[Report This]Date: 11/30/2005 - 10:03 am Title: Chapter Three
Guess, Buffy is walking here on a borderline., really angsty, but very well thought out!!! Just one question, will we get to know details of Dawn's murder or will that be unimportant to the course of the story? I'm just curious...
Author's Response: Yes she is walking the fence....and yes to the Dawn murder, it is very important.......
[Report This]Date: 11/30/2005 - 03:11 am Title: Chapter Three
Really enjoying this story. But Spike soooooo would have been kicked out of that house by now.
Author's Response: LOL, no, Dru sees him as her ticket out.....doctors wife.....and making Dru cry.....even Hank will bite his tongue off before upsetting the princess of the castle......and Joyce, well you will see about Joyce soon. So can't kick him out......YET, LOL
[Report This]Date: 11/30/2005 - 02:51 am Title: Chapter Three
So dark and angsy..but very good! Just love this story so far..You can't help but feel such sympathy for Buffy..Oooo I can't wait till Dru is exposed! : -)
Author's Response: DaniD's mission....expose Dru....yep....placed on want list for christmas, LOL.....good to see ya back......
[Report This]Date: 11/30/2005 - 02:39 am Title: Chapter Three
Gah, I hate Dru and her whole damn family *grumbles*
Author's Response: and the dog too if they had one....LOL...Good to see you're still with me......
[Report This]Date: 11/29/2005 - 11:07 pm Title: Chapter Two
interesting story
Author's Response: And I do THANK you for sharing that it interests you..... : )
[Report This]Date: 11/29/2005 - 04:15 pm Title: Chapter Two
Great start to this story. Interested to see where it goes. The writing is excellent. Very high quality (though a few typos do detract). I'll definitely be coming back for more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and pointing out there are typo's.....interested in pointing them out so I can fix them? Me and my beta do try the best we can...LOL, honest....and I would love to hear from you and anyone else's comments or observations.
[Report This]Date: 11/29/2005 - 03:24 pm Title: Chapter Two
Love it - Angel and Darla seems to be decent friends. We haven't meet Faith yet. And Spike as a stranger comes into the house and sees more then her parents? What a pity - for her parents. Dru seems so dislike Buffy anyway. Is she jealous of her? I don't know. But I love this one - and I promise to try to catch up with your other fic!
Author's Response: I'm going to try and arrange a few characters differently in this one.. Dru has issues with issues that's for sure....Good to see you on board.....take care
[Report This]Date: 11/29/2005 - 03:15 pm Title: Chapter One
I'm still behind reading *ducks head - and betaing too, I'm bad* but I'll start this one too. I know I'm bad. And I reread Babies Daddy in German :-D Uh-huh.. Dark fic? I'll try it.
Oh my - a really dark start and heartbreaking - Dawn died and Buffy's parents thinks it's her fault - but Dru didn't watch her. And Buffy broke. *reading on*
Author's Response: Wow, Babies Daddy in German....so cool......I took it in High School and remember barely the basic. Buffy is broken and needs a handy man.....
[Report This]Date: 11/29/2005 - 10:51 am Title: Chapter Two
I really don't know what to say. This fic is making me unable to formulate a clear thought for me to type up. I really like this
Author's Response: WOW, I don't know what to say either, but I do Thank you for sharing your review with me....it makes my fingers feel good all their hard work is being recognized.....
[Report This]Date: 11/29/2005 - 07:30 am Title: Chapter Two
Great take off! Really promising story. Guess, there will be some Dru bashing in the future...
Update soon!
Author's Response: LOL, I read Dru bashing and had to giggle......Thank you for the review and hope to hear more from you....and others......
[Report This]Date: 11/29/2005 - 12:53 am Title: Chapter Two
good update but i hope that she and spike get closer
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.....you let me know what you think future down the road.........
[Report This]Date: 11/29/2005 - 12:35 am Title: Chapter Two
please,please, please, post the next chapter soon. i have really falling in love with you story and its only chapter 2.
Author's Response: Thank you and I've now posted number 3, enjoy
[Report This]Date: 11/29/2005 - 12:32 am Title: Chapter Two
wow!! love the angst!! can't wait for more!! please update soon!! thanx!!
Author's Response: yes, angst is good.....and more is coming and THANK you for taking the time to review......it means much.
[Report This]Date: 11/28/2005 - 11:10 pm Title: Chapter Two
Ugh, and she hasn't run away from these assholes yet why? *rolls eyes*
Author's Response: NO, she won't says it would ruin the story if she did......darn girl, LOL.. Thanks for taking the time to give me your review......
[Report This]Date: 11/28/2005 - 10:38 pm Title: Chapter Two
i love this amazing story and it's only the second chapter. dru is a bitch. joyce is a bitch and hank is a dickhead. loved it though. glad spike is seeing right through buffy's 'disinterested act'. maybe he can help fix her cuz she is way broken. please post soon. great job. loved. it.
Author's Response: Thank you and I hope you continue to love it......LOL....Spike is a special man......and fate does lead us down some bumpy roads full of detours
[Report This]Date: 11/28/2005 - 05:59 pm Title: Chapter One
well.....damn. Wow!! Gosh!! Woah!! There are more words to describe this story but I'll just stick with these: great job!!! please post soon. wonder if spike had anything to do with this. hmmmm? pleae continue
Author's Response: I will come out and say.....I can't tell you who did it, LOL....but I so appreciate the review....it makes me happy...and my fingers happy.....
[Report This]Date: 11/28/2005 - 03:40 am Title: Chapter One
wicked cool love the emotion and it is really good, keep writing
Author's Response: Thank you for the review and the encouragment to write more.....it makes my fingers happy to know their work is noticed.......
[Report This]Date: 11/28/2005 - 02:04 am Title: Chapter One
ohhhhhhh, poor thing.... i'm not even the middle child but i know how it is to be treated like that *hugs buffy*
Author's Response: Yes, having not been the middle child.....I'm going more on my cousins complaining about it, LOL. Thanks so much for the review...it does get read....and appreciated.
[Report This]Date: 11/28/2005 - 01:43 am Title: Chapter One
good so far but i wonder what happened to dawn?
Author's Response: It will come out......just haven't decided how much of what happened to her will.....
[Report This]Date: 11/27/2005 - 10:39 pm Title: Chapter One
great story. please don't keep us waiting for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I will do my best, this one won't leave my head....LOL
[Report This]Date: 11/27/2005 - 10:27 pm Title: Chapter One
Oh, God! This chapter was hearbreaking, very well written and I just can't wait to find out what's happening now.
Author's Response: Thank you, and I hope it continues to interest you.....
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