[Report This]Date: 12/23/2012 - 08:13 am Title: Double's Jealousy
What a great twist!!! Angelus now has control of William...he needs to remember though that he is a vampire and he can fight Angelus if need be.
Good update.
[Report This]Date: 12/16/2012 - 10:08 am Title: Double, Double Toil and Trouble
Good dialogue. I bet William will fall inlove with Buffy fast.
Author's Response: Thank you! And thank you for your review. William falls in love very quickly. It is very possible that he'll fall for Buffy. Guess you'll have to keep reading to find out. ;) William will be around for a little bit. I absolutely love him. He's so cute! :)
[Report This]Date: 12/16/2012 - 10:05 am Title: Lost and Gained
Yay William! Hope he's around for at least a few chapters. Anya is hilarious in this chapter.
[Report This]Date: 12/16/2012 - 03:17 am Title: Double, Double Toil and Trouble
Now they are in the same dimension but there's a strange dangerus man on the lose.
[Report This]Date: 11/30/2012 - 03:19 am Title: Lost and Gained
Well, something had to go wrong with the spell.
Author's Response: Well it is Willow. :)
[Report This]Date: 11/24/2012 - 01:19 pm Title: The Key to Buffy's Past
Short but to the point. Looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 11/24/2012 - 01:18 pm Title: Crosses to Bear
I'm still really enjoying this story. Good job.
[Report This]Date: 11/24/2012 - 12:12 pm Title: The Key to Buffy's Past
Nice.
[Report This]Date: 11/20/2012 - 06:49 am Title: Crosses to Bear
Interesting to see what will happen with the spell.
[Report This]Date: 11/17/2012 - 08:41 am Title: Stay Puft
Good update!
[Report This]Date: 11/16/2012 - 06:44 am Title: Stay Puft
Good, a new chapter.
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2012 - 07:56 am Title: Not in Kansas Anymore
Awesome plot twist! Buffy was in hell and not heaven. What could this mean for the story.
I think it would help break up the chaptr and be less confusing if you seperated scenes. Maybe some dash marks or something. Just a suggestion.
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2012 - 07:52 am Title: Angel's in the Outfield
This was a good chapter. I get confused at what time it's taking place in though until I've read a bit.
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2012 - 07:51 am Title: This is war!
Fiture Spike is in for it now. I'm excited for Past-Spike to make his move. Xander is a douche as always. Goatboy is a new one-I like it!
[Report This]Date: 11/09/2012 - 07:05 am Title: Not in Kansas Anymore
A big difference, a Buffy that was in hell. That's what makes her softer, she wasn't taken from a good place. But this Spike seems a bit darker, what could have changed him?
[Report This]Date: 11/05/2012 - 07:12 am Title: Angel's in the Outfield
Nice how it moves along.
Date: 11/04/2012 - 09:32 am Title: His Song to Her
Thanks for letting me know about ff.net but I hate the layout there. I will read and review on this site.
[Report This]Date: 11/04/2012 - 03:30 am Title: This is war!
So future Spike is able to wake softer feelings in Buffy.
[Report This]Date: 11/03/2012 - 02:35 pm Title: The Tall Smurf
This is nice.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I love getting them!
If you want to check this story on FanFiction.net then you can read up to chapter twenty-four! Just please leave a review and tell me how you like or dislike what I did with it.
:)
[Report This]Date: 11/03/2012 - 09:34 am Title: The Tall Smurf
Awesome idea to have Lorne listen to his singing and have his visions.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I love getting them!
If you want to check this story on FanFiction.net then you can read up to chapter twenty-four! Just please leave a review and tell me how you like or dislike what I did with it.
:)
[Report This]Date: 11/03/2012 - 09:30 am Title: Fact Finding
Halfrek doesn't have the right to act that way to Buffy. Didn't she do enough to hurt William? I never got that whole thing; was Halfrek Cicely and was she called after that time or was she a Vengeance demon than too? Feel like I missed something. Haven't watched Buffy in five years so maybe I just forgot. Anyway...Love it when Buffy treats Angel like that. Not an Angel fan.
Author's Response: According to the show Halfrek was a Vengeance Demon during her time with William. She is as old or older than Anya. :)
If you want to read more on FanFiction.net then you can read up to chapter twenty-four. :)
Thank you for the review! I love them!
Author's Response: According to the show Halfrek was a Vengeance Demon during her time with William. She is as old or older than Anya. :)
If you want to read more on FanFiction.net then you can read up to chapter twenty-four. :)
Thank you for the review! I love them!
[Report This]Date: 11/03/2012 - 09:27 am Title: A New Old Dimension.
I'll consider this an early birthday prezzie: this story has two Spike's. :-D I like how they are fighting with eachother.
Author's Response: Happy almost your birthday! :)
I love two Spikes. Their too fun to write.
Oh! I have this posted on FanFiction.net if you want to check it out. I have twenty-four chapters up there. Almost done!
Thank you for the review by the way! I love getting 'em!
[Report This]Date: 11/03/2012 - 09:18 am Title: His Song to Her
This sounds interesting. I like timetravel fics.
Author's Response: I hope you like mine! I also have it posted on FanFiction.net if you want to check it out. I have twenty-four chapters up there though.
Thank you for the review by the way! I love getting 'em!
[Report This]Date: 10/31/2012 - 03:20 am Title: Fact Finding
And Buffy knows what she wants, good.
Author's Response: Thank you for the reviews! :) I love 'em.
Buffy isn't playing around. She wants Spike and she'll find him. I'll update soon!
[Report This]Date: 10/31/2012 - 03:16 am Title: A New Old Dimension.
And now he's fighting with himself, nice.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)