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Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2006 - 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

I was wondering if this story would get taken up again. Like it so far...save Buffy!...as if you wouldn't.

Author's Response: ^-^ Of course. Yeah, I liked this story to much to just let it die, even if I'm taking a hiatus... Though I'm going to come back for good this summer...

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2006 - 04:16 pm Title: 6 - Bronze

Andrew is Buffy’s (twin-) brother? I didn’t expect this. And Buffy is going out with Angel again. Hopefully Spike can 'save her' in time before Buffy gets Angel's next plaything.

Author's Response: Of course. And I'm glad you like enough to comment every chapter... lol

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2006 - 04:15 pm Title: 5 - Intruder

I wonder who the intruder was. And Buffy is still going out with Angel even if she thinks his friends are weird.

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Date: 05/13/2006 - 03:59 pm Title: Homecoming

I see: play-toys. That did Spike mean. Buffy is a bit stubborn, huh? Now she is going with Angel, still continuing to hate Spike for whatever reason.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2006 - 03:51 pm Title: 3 - Attack of the Zombies

Shopping.. Buffy must be hungry by now because she didn't eat any pizza. It really looks like these two (Buffy and Spike) are always fighting. I wonder why Buffy doesn't like Spike. We'll see, huh?

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2006 - 03:45 pm Title: 2 - Reasons

So there is a story behind Spike. I wonder what he did mean when Buffy went dancing with Angel "If she knew..."

Reviewer: StrawberryJam Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2006 - 03:42 pm Title: 6 - Bronze

This has me intrigued... can here be some Angel bashing? Please? LOVED IT SO FAR KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: :D Thanks for the enthusiasm. ^-^ Maybe if you're nice and review, there will be plenty of Angel-bashing. lol

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2006 - 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

I liked the first chapter :)

Reviewer: effection Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2006 - 09:52 pm Title: Homecoming

i really like your characterizations of the characters. The conversations are great. good story, can't wait for the next chap.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2006 - 04:52 pm Title: Homecoming

Great chapter! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2006 - 08:40 am Title: Homecoming

Curious. I'm definitely curious now, what does Angel and his friends have up their sleeves?

Love the chapter, please update soon!

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2006 - 03:11 am Title: Homecoming

if you make angel into a jerk this story, please let buffy kick his ass around just a little? i can't wait to read more of your story! i can't wait to see what happens at the dance, will buffy and spike dance?

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2006 - 11:52 pm Title: 3 - Attack of the Zombies

good update

Reviewer: sandra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2006 - 02:42 am Title: 3 - Attack of the Zombies

more, more, more Please!!!!!

Reviewer: Isabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2006 - 11:48 pm Title: 3 - Attack of the Zombies

I'm glad Spike is getting along with Xander. They're cute together playing zombies lol. To be honest with you, I usually avoid high school AU fics, but this one is fun. Keep writing and I'll keep reviewing ;)

Reviewer: Isabel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2006 - 11:32 pm Title: 2 - Reasons

Poor little Spikey, all alone in the world. Well, at least he's got a good reason to act like a jerk. So, not only is Buffy going the the dance with Riley, but she's dancing with Angel *gag* Argh, that poor girl has no taste in men. I hope Spike saves her from a lifetime of boredom with Poofter and Cardboard. lol Good chapter.

Reviewer: Isabel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2006 - 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hehe, funny. Of course Spike was gonna be an ass :::shakes head::: poor Buffy.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2006 - 09:55 pm Title: 3 - Attack of the Zombies

Great fic! Please update soon!

Reviewer: Mariana Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 - 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

really funny and great start!! keep it up!! thanx

Reviewer: letitia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 - 04:41 pm Title: 3 - Attack of the Zombies

wonder what will happen next???

Reviewer: luxferi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 - 01:42 am Title: 3 - Attack of the Zombies

OK, um... I think I got a couple of things to say. 1) I love your fic, yeah the high school thing is done before but I still like reading any spuffy fic and it's well done, and 2) there's an inconsistency about Riley. In the first chapter Buffy already told Willow and Xander that she was going to Homecoming with Riley, but in this chapter Willow acted like she didn't know. Plus she said this:

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“You said you weren’t going with him, though.”

“When did I say that?”

“Yesterday.”

“Oh yeah.”
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which confuses me, because I couldn't find it on any other chapter.

Um... just my two cents worth. But other than that, I like the fic! Please keep writing and hope you won't hate me so much for pointing the inconsistency out!


Author's Response: ack! thank you for pointing that out! i should probably get that fixed up, huh? thanks! and thanks for enjoying. i really hadn't noticed that mistake, which must mean i was lazy to have not caught it... i'll get that straightened out. sorry!

Reviewer: Smitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 - 12:55 am Title: 3 - Attack of the Zombies

LOLpoor Spike always gets such a hard time

Reviewer: Smitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 - 12:39 am Title: Chapter 1

LOL very cute I'm liking this alot

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