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Reviewer: veronica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2006 - 09:49 pm Title: William and Elizabeth

hey hey i like this fic so far really sad but really good too anyway i was wondering if your gonna start updating La Cosa Nostra: La Familia Vampire soon i miss this fic so much it s rally good

Author's Response: Thank you. I updated LNLF a couple of days ago. Please go check it out. spuf

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2006 - 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 4: 'Dreams In Paradise; Nightmares In Hell'

I like how this one is going, or at least how I think its going. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you. I think you probably have the next chapter pretty well figured out. Here's a hint: I have never felt that anyone on earth could pull Buffy out of 'real' Heaven. I understood how Buffy may have thought she was in Heaven; she was loved; she was done. There you have it. In the next chapter, I hope to, well, let's just say I hope to right some wrongs that I feel were made on BTVS in season 5 & 6. spuf

Reviewer: Jess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2006 - 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 4: 'Dreams In Paradise; Nightmares In Hell'

I really do like this story and I hate to be fussy, but you change Buffy and William's titles 3 times by the first 2 chapters. William is an Earl and then a Baron and then a Lord and Buffy is a Duchess but her mother is only a Lady and her dad is then a Lord. Buffy's parents are either Lord and Lady or Duke and Duchess and Buffy would always be Lady until her dad died. Sorry to sound picky and I know English titles are confusing, I just wanted to point it out! Apart from this, this story is really good and I don't want you to think that what I just said was a criticism, it was just something that was annoying me! Sorry for the long post!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, no offense taken at all. I was under the mistaken impression that that Lord and Lady covered a multitude of titles. Mea Culpa and I apologize. I'm afraid I should have studied and investigated my sources a bit more. I understand how things like this can annoy readers (especially knowledgeble ones) and I really do appreicate you pointing it out. Yes, I'm afraid English titles are a bit out of my league, but next time, I will try harder to get them right. Thanks again, spuf

Reviewer: anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2006 - 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 3: 'Heaven; In So Many Aspects'

more please

Author's Response: More on the way. I'm really having a problem writing the angst for some reason. I mean, it's supposed to be very painful, emotionally, and I'm having a heck of a time with it. Thank you, spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2006 - 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 3: 'Heaven; In So Many Aspects'

You're welcome ~ I had it in my LJ memories :) That's a sweet story I enjoy reading after all the angst chapters. And a nice surprise at the end :) But they worked hard for it, innit? ;-)

Author's Response: Thank you for sticking with this. I'm in the final stages of the next chapter, where the real angst begins and I'm kind of having a tough time with it? Anyway, thank you and keep up your hope. spuf

Reviewer: Suzee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2006 - 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 3: 'Heaven; In So Many Aspects'

You're very evil for saying that there's this surprise then not really getting to it ;) Like the chapter though and hope you update it soon--and hey, I did a story that was supposed to be barely 1000 words, it's 6 chapters :) So, see, you're doing better

Author's Response: The surprise was the baby, at least in this chapter. And yes, I can't seem to stop writing this one! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2006 - 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 3: 'Heaven; In So Many Aspects'

please dont make this a short story

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm afraid I couldn't make it too short to save my life! spuf

Reviewer: Suzee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2006 - 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'Will and Lizzy'

You say that writing Buffy as a prostiute would be easy...but let me jsut say even things close to that are actually pretty hard ;) And that's all I'm saying

You did really well with this though; you can write such sweet Spuffy stories..then yhou aslo did BR:SS that wasn't sweet but that I just love..so see, you're just great :)

Author's Response: Thanks. Stick with it, please, it will get really twisty! spuf

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2006 - 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 3: 'Heaven; In So Many Aspects'

Sweet chapter. I really enjoyed reading about William and Lizzy's honeymoon. Loved the suprise at the end of the chapter. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Yes, I wanted to show the 'connection' that Will and Lizzy have. It will prove to be very important later! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Suzee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2006 - 01:42 pm Title: William and Elizabeth

See, you say the final chapter is next..but there are three ;) Just going to have to go read it...this was a really sweet start though...and I'll llook forward to any TKTHH updates :)

Author's Response: I know. I never seem to be able to shut the hell up! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'Will and Lizzy'

Poor Buffy - will get a prostitute next time! .. Love reading it. *gg* So Cecily owns a whore house this time? :) Cute this shy unsure Buffy. Looking forward to what you have in mind with this story.

Author's Response: I really do have a prostitute Buffy story in mind, but I have to finish my other fics first. Anyway, I hope I can make the twist somewhat believable for you readers! Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'Will and Lizzy'

Yay, you updated!! Little nervous about what's to come, but I'm sure it'll be a fun ride :)

Author's Response: Thanks. Don't be too nervous, but there will be angst. Of course since this is a Spuffy fiction you know things have to turn out somewhat okay, right? spuf

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'Will and Lizzy'

i missed the first chapter, so i had to read both...awesome story!! i loved it!! can't wait for that twist... which i must say i've no idea what it is...even if you said there were clues, i was oblivious to them :S anyhow... can't wait for the next update!! please do so soon...the mistery is killind me :P

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm going to drop a few hint right here: Heavenly; 'feeling alive for the first time' are two hints. I hate to give away too much, so... spuf

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 11:50 am Title: Chapter 2: 'Will and Lizzy'

Well, I for one think you did an awesome job with this, first times are really harder to write and this was sweet and tender and gave us a glimpse into what their life together will be. I can't wait to find out what the twist you're taunting us with is. More, please?

Author's Response: Thank you. I tend to write sex scenes sappy or a little bizzare. I try to write Buffy as a non-virgin in most of them in some way. However, being this time and era? I was kind of stuck. I say kind of because I could have actually had her be somewhat experienced, but that would be giving away part of the upcoming twist. Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 03:44 am Title: Chapter 2: 'Will and Lizzy'

I think you did a great job with William and Lizzy's wedding night. Fantastic chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you. We have to remember the time and place of this fiction. People had many different ideas and thoughts on sex, but then again, maybe it's like my Grandmother told me: There's nothing new under the sun! spuf

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 12:40 am Title: Chapter 2: 'Will and Lizzy'

great story so far

Author's Response: Thank you. spuf

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2006 - 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 2: 'Will and Lizzy'

I guess it's traditional, but it doesn't have to hurt the first time. It all depends on compatible...size, and how relaxed you are, and turned on.

Author's Response: True, I have heard various stories about this. Like I said, I can't even remember, so I guess it might be like child birth pain? LOL Thanks, spuf

Reviewer: Elanor Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2005 - 11:45 pm Title: William and Elizabeth

Awww -cuteness. I like it!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm afraid by the end the cuteness will be gone, but I think you may enjoy it overall. spuf

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2005 - 04:04 pm Title: William and Elizabeth

Awww! This chapter was so sweet. I loved how Elizabeth and William's love just permeates the story and how happy (and nervous) they are of getting married. I can't wait to read more of it.

Author's Response: Thank you. Young true love is so sweet and wonderful. They're nervous all right, but by chapter 3 there will be something to be truly nervous about! spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2005 - 09:41 am Title: William and Elizabeth

Awe - so sweet! I wonder what the twist will be ~ maybe the reward for a certain slayer and her vampire? I'll find out in the next part :)

Author's Response: Thanks. Yes, a big big twist. We'll have to see what it is. spuf

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2005 - 11:35 pm Title: William and Elizabeth

Aw so cute :) Cant' wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks. I have to warn you, though, by chapter 3, the angst will hit full force. spuf

Reviewer: letitia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2005 - 07:54 pm Title: William and Elizabeth

I am intrigued. I can't wait to read and find out where this is headed.

Author's Response: Thank you. There will a new chapter up on this fic, probably tonight, 1/2/06. spuf

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2005 - 07:22 pm Title: William and Elizabeth

Great start. You really piqued my curiosity about the twist that's coming in the next chapter. I look forward to read more. ~ I wish you a very safe and happy holiday too! ~


Author's Response: Thank you. I feel so bad for taking so long to respond to reviews for this fic. I've been gone on holiday and started another chapter of this one while away. Have a great year, spuf

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