[Report This]Date: 12/21/2005 - 10:41 pm Title: Twenty eight
That was great! Unfortunately, I've been there myself so i think that's why I enjoyed it. What a sweetie to take care of her the way he did. I'm glad Faith and Anya made an appearance. And why do I have the feeling we haven't seen the last of Dru?
[Report This]Date: 12/21/2005 - 09:55 pm Title: Twenty eight
What a fun chapter!
[Report This]Date: 12/21/2005 - 09:49 pm Title: Twenty eight
Ha, get in the damn car. I'm sure Faith loved that. William was probably saying in his head that it's not right to hit a girl. Have to admit, Faith was a major pain in this chapter. She needed to be slapped. Buffy was no better, but then again she never is when she's drunk. Although it is always amusing. And my god, Drusilla was one crazy bitch. Not that she was ever all that sane, but I'm glad William told her off. I was wondering if he was ever gonna become Spike in this, or is he just gonna stay William? Either way is fine. Great chapter, can't wait for more=)
[Report This]Date: 12/21/2005 - 09:21 pm Title: Twenty eight
glad that william came to the rescue
[Report This]Date: 12/20/2005 - 12:42 am Title: Twenty seven
Fantastic chapter... finally some of that unresolved stuff is... resolved. ;D And William is so sweet too... all the love and fear of letting Buffy go.
More more more please!
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2005 - 11:13 pm Title: Twenty seven
Wow - even though that wasn't exactly a break up... I still feel like something has been lost. It was very well written, enough so that it brought back memories of actual breakups - complete with the gripping feeling in the pit of the stomach! :) Maybe if I had been half as mature as this Buffy is being at age 20, I wouldn't have been the vicitm of said breakups! HA HA!!!
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2005 - 10:58 pm Title: Twenty seven
Love the song lyric you ended with -- that was great. Glad that everyone's on tthe same page now : )
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2005 - 09:41 pm Title: Twenty seven
Well that wasn't the horrible blow up - Buffy screw up that I was expecting. Maybe there's hope for here yet....................?
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2005 - 09:34 pm Title: Twenty six
Thank you for clarifying why Buffy has been pulling away. She and William need to have some serious conversations. He would be hurt if she asked him to back off a little, but it might be what she needs for a while. I'm glad she finally opened up to someone, and Willow gave her good advice.
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2005 - 08:55 pm Title: Twenty seven
I LOVE this story! It's so good, and I'm so happy Buffy finally got her problems out in the open. Also, I'm guessing there won't be much, or any, smut for a while, huh? Not a bad thing, if I want some, I can just read an earlier chapter again! Haha. Well, anyway, keep writing, give your muse some chocolate or something. Happy Holidays!
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2005 - 04:30 pm Title: Twenty seven
that was really beautifully writen .... I just love this story!
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2005 - 04:18 pm Title: Twenty seven
Well, it's looks like our Buffy is growing up and learing a fine lesson in relationships......talk, be honest....it may hurt but the truth can sometimes set you free to stop back and reveal waht you really feel and what you might want.........great chapter
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2005 - 04:08 pm Title: Twenty seven
That was the best thing that could have happened..I'm glad you had them talking. Can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve for our favorite couple.
Great job!
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2005 - 03:32 pm Title: Twenty seven
Great chapter! I'm glad Buffy went to talk to William. I feel so bad for William.
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2005 - 03:00 pm Title: Twenty seven
That was an intense chapter. Whew! It made my stomach all tight when I was reading it. Poor William! My reaction would have been to run away and hide in my room if somebody told me I was too intense. Great Story!
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2005 - 03:00 pm Title: Twenty seven
An almost break up... almost. Buffy is hard to get, huh? William still has some work to do to be with her.. or better: Buffy has some work to do to be with William. Because it's her that has the problem.
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2005 - 02:53 pm Title: Twenty six
Mmm maybe Buffy fears falling in love with William (according to what she said to Willow). Well then there's still hope for Spuffy ;-)
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2005 - 02:46 pm Title: Twenty five
*gg* I feel with Buffy - this talk with her mum must be a bit awkward. Ah.. Buffy, yeah. She'll go out with Willow, will work in her Dad's office.. she is really slipping to William fingers when he can't do something against it.
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2005 - 02:32 pm Title: Twenty seven
im UBER glad they didnt break up. i was almost in tears when she was telling him how confused she was about things i dont know how blubbery id be if they actually broke up!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2005 - 02:22 pm Title: Twenty seven
great update
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2005 - 02:17 pm Title: Twenty seven
oooh lovely chapter!
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2005 - 02:08 pm Title: Twenty seven
In the many ways this could have gone, this was the most tame one. I'm glad your making Buffy mature about this and I'm glad your making William understanding.
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2005 - 01:35 pm Title: Twenty seven
You break my heart...
Author's Response: In a good way or a bad way?
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2005 - 07:04 am Title: Twenty six
Great chapter! Looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2005 - 05:27 am Title: Twenty six
Great chapter, more soon please! ;)