[Report This]Date: 11/27/2007 - 04:23 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Very hot! ;) Absolutely loved! Please update soon :)
[Report This]Date: 11/27/2007 - 03:04 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Ooo, snarly Spike's coming out to play! I wonder if he had just come back from feeding or something, and that's why he was still in game face. Excellent chapter! The true confessions part was so sweet, both of them admitting that they're falling. And I like that you've written this in Buffy's POV only. The mystery surrounding Spike is really enjoyable and I'm content for it to last as long as possible. Looking forward to more!
[Report This]Date: 11/27/2007 - 02:35 pm Title: Chapter Ten
My, my, my... what a naughty boy SPike is in the restaurant - I loved it. And hmmm, sounds like someone went to feed and came back home in demon mode a little too horny for his own good. I suppose questions may arise again especially since he said he'd never hurt her. Granted she liked it, but still, he did hurt her and the glowing eyes and rough sex has to have her thinking by now. Bravo sweety, can't wait til the next update.
[Report This]Date: 11/27/2007 - 01:18 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Hmm, seems Buffy just had sex with vamped out Spike in the dark. Did he just come back from a kill, I wonder.
[Report This]Date: 11/27/2007 - 01:15 pm Title: Chapter Nine
I just discovered this fic today, and I must say I'm enjoying it immensely! I loved this chapter with Anya, matter of factly stating that Spike must be a vampire. I laughed out loud at some parts.
[Report This]Date: 11/27/2007 - 01:11 pm Title: Chapter Ten
*gg* Naughty Spike! (In the restaurant).
In a way Spike isn't what he seems to be (but Buffy doesn't believe that he is a vampire). So he is completely not what she thinks he is when it comes to be human. The other things? I think this shoe fits :) Spike is for Buffy what she thinks he is (loving her, caring for her).
Mmmmh I wonder where Spike has been when Buffy woke up alone. Spike reacted different when he was back (primal, almost).
Enjoyed :)
[Report This]Date: 11/27/2007 - 11:01 am Title: Chapter Ten
Damn that's....that's hot. Can't wait to get into Spike's mind. ;)
[Report This]Date: 11/27/2007 - 08:25 am Title: Chapter Ten
Awesome update!! Don't worry about what people say about Spike's POV. You're doing an awesome job and i can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 11/27/2007 - 06:50 am Title: Chapter Ten
Great chapter - very hot - but here we all are expecting Buffy to say "oh yeah the bloke I'm sleeping with is a Vampire". If someone told me my boyfriend was a Vampire I'm sure I wouldn't accept it. Yeah Spike is getting more violent during sex and far more bitey (is that a word?) but I'm not sure Vampire would be the first thing that came into my mind. We know he's a Vampire so are in on the secret. This is in no way a criticism just an observation - I love this story - and would assume that Spike has just returned from feeding (we must assume he still is because that is what he initially took Buffy for - isn't it?). Am really looking forward to your next update.
[Report This]Date: 11/27/2007 - 03:12 am Title: Chapter Ten
Very good I loved it, and I meant no criticism by asking for Spikes POV, I just love to know what going on in everyones head. Sorry
[Report This]Date: 11/27/2007 - 02:10 am Title: Chapter Ten
Good call with keeping it all with Buffy POV, although I think most of the readers knows what's coming it's just fun following Buffy this way. I find that if an author does several POV and especially the one that is a secret then the whole mystery flies out the window since you can have a character lie to another and conceal his true agenda but you can't really have that if you are inside his head then it's just stupid.
[Report This]Date: 11/27/2007 - 01:59 am Title: Chapter Ten
now what happened while Buffy was asleep to let the demon out i wonder?
loved this psuffyness and kink in this chapter, looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 11/27/2007 - 01:23 am Title: Chapter Ten
This story is so HOT, I think I should stop reading it at work, as I'm the only woman in a department full of men... *blushes*
I can't wait to read what's next, and I adore the way Spike tries to balance his feelings with his needs, as well as how responsive Buffy seems to be even towards his more primal urges!
XXX
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2007 - 11:46 pm Title: Chapter Ten
i like how you've only done it from buffy's pov.....as you said it adds way more mystery to spikes character lol
awesome chapter:) hope you update again soon:)
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2007 - 11:35 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Wow. Bet Buffy's rethinkin' that whole vampire thing again about now. Can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2007 - 11:16 pm Title: Chapter Ten
I LOVE the direction this fic is heading. :) Can't wait for more from this! There is definite mystery surrounding Spike, and it makes me look forward to everything we learn about him. :) Update soon!
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2007 - 10:56 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Thanks for the note at the end - its nice to know you have it all planned out and the fic is going where you want it. Sometimes it is hard to keep them on course.
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2007 - 10:46 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Oh, my! *swoons* I think this was by far the hottest chapter yet, and that's saying something. They're getting a little less vanilla all the time, and I like it!
I wonder if the last bite was different from the rest, in that it will leave some evidence not present from the other ones. I have to admit, I'm embarassingly curious about if he's been biting her with his fangs all along, and if so, why she's only seeing hickeys instead of the usual two hole thing. Or is she, and she's in some really serious denial? I'm sure you will reveal all in good time - I'm just being a perve thinking about the possibilities regarding the bitey goodness of Spike.
Fantabulous chapter, as always!
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2007 - 10:33 pm Title: Chapter Ten
exciting!! i can't wait for some of the inevitable angst :]
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2007 - 10:22 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Yes, Spike POV would be cool, but I can wait until you're ready to let us in on who he really is. I'm more disappointed that Buffy has so little curiosity - or is too insecure - to ask Spike anything about himself. What does he do for a living? Where - other than somewhere in England - is he from? What's he doing in the US? Enquiring minds want to know, why not Buffy?
Sd
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2007 - 09:47 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Still here! Still loving ever bit of it! :D
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2007 - 09:39 pm Title: Chapter Ten
I like just buffy's point of view.
Anyway, Spike is naughty; good! But then he was rough with her, so either you will explain latter or we just see it as Spike being Spike, and no explanation is needed. But you right some really good sex scenes!
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2007 - 09:38 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Well, I like that it's only been from Buffy's POV because it leaves us as much in the dark as Buffy. I think you've done a great job of balancing story and great sex. I look foward to each new chapter.
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2007 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter Ten
I want to once again express how much I adore this fic. It's the best of guilty pleasures. The hot sex doesn't hurt either. As always I look forward to the next chapter.