[Report This]Date: 08/11/2014 - 10:36 am Title: Beginnings and Endings
Really enjoy your writing. Well done and it flows so well. A number of minor word errors, but other than that, so well written. Only wish we got more of Spike and Buffy's romance established.
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2009 - 09:09 am Title: Beginnings and Endings
i luved the way you structured this story and how its written!
[Report This]Date: 03/22/2008 - 01:18 am Title: Beginnings and Endings
oh my friggin gosh. i just read this entire thing in one sitting. did you know you are a master? though i was really hoping for a spuffy kiss at the end... but hey, i'll take what you give! your work is simply amazing!
~LIz
[Report This]Date: 09/28/2007 - 12:46 pm Title: Beginnings and Endings
Oh I loved the end.
[Report This]Date: 09/28/2007 - 12:40 pm Title: Rescues
oh that was good.
[Report This]Date: 09/28/2007 - 12:20 pm Title: Covert Operations
oh can't wait to see what happens.
[Report This]Date: 09/28/2007 - 12:12 pm Title: Turning Points
OH Wonder what is wrong with Spike.
[Report This]Date: 09/28/2007 - 12:04 pm Title: Taking Up The Sword
Yep I would be too.
[Report This]Date: 09/28/2007 - 11:54 am Title: Unfulfilled Dreams
oh I feel sorry for Buffy right now.
[Report This]Date: 09/28/2007 - 11:26 am Title: Ambushes
OH Spike probably got her out just in time to keep them both safe.
[Report This]Date: 09/28/2007 - 11:22 am Title: Conditioned Responses
BUffy was so right.
[Report This]Date: 09/28/2007 - 11:14 am Title: Acts of Desperation
Oh I can't wait to see what happens when Buffy and Spike meet again after their visits to the gardens
[Report This]Date: 09/28/2007 - 11:08 am Title: Converging Paths
Oh I wonder what Spike is getting from his sword
[Report This]Date: 09/28/2007 - 10:59 am Title: Mortal Enemies
OH I am so glad Willow asked to look before they called Angel.
[Report This]Date: 09/28/2007 - 10:47 am Title: Promises Made and Kept
OH I just wonder when.
[Report This]Date: 09/28/2007 - 10:02 am Title: Endings and Beginnings
So in comes Spike, please say Spike and not Angel.
[Report This]Date: 11/08/2006 - 10:07 am Title: Beginnings and Endings
A magnificently crafted complex tale. I just loved it. Even though you say you don't plan a sequel I'd love a little epilogue to see how Buffy breaks up with Riley ,and what happens in your version of Hush with Buffy & Spike fighting together against the Gentlemen. After all Riley doesn't know that Buffy was his invisible assailant...
Author's Response: I'm not going to say that I will never write a sequel, because never is a long time, but I'm focused on some other projects right now (FaFT, a new plot bunny that has been driving me up the wall, and the ever-acursed thesis). In the meantime, I'm glad you liked this one. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 05/24/2006 - 09:36 pm Title: Beginnings and Endings
Read this story and really enjoyed it. Thanks for such a wonderful read.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 03/12/2006 - 06:42 pm Title: Beginnings and Endings
Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful tale with us. I had a great time reading it.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it so much. Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 03/12/2006 - 07:30 am Title: Endings and Beginnings
Ok, um...I don't know her penname, but I remember that she wrote a story starting with Tru dying, and then going backwards to explain what happened. Rest assured, though, that I loved your story because of the plot and everything else and not just bec. of its similarity to another. Hee!
Author's Response: Hmm. I'll have to go out and look around. I was just curious. I'm glad you liked the fic though. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 03/08/2006 - 02:45 pm Title: Beginnings and Endings
What a well plotted, fascinating story. You did an excellent job jumping back and forth in time while keeping the action and characters clear. Takeshi, Kaede and Ichiro were all vividly written original characters, and your attention to detail in both time lines strongly set each scene .
Spike and Buffy were always in character, even after mentally acknowledging their bond. I like that the softening emotions between them barely colored the story, leaving their future together up to the readers' imaginations. I wish I had discovered this while it was being written, but I was delighted to stumble upon the completed story. Thanks for taking such care with this.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this one. It was kind of scary for me to post because I didn't know how the timelines and large chunk set in the past would be taken, but it seems to have turned out well enough. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 03/04/2006 - 03:13 pm Title: Beginnings and Endings
wow. i enjoyed that story so much. i liked how you started from one point and moved it back with the first couple of the story and then moved it forward with spike and buffy at the same time.
Author's Response: Thanks! The time jumping was a tangle to keep straight, but it was fun to write too. I'm glad you liked it.
[Report This]Date: 03/04/2006 - 12:34 am Title: Endings and Beginnings
Lol, very typical Buffy characteristics, and I love the Japanese samurai era touch. Love the Orochi name; That's the name of 1 of my fav evil guys from the game King of Fighters. Lmao.
Loving this story so far, thanks for sharing! :)
Rgds,
Jen
Author's Response: I actually took Orochi from Japanese mythology, but ever since I've been finding references about monsters and bad guys from all kinds of stories and mediums. It's kind of fun. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 03/03/2006 - 05:12 pm Title: Beginnings and Endings
Lovely....just lovely! I fell in love with your Japanese characters (and would love a story about Akare and Katsuo and the way they chose to die yet be born as undead to be together.)
I couldn't wait for this to update on BSV and followed here. So glad I did.
Please continue to write these wonderfully told tales.
Kathleen (Pfeifferpack)
Author's Response: I think writing a story about Akane and Katsuo would be very interesting. Now I'm going to have to go ponder. I'm glad you liked the story so much. I'll be writing another fic pretty soon as long as real life doesn't continue throwing me curve balls. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 03/02/2006 - 11:37 am Title: Beginnings and Endings
awsome story. any chance we see where buffy and spike go from there?
Author's Response: No plans for a sequel as of right now. Sorry. But thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it.