

Date: 11/03/2005 - 08:12 am Title: Buffy meet Spike
Wow..can't wait to see how this will play out..Good job!

Date: 10/09/2005 - 03:15 am Title: Buffy meet Spike
Another good chapter. This is off to a good start. I hope to read another chapter soon.

Date: 10/08/2005 - 06:38 pm Title: Buffy meet Spike
Interesting story so far can't wait to see how things play out between Spuffy especially with Hank being such a mean dad.

Date: 10/08/2005 - 09:45 am Title: Buffy meet Spike
Im not going to say much but it was kinda good it needs more spuffyiness not to be rude but you shoulda made them share something in this one please try to add some sex in the next chapter if you make one ok this one was not bad

Date: 10/06/2005 - 01:44 pm Title: Buffy meet Spike
OMG! I love it! I have to have some Spuffyness soon though! Without Hank! :) Please update soon! Lighter

Date: 10/06/2005 - 01:28 am Title: Buffy meet Spike
good so far cant' wait for more.

Date: 10/06/2005 - 12:39 am Title: Buffy meet Spike
more please and just out of curiosity ...have you put this story up on spuffyonline.com becuase i believe that i have read it before
Author's Response: yes i have posted on spuffy online, but it was unfinished, i plan to finish it on this site.

Date: 10/05/2005 - 05:58 pm Title: Introduction
This is a great start but I have a few pointers. Be careful with Capitilizations and where they should go, and grammer. You have quite a few run on sentences. These things take away from the plot, and your plot is amazing. With a little work, this story could really take off into something amazing. :-) Good luck on future installments!
Author's Response: Im sorry for my mistakes. I will try to work on them, let me know how i am doing. thanx!

Date: 10/05/2005 - 08:17 am Title: Introduction
Good start, you may want to read through again, because there are quite a few typos, maybe use the spellcheck we have...I do look forward to reading more.

Date: 10/05/2005 - 07:29 am Title: Introduction
I'm intrigued, more please. I think Hank's a nutter

Date: 10/05/2005 - 12:34 am Title: Introduction
good so far and cant wait to see spike

Date: 10/04/2005 - 11:50 pm Title: Introduction
more soon. great so far. i want spike soon though.