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Reviewer: Mockerfab4 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2006 - 10:06 pm Title: Thirty six

Too cute. I love that last sentence. Made me smile. Good job on this story and looking forward to reading more.

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Date: 01/03/2006 - 10:02 pm Title: Thirty six

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one. :D

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2006 - 09:20 pm Title: Thirty six

faith is a real hater in this fic. just cuz her honey left her high and dry doesn't mean that everyone else's honey will do the same. why do i have the feeling that she'll do something really bad to jerpardize buffy and will's relationship? maybe it's just me though. loved it. great job. glad buffy's staring to feel the william withdrawl. lol. post soon

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2006 - 05:33 pm Title: Thirty five

Ouch - you're a tease! That was the cliffhanger then.. Buffy doesn't know what this was all about; but I have hope now for a happy ending. If Buffy figures it out :)

Reviewer: chika Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2006 - 10:59 am Title: Thirty five

hey, i was reading this on spuffyonline but that wont open for some reason so i will mostl likely be reading things here now, love the chapter, cant wait for more

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2006 - 09:32 am Title: Thirty five

William's confident, hopeful dialogue had me smiling, as did Buffy's confused "Are you on medication?" He's right, Buffy needs to come to him on her own terms. The break up forces Buffy to make a decision. That kiss should push her in the right direction!

Reviewer: Briana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 - 05:54 pm Title: Thirty five

omg this is so good I haven't stooped reading it.. can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: Nicki Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 - 03:23 pm Title: Thirty five

She better figure this out damn fast or I'm going pop her over the head!!!!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 - 09:47 am Title: Thirty five

"YES!!!!!" She yells...."Houston, we have lift off. With that kiss, the heat is on....."

Reviewer: Michele Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 - 09:17 am Title: Thirty five

This more confident, assertive William is sexy as hell! Loved this chapter!

Reviewer: luxferi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 - 01:20 am Title: Thirty five

Love the chapter! Write more write more! ;) Oh btw, I like the kiss at the end. Left me a bit dazed too. :D

Reviewer: daisy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 - 01:16 am Title: Thirty five

she's right he is crazy, however i belive he's right. can't wiat to see when she realizes it as well. awsome story and i can't wait for more.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2006 - 11:19 pm Title: Thirty five

if i thought i was shocked before, it is NOTHING compared to the shock i feel now. SPIKE is the one who sees reason??!! SPIKE??! I mean, i love the guy to peices but this is SPIKE we're talking about. even if he is older than buffy in this fic, he does have a tendency to act like a child. lol. i'm glad he's the one to leave buffy with her jaw haning on the floor for once. it's a nice change of pace. i lloved it so much and i'm glad that you went this way with the fic. i hope buffy realizes what she has soon. great job. post really soon. can't wait for more

Reviewer: braat44 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2006 - 10:03 pm Title: Thirty five

Yay! Loved this chapter. :D I'm soooo glad William gets it. More soon please.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2006 - 09:38 pm Title: Thirty five

Oh GOD! He is just to good to be true..Buffy better not screw this up! LOL
I love the whole tone of this chapter..probley one of the best yet for me. It left off so angsy in the last chapter..and even though they are still broke up..Will's thought process was so comforting. Reading it still makes you sad, but now also hopeful.
Bravo!

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2006 - 08:53 pm Title: Thirty five

clever! I love the way you write!!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2006 - 08:45 pm Title: Thirty five

Great chapter! Glad things aren't so upsetting but William is sure taking a chance here. Love it!

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2006 - 08:22 pm Title: Thirty five

Have I told you lately how much I love William?!?! Gotta love a man that can tell the woman he loves that they should stay broken up, explain why by way of telling her something she doesn't know about about herself yet, then kisses her senseless before he walks away, smiling. And men say women are confusing? LOL! Excellent writing!

Reviewer: Smitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2006 - 08:03 pm Title: Thirty five

Great chapter I love the idea of what Spike is doing!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2006 - 08:03 pm Title: Thirty five

Oh, he is so right. How can she not know what he means? It's so simple and obvious.

I don't know how people can live in little boxes. It's so boring.

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2006 - 07:44 pm Title: Thirty five

i understand where william is coming from but i cant believe that he broke up with buffy

Reviewer: thia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2006 - 02:11 am Title: Thirty four

Finally William stands up for his own good in this mess.. I'm glad he said that. Really I do. Because after what buffy put him through, he should realize that buffy is not ready for his passion or his love for her. Clearly obvious. So.. she needs space to figure out what she really wants and to get it on her own. In her own pace. And because William loves her so, he;s given that chance to her. I'm happy with how you're going with this. Excellent! Just bloody excellen! :D:D:D

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 08:35 pm Title: Thirty four

NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT IS THE MATTER WITH HIM???!!!!!! okay, okay...breath..just breath. okay... i'm fine now. great chapter. glad they got all that mess out in the open. loved it. great job. can't wait for you to fix this. post soon....now would be greatly appreciated. lol.

Reviewer: spikesbabi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 06:54 pm Title: Thirty four

.......well that was unexpected.... : )

Reviewer: Danielle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 04:35 pm Title: Thirty four

Right decision for William to make. Buffy is too immature and into herself at this stage of her life to love anybody (not saying it's a bad thing - just that's how she is) William would only set himself up for heartache being with her now. She also doesn't seem very trusting of William, even given all of her lip service. I mean trust as in she certainly doesn't trust him with her heart or that he won't try to push her, etc.

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