just LOVED the little note thingee Buffy'd do with Spike. I still ask my husband if he likes me, to which he invariably responds he in fact loves me. I remind him that as grateful as I am for his love we started out friends and I hope I'll always be somebody he can like as well as love. Crazy? Probably. Still important though? Oh most definitely.

Author's Response: I did the note thing when I had started dating someone in college and it just seemed like a cute thing that Buffy would do to make Spike feel good. And you are definitely right about it being important that he likes you as well as loves you.

Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2005 - 02:21 am Title: Twenty four

Oh no! What does Fred have to say? Why does Buffy have to be all snooping around? Gah! =(

Author's Response: LOL. Well, she was looking for bread...lol.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2005 - 04:20 am Title: Twenty Three

Those were some intense chapters (sorry, playing catchup....again!). Glad Spike chickened out on the "big" secret, but if Buffy truly believes all that destiny crap - then Spike's little subtefuge shouldn't matter.....especially considering the love factor. more please

Reviewer: M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2005 - 08:44 pm Title: Twenty Three

I really hope Spike's lie doesn't come back to bite him! I trust you will continue to spin a great tale! Please keep up the good work. I have been reading here and yahoo and I really enjoy it!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2005 - 02:50 pm Title: Twenty Three

I enjoyed the flashback with Fred, especially Spike calling her on being selfish. I'm looking forward to the truth coming out, but it adds tension to have Spike not being completely honest with Buffy.

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2005 - 10:47 am Title: Twenty Three

and here i thought it would be that easy for him to spill all his beans....love the story and waiting for more!!!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2005 - 08:26 pm Title: Twenty Three

No Spike didn't tell his 'big' secret.. I wonder if he will. When Buffy is so scared of secrets.. :)

Reviewer: slayerspet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2005 - 08:03 pm Title: Twenty Three

Oh My....he can't say anything now....he is so screwed...cause there is nothing hidden that wont be revealed...I just have a feeling this secret is gonna come back and bite him in his cute behind!

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2005 - 07:15 pm Title: Twenty Three

LOL! I was braced for Hurricane Buffy. It wasn't THE secret, but it was one of them. That's progress, right? LOL! Great chapter!

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2005 - 05:15 pm Title: Twenty Three

Well, here's the thing. The truth is, Spike didn't know about Fred until they were almost to Buffy's house, right? Actually, he was somewhat innocent in this mess. How did he know that Angel and Fred would run off together?

Now, he knew the first thing in the morning, but then again, they left right after he found out.
It's just too confusing I guess.

I really think he should come clean as he might be surprised about the outcome.

spuf

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2005 - 03:40 pm Title: Twenty Three

Very sneaky of you but that's why we love to read your writings.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2005 - 02:58 pm Title: Twenty Three

Guess Spike chickened out..I am dreading when it finally does come out in the open. I just hope that Buffy will be in a better frame of mind and be able to put it in to perspective.
Good chapter!

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