Reviews For Broken Betrayal
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Reviewer: alex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 - 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 - 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Definitely more! This sounds interesting

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 - 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

I read the other comment too. And there I wondered you did accidently wrote that I want to feel your fangs as I come because she had no way to notice that Spike was a vampire. Interesting... looking forward to find out where it will lead.

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 - 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

good story so far but it is really confusing and throwing me off

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 - 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

wow!!! wish it had happened like that before. lol. loved it. you have got to post soon....now would be good. great job. loved it.

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 - 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like it looking forward to much more.

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 - 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Interesting concept. I am confused though, partway through the sex, did she become Buffy again? All of a sudden she started calling him Spike and talking about memories of killing the Master?

Author's Response: Very good. I was worried no one would catch that.

Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 - 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

I ike ths so far, and can't wait for more.

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