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Reviewer: Miranda Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2013 - 02:48 pm Title: Epilogue

Cute story but kind of an abrupt ending

Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2013 - 03:14 am Title: Epilogue

A good little story. I think it moved a bit too fast in the beginning, I would have found it a bit more believable if they'd courted a bit longer before William decided he was in love with her, but overall it was a sweet Christmas fantasy, and I enjoyed it quite a lot.

Author's Response: Yeah, definitely not my most realistic portrayal. At the time, I really wanted something fluffy to keep my mind of the angst-ridden fics that were getting increasingly more difficult to write. I also wanted to keep it short, which is why things moved SO quickly. But I'm glad you did enjoy it and glad you shared your thoughts. Thank you.

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2013 - 12:52 am Title: Epilogue

Lovely, Thanks for finishing this.

Author's Response: No, thank you for reading and reviewing. :-)

Reviewer: MrsGooglyBear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2012 - 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 6

Hope you write the Epilogue soon!!! I love it!! Can't wait!!! (:

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2010 - 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 6

This was such a great story but where is the epilogue we were expecting. Pleae tie up those loose ends. gotta know what happens.

Reviewer: quirks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2008 - 12:38 am Title: Chapter 6

this was lovely and cute and definitely grin inducing! thanks!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2008 - 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 6

Yay :) Good to see an update :))
Enjoyed the hotness :)
Even the angst too. Loved the reaction of the children. And I really hope Angel gets in trouble / loose the rights to visit his children because that would be better for his children anyway.

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 09:16 am Title: Chapter 6

Wow Jae, of your 3 wips and your 3 Williams i think i'm adorin' this one the most. He is too precious for words. I just know that as time goes on there is a tiger waiting to emerge. They complete each other and you do such a great job of showing that.

Thanks for such a great, awesome, wonderful story. I'm hoping that the Epilogue isn't a year or so off, but if that is the case then i know it will rock!

Love ya, love your stories.

Kimmie

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2008 - 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 6

Can't wait for the epilogue!

Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2008 - 06:22 am Title: Chapter 6

Wow, great to see this back, I missed it. loved the update. hope Angel looses all his visitation rights. Spike is a far better father. loved it, brilliant

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2008 - 03:13 am Title: Chapter 6

SOOOOOOOOOOO excited to see an update on this story! Excellent chapter. Can't wait for the epilogue!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2008 - 02:43 am Title: Chapter 6

This chapter had so many interesting scenes in it, and they were all very entertaining. The interaction between William and Buffy and the kids was wonderful. Good update!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2008 - 01:35 am Title: Chapter 6

Awwww!

And OMG, Angel and that bitch!!! Buffy should take a picture of Dawn's face, as there's no way in hell Angel's keeping his visitation rights....

So cool that the kids like William right away.

Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2008 - 01:11 am Title: Chapter 6

WHOOT! 100!

*laughs*

I still love Connor's reaction!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2008 - 12:53 am Title: Chapter 6

LOL THEY ARE SOOO CUTE!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i CANT believe that bitch hit dawn and i hope that angel doesnt get to see them again until he can actually take care of them. im so happy that theyre all happy and that they can finally be a family. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i cant wait to see how it ends. THANX

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2008 - 12:18 am Title: Chapter 6

Okay, first of all, Buffy had me cheering very loudly when she ripped into that skank, bitch had it coming for daring to touch her child. And then William got more cheers when he socked Angel, that was just excellent. Bastard doesn't know anything about being a father, but I have a feeling William would make a great one. I was glad to see an update, can't wait for the epilogue=)

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2008 - 04:13 am Title: Chapter 3

Great chapter :)

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2008 - 03:58 am Title: Chapter 2

Well done!

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2008 - 03:47 am Title: Chapter 1

Well done

Reviewer: djonie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2007 - 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 5

Love it! I really hope you'll update soon! Happy New Year!

Reviewer: djonie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2007 - 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

lovely start!

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2007 - 12:20 am Title: Chapter 5

I started reading this one last year. So happy to see an update & to read that it's going to be finished soon. Great little story! I like it a lot!

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2007 - 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 5

awesome story so far:) cant wait for the next update:)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2007 - 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oh update! Just in time for Christmas :)
*rereads last chapter*
Ah now I know what's the what about the question. No wonder things got so wrong first. I'm glad that they solved the misunderstanding.
Otherwise? Very hot :)

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2007 - 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 5

THAT was worth the wait!! Merry HoHoHos!!!

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