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Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2012 - 07:59 am Title: Chapter 4

I love Spike's voice in this story!

I also love the way Spike is flirting with Buffy. Sniffing her neck, making innuendos. :D It's perfect.


Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2012 - 05:22 am Title: Chapter 4

It's nice to see how they react to each other. I like when they talk about harmles demons, the grey makes things interesting. Seeing Adam and the operation will make it impossible for Buffy to trust the Initiative, good.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2012 - 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 3

This was a good update. I like how Giles and Spike fell into their usual bickering so easily. I really love the dialogue in this story.

Update soon :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you enjoy the rest of it.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2012 - 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 3

More wonderful interaction, I liked how Spike and Giles interacted. And poor Harmony, I do have a soft spot for her.

Author's Response: Poor Harm. Everyone feels sorry for her. :)

Reviewer: sue92178 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2012 - 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 3

Very funny!

Author's Response: *g*

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2012 - 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 2

Very nice character interaction. I really enjoyed how Giles wanted to test the gem.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2012 - 06:25 am Title: Chapter 2

Ha! Perfect Spike-isms in this chapter. I loved it. Update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you. More soon. :)

Reviewer: sue92178 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2012 - 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 2

I love that you continue to find new concepts-- this has the makings of another one of your great stories! Can't wait to see it unfold!

Author's Response: Hee! Well, I've got to thank my beta, Always_jbj, for this concept, but thanks. I hope you like the rest of it.

Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2012 - 12:55 am Title: Chapter 1

Good start -- can't wait to see how this continues!

Author's Response: Thanks. Hope you like the rest. :)

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2012 - 07:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Great beginning. Calling Spike a cheater was the perfect thing to say, he has his pride. Now Buffy will be more sceptical to the Initiative being good.

Author's Response: I hope you like the rest of it. :)

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2012 - 12:57 am Title: Chapter 1

Love what you have so far, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Guest Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2012 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

Im of the opinion that a great story hooks the reader within the first few lines, and you've definitely accomplished that here. Question: what's with the dates at the top?

Author's Response: Hee! I'm glad it captured your attention. I hope the rest of it lives up to that. The dates are when I started it and when I finished it. I don't know why I left them up there - they were really just for me. :)

Reviewer: a Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2012 - 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nice! I like the setup of the parallel actions, Spike sparing Buffy, and Buffy helping out Spike.

Author's Response: I'm glad it works for you. I think they try to be fair to each other - as much as two people who think they hate each other can. :)

Reviewer: Aibell Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2012 - 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

love this already (but then, I love all your stories, so.) can't wait for more.

I always love early season Buffy stories when Spike and Buffy are forced to work together against common foes (Lover's Walk is my favorite Buffy episode ever, really) so this is awesome (and I HATE the commandos. Most annoying Buffy villains ever, really, I love when Buffy puts them in their place.) great story so far

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I hope you enjoy the rest of it.

Reviewer: Embers and Flame Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2012 - 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm definately interested in reading what happens next.

Author's Response: I hope you like it!

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