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Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2010 - 11:02 pm Title: Comeuppance

Yeah for William and a "nice one" for Justin! Way to take care of the creepy one.

Author's Response: thank you and watch for more revenge and a revelation from Justin

Reviewer: Isha_Rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2010 - 07:11 pm Title: Something Warlock This Way Comes

Fantastic opener. Loved the 'father, please' revelation- perfectly timed and wonderfully unpredictable! A very refreshing opening chapter. Loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much and welcome new reader. All that will come to fruition.

Reviewer: magnus374 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2010 - 12:49 pm Title: Dancing and Deception

There are always some problems for them.

Author's Response: Thank you. you know i had a to do a sprinkle of angst.

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2010 - 01:02 am Title: Dancing and Deception

Hopefully, William and Elisabeth won't be stubborn and will be able to clarify and resolve things. That and they get back at Wellington.

Author's Response: Thank you Anna. Yup you will see some comeuppance.

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2010 - 10:18 pm Title: Dancing and Deception

I love this story--but surely William will be smart enough to suspect something right?

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Watch for the emergence of some Spike-like traits.

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Date: 04/19/2010 - 10:49 am Title: Pratt, William Pratt

I like this William he seems more sure about himself.

Author's Response: Thank you. All on account of his Elisabeth.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2010 - 05:44 pm Title: Pratt, William Pratt

Excellent.

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

Reviewer: BlackDahlia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2010 - 04:05 pm Title: Pratt, William Pratt

Yay, another chapter so soon! You really have an ear for their banter; I loved the "girls dressing like boys" exchange.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I just see her so doing that just to be active and ugghh corsets are pretty but mighty uncomfortable.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2010 - 01:55 pm Title: Pratt, William Pratt

I liked how you showed us William's perspective on what's happened with Buffy even as we learn about his life and thoughts. the writing about issues of the day like the labor laws was a very nice touch. The comparison to the freedom of the mask ball also makes the rudeness in not introducing or even looking at the person to whom you are speaking make a lot of sense and fit William's personality.

I love how William was able to tease Buffy, and banter back with their 'conditions' to go dance together. I can't wait to see more of them! Thank you for updating.

Author's Response: Thank you. The mask was in a way brought on by how folks change personalities sometimes at conventions when they wear a costume. You made my day commenting on the issues, my research. William is a modern thinker and Elisabeth makes him not ashamed of who he is.

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2010 - 11:52 am Title: Pratt, William Pratt

That was too cute and sweet. I enjoy her talk of William to only discover she was talking to him. The innocence and interaction was so well done.

Author's Response: Thank you. I really wanted to capture the Jane Austen innocence thing and the fact that they're both innocent at the time.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2010 - 09:16 pm Title: Pratt, William Pratt

Elizabeth just may get the starch out of William's knickers so that he may enjoy pursuing her. This chapter was really nice to read leading up to their awkward moment. William is really holding himself to standards that are impossibly high for him to court any woman, but with Elizabeth's free spirited ways, he just might be able to break out of the mold to savor a courtship. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you. Buffy's memories may be gone but the modern girl is still there. You will see the effect on him that she has continue to grow. You'll see some of Spike come out to play.

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2010 - 08:51 pm Title: Pratt, William Pratt

I can't for Saturday! Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Will do

Reviewer: Dahlia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2010 - 02:53 am Title: Peonies and Parasols

I read fics on here a lot, but rarely ever review. I think you said this is your first fic. I hope you keep it up. The plot is pretty original and very interesting.

Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! Reviews make my day! I appreciate you taking the time to drop a line.

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2010 - 01:42 am Title: Peonies and Parasols

You have truly wheeled me in and then you just end the chapter at their meeting that is just too cruel.

Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! Reviews make my day and make me update quicker.

Reviewer: iris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2010 - 08:29 pm Title: Peonies and Parasols

This is an interesting twist...I love it! Please continue...

Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! Reviews make my day!

Reviewer: BlackDahlia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2010 - 07:49 pm Title: Peonies and Parasols

I'm really enjoying the easy way you're developing their relationship, and for some reason them doing the reaching-around-the-tree thing just feels perfect. Can't wait to read more ;-).

Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! I was hoping folks would think it romantic and not odd. More about the tree coming.

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2010 - 06:46 pm Title: Peonies and Parasols

Great chapter. I love how you describe the time period and I can't wait to see William's reaction. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! Reviews make my day! I loved period pieces so I had to write one.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2010 - 12:24 pm Title: Peonies and Parasols

Whoops, Buffy!

Very good job describing the time period's entertainment and expectations without any history lessons. The romance here isn't overstated or too easy, either, and I like the realism and slow build between them as strangers. The 'anonymous friend' on the other side of the tree was fun, too, though I wonder how they're next conversation is going to go while Buffy is in trousers.

I'm definitely looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! Reviews make my day! I'm a history buff and I wanted to have a true innocent romance before turning up the steam. I truly appreciate the support more than you realize.

Reviewer: TJ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2010 - 12:01 pm Title: Peonies and Parasols

Oh, I loved that cliffhanger. More, please!

Author's Response: Thank you! Actually all this response is making me update quicker.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2010 - 10:23 am Title: Peonies and Parasols

I love the Sunday picnics with the mystery man - who of course turned out to be William. Hopefully they'll manage to sort out their mutual misunderstandings...

Author's Response: Thank you! I wanted to make them explore a friendship separate from romance!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2010 - 09:50 am Title: Something Warlock This Way Comes

What an intriguing start... you've got me well and truly hooked! By the way, you've repeatedly used 'Bollucks' as Spike's expletive - it should be 'BollOcks'...

Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! Reviews make my day! I changed that just today.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2010 - 03:59 am Title: Peonies and Parasols

Cute story, love the warlock Sid and his match making, time traveling, mind fuzzing abilities. Have alway loved time periods and look forward to more chapters.

Author's Response: Thank you! Reviews make my day! I am a complete history nut.

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2010 - 10:07 pm Title: Peonies and Parasols

I love these very fun scenes in the park! Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! Reviews make my day!

Reviewer: TJ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2010 - 08:41 pm Title: Something Warlock This Way Comes

That's a hell of a plot twist so far and I'm really enjoying it. Hope you do continue!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. Towards the end of the story, you will see it finally come together with Sid when you find out exactly WHAT he is.

Reviewer: BlackDahlia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2010 - 11:57 am Title: Something Warlock This Way Comes

To say I'm intrigued would be an understatement. This is very well-written; please, keep going!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and I'm blushing that you commented on my style.

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