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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2012 - 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 5

Good story. 1st 2 chapters were to heavy on the "telling," too light on "showing" through dialogue. Those chapters also moved a bit too quickly through big changes to give them their proper impact, but I understand you wanted to hurry to the heart of your story (but the result was that they do feel rushed).

The lovemaking is hot, though!

Reviewer: charisse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2011 - 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 5

Yeah, I always thought that a demon who would voluntarily seek a soul probably already had one. Sweet story.

Reviewer: charisse Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2011 - 12:12 am Title: Chapter 5

Good story. Ends well. Thanks.

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Date: 03/24/2011 - 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 2

You're really tweaking the canon on this one. I first noticed it in the previous chapter, when Buffy doesn't care about her friends' reactions. And now look--Willow's been kicked out of the house. You go, gitl!

Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2010 - 11:22 am Title: Chapter 5

very sweet. i liked how their friendship developed slowly, and then it became ... more. very nicely done!

Reviewer: jensing199 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2010 - 02:05 am Title: Chapter 5

Loved it! Great Story!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2010 - 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 5

Good that Spike still has super human strength etc.; this way he is the most helpful for Buffy.
Enjoyed. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2010 - 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 4

Ah the end of Spike's unlife; so he seems to be something between a human and a vampire, maybe able to walk into the sun?
*off to the next part*

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/22/2010 - 12:06 am Title: Chapter 5

Glad they got their happy. Lovely story.

Reviewer: magnus374 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2010 - 08:00 am Title: Chapter 5

This was nice, way better then just getting a soul.

Reviewer: Angels_heart1 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2010 - 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 5

Great story! I loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Reviewer: Angels_heart1 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2010 - 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 3

I love this story! Can't wait to read more! Please update soon, I'm begging!!

Reviewer: tinkerbell Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2010 - 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 3

Please update soon, I like where your story is heading.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2010 - 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 3

Loved the spuffyness - the couply / non-couply way they acted. Fun.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2010 - 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 2

It's good to see Buffy happy because Spike was there to support her. And support she needed badly.

Reviewer: magnus374 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2010 - 10:01 am Title: Chapter 3

Good chapter, nice domestic scene

Reviewer: magnus374 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2010 - 09:54 am Title: Chapter 2

A lot of time went in this chapter, but it's nice that Buffy is clear about what she wants.

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2010 - 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

Like it so far please update soon

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2010 - 10:28 am Title: Chapter 1

Good begin - I like the way the fic started out.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2010 - 06:38 am Title: Chapter 1

This seems nice. It's good that Buffy realise what she needs and that things don't happens to fast.

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