[Report This]Date: 02/09/2009 - 04:12 pm Title: Los Angeles
I get where Buffy is coming from with Dawn and sex but she's one to talk. She lost her virginity at 17 to a 200 yr. old vamp who was like 11 yrs. older than her in human yrs. So kettle, meet pot. But she does have to talk to her. I did like when she said she's young and probably won't end up with the first guy she sleeps with,too bad the writers never made that observation ,they always kept Angel in the background of Buffy's life UGH I hated that! Loved what Anya told Xander. Go Anya! They definitely should have had her say that in the show.Hopefully Xander will think about some things now. He's a hypocrite.
Good chappie, can't wait for Hank to show up! More soon please. =)
Author's Response: Thanks Ami! I had a whole storyline planned out for the Dawn sex thing, but I'm not sure I'm gonna go that route. I do want to see Dawn make some mistakes. She's not perfect...neither is her sister.
[Report This]Date: 02/09/2009 - 03:49 pm Title: Los Angeles
That conversation didn't go well. Buffy is right but she needs to let Dawn lead her own life and make her own mistakes no matter how bad they are. I am glad that she is going to talk to her about it again and hopefully seeing there dad is a good thing. I loved what Anya said it was perfect and she gave Xander a lot to think about.
Author's Response: Thanks Jenn! I was wondering if I shouldn't write this storyline, but I think it'll be ok in the end. We'll see! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/08/2009 - 04:01 pm Title: Help
Ooo the initiative are back. Hope they can help Spike. Another great chapter :-)
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad ya liked it!
[Report This]Date: 02/08/2009 - 01:49 pm Title: Safe
Yay glad to see Spike back
Author's Response: :)
[Report This]Date: 02/08/2009 - 01:31 pm Title: Light in the Dark
Hmm glad Xander apologised to Tara but he is still being unfair to Buffy, great chapter, loved it :-)
Author's Response: Thanks Laura!
[Report This]Date: 02/06/2009 - 06:32 pm Title: Phone Call
Okay, so for the last two days i've been finding time to sneak away and read this story and I absolutely love it!! This is how I wish season six would have gone! I'm sooo looking forward to an update!! And great job with the banners by the way!!
Author's Response: Awww...thank you! :) I'm happy to hear that! Glad you like the banners too!
[Report This]Date: 02/06/2009 - 02:17 pm Title: The Bronze
Ok first of all i love your story, you are an amazing writer, sometimes i read spuffy stories and i like them but the writing just isnt how it is supposed to be said or isnt like the character, but you make the writing become the character and it is utterly amazing. love this story keep it up xxxx charisma
Author's Response: Wow, Charisma, you have no idea how wonderful it feels to hear something like that. I majored in creative writing in school, so it's nice to hear something like that...believe me! :)
[Report This]Date: 02/06/2009 - 02:15 pm Title: The Bronze
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[Report This]Date: 02/06/2009 - 06:17 am Title: I Love You
Fantastic chapter again, the phone sex was hott and the I Love You was sweet
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 02/05/2009 - 07:35 pm Title: Phone Call
Love how Hank's going to get a full house for Christmas. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: :) Thanks Photography Nut!
[Report This]Date: 02/05/2009 - 07:33 pm Title: Phone Call
Christmas is going to be interetsting with Spike, Buffy and Dawn's boyfriend I have a feeling this will either be really funny or won't go well. I'm glad that Buffy decieded to help Dana if the opportunity comes up i think that she can help Dana recover.
Author's Response: It might be a mixture of very funny and not going well at the same time. :) Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 02/05/2009 - 05:02 pm Title: Phone Call
The chapter was fun :)
And it sounds as if the visit will be fun too (at last for us to read).
Author's Response: :) Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 02/05/2009 - 04:57 pm Title: Phone Call
Can't really see why Buffy would want anything to do with her dad after he let her down so badly, but I can't wait until the inevitable Spike/Hank confrontation....
Quite looking forward to 'meeting' Jake, too.
Author's Response: Thanks! I was very unhappy that Buffy never really got closure with her dad on the show. So, I'm gonna have some talk about Joyce's death and other things. Lots to come soon!
[Report This]Date: 02/05/2009 - 03:34 pm Title: Phone Call
Still reading and still liking!
Author's Response: Thanks Tammy!
[Report This]Date: 02/05/2009 - 03:08 pm Title: Phone Call
Ahhh, the mysterious Dad. Very interesting, surprised you brought him into the story but glad you did. Christmas should be very very interesting, especially with Jake around! :-) Now, how about Buffy's father-figure Giles, will be making a personal appearance soon? Will she be telling him about Spike's soul?
Author's Response: Thanks! :) Yeah, there's gonna be some awkwardness with two couples in the house. Especially when Buffy realizes that her little sis...ok, I'm not gonna go into that here. :-P
[Report This]Date: 02/05/2009 - 02:39 pm Title: Phone Call
Haha. I can just see Spike visiting with Hank, that outta be good! I'm glad they're all going, Buffy needs the closure I think. LOVED Dawn saying that all Buffy's boyfriends were lame, especially Riley! hehe. Truer words were never spoken!
Can't wait for the next chappie, more when you can! :)
Author's Response: Thanks Ami! :) Yeah, Buffy needs the closure. Definitely gonna see her getting into it with him about Joyce.
[Report This]Date: 02/05/2009 - 11:55 am Title: Phone Call
OMG! I can't wait until Hank and Spike are stuck under the same roof together. It's destined to be hilarious! Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks, RB! :) Haha...yeah, it's sure to be awkward, right?
[Report This]Date: 02/05/2009 - 06:27 am Title: Slip of the Truth
Great chapter. Grrr Xander - he is an idiot! I hope he comes around and sees how happy Buffy is with Spike. And that Tara had good reason to leave Willow. Looking forward to fluff :-)
Author's Response: Thanks Laura!
[Report This]Date: 02/05/2009 - 05:08 am Title: No More Secrets
Hmmm ... okay I trust you! This is a brilliant story. You should be proud of it :-)
Author's Response: Aww...thanks so much!
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2009 - 08:11 pm Title: Plans
I'm glad that they caught Dana. I can understand why Buffy said that she wouldn't help Dana but I think that she should help her I think that theres a reason why Dana murdered those people. Surprise about Dawn seeing there dad but i'm glad and i hope it works out and i'm also glad that Tara is going to see williow hopefully they will work out all of there issues.
Author's Response: Thanks Jenn! :) I wanted to bring their dad in, because I always wanted to see some closure for Buffy when it came to her dad.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2009 - 08:08 pm Title: Plans
Love this story, I just wish there was a way for me to get automatic updates so I could read it more often, Can't wait for more it' great!!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks Laura! I'm so happy you like it! I'm having fun with the next chapter. It's much lighter...probably because it doesn't include any Dana stuff. The next couple of chapters will probably be Dana-light or Dana-free. Yay for fluff!
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2009 - 07:52 pm Title: Plans
It was definitely really nice to see Buffy and Spike back together and all sweet and cuddly. It brought out the "Awww" factor. As for Dana, i'm interested to see why Giles can reach her more. Is it because she is connected to Buffy in some way? Also, can't the Council shoot her up with the drugs that they used on Buffy for her Cruciamentum? Well, at least until she is more mentally with it. I also hope that Giles is more accepting than Xander, but I doubt it.
Author's Response: Thanks Demona! The Council's working on her, and she'll be showing more progress in coming chapters. :) I'm glad you're enjoying fluffy Spuffy!
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2009 - 06:30 pm Title: Plans
Dana sounds like bad news. Glad Buffy didn't take the job offer from Travers. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks! Lots more to come soon...though there may be another job offer from Travers soon that she can't refuse...for more than one reason.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2009 - 06:11 pm Title: Plans
That came to my mind, Buffy meeting (helping) Dana. Still not sure how Buffy could have helped, with Dana being crazy. As long as she stays this way she is too dangerous to let lose / be free.
The glue excuse was fun :)
Author's Response: Thanks for your feedback, cordykitten! Dana's definitely a danger...but she and Buffy WILL meet...eventually.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2009 - 04:27 pm Title: Plans
Oh btw I just saw your video on youtube for this story and I LUVED IT!! It was really well done. =)
Author's Response: Oh cool! I'm glad you liked the video! :)
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