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Reviewer: spygrrl76 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2013 - 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Prague

This is one of the most impressive BTVS stories I've read in a really long time. Your characterizations are excellent and your storytelling is engaging.  Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2013 - 11:33 am Title: Chapter 13 - Prague

I think Buffy needs to fix this and have a little less of the me-me-me, Spike has clearly had enough.

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2013 - 11:24 am Title: Chapter 12 - The Romance of Train Travel part II

I'm not surprised Spike is upset, poor guy can't win.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2013 - 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Prague

I enjoyed this chapter, the part in the mall, drunk Spike and Wesley, and the talk between Buffy and Spike. They were angry and could have said it better, but the important thing is that they got to say what they thought. Now they need to have a calmer talk.

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2013 - 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The Romance of Train Travel part II

What Spike and Buffy need is a bit of communication.

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Date: 07/13/2013 - 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 10 - The Project

Super action by Buffy, good to see her kicking ass!

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2013 - 02:12 am Title: Chapter 8 - The Getaway

Silly Council, thinking they can beat the outcome for megalomaniacs everywhere!

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2013 - 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 7 - The Package

Soooo exciting, brilliantly done!

Reviewer: ILoveLamp Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2013 - 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The Romance of Train Travel part II

“Don’t ask.” He said leading Buffy away. “that’s what he wants you to do.”
I dig that line. It was very natural.

I can't wait for more


Author's Response: What do you think of Raj?

Reviewer: ILoveLamp Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2013 - 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The Romance of Train Travel part I

Ooooo, I did have the thought that Buffy was dead wherever Alex was from, because of the way she reacted and interacted with Buffy and Spike. What I didn't guess was that Spike was dead also. Or is he... I'm not sure, and it has nothing to do with the story. I just got excited.

Anyway, it was a fleeting thought that was buried by the story that was happening already.

Awesome job, I dug the chapter.

Reviewer: ILoveLamp Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2013 - 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 10 - The Project

Great chapter, and goooooo Buffy!
I love it when she's awesome.

Reviewer: ILoveLamp Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2013 - 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 9 - The Girl in Question

I am a touch confused about this chapter. Not about Alex, I knew that was a strong possibility.

What confuses me is, does Spike know Alex is his or not? He says he knows she is his, but later he says something like: The Slayer named her little girl after me?

It was a confusing bit of your story for me.

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm working on the typos but I'm trying to balance that out with uploading as fast as possible to keep people engaged. As for Alex, yes He knows, he's figured it out and after his little sister Alexis. I'm going to go into his backstory a little more in the later chapters.

Reviewer: ILoveLamp Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2013 - 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 8 - The Getaway

Yeah, that is what I figured, but it was STILL a pretty great chapter.

The rest of the why's are still to be determined, but excellent story so far.

Reviewer: ILoveLamp Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2013 - 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 7 - The Package

I had thought that a Baby may have been what was hiding in that bunker. Obviously not a baby, but a hybrid of sorts?

(obviously don't answer my question. I don't know that you would have, but I really dislike it when an author puts soilery teases after I end with a question.

Reviewer: ILoveLamp Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2013 - 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 6 - A Picnic at Hampstead

Hmmmm, I thought the plan had failed and that the group had fled to the townhouse.

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Date: 07/09/2013 - 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Game Plan

Ok so not Gunn, an OC. Well things continue to gain speed. I do feel bad for Buffy though, she hasn't been in contact with anyone she knows. Judging by the way she mauled Wes, she really needs that contact.

Reviewer: ILoveLamp Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2013 - 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Recuperation

This is really very cool, there was already a good mystery and now here's Wes and Gunn.

I dig the overall flow of your story as well, (less the spelling mistakes that confuse) you mix in action/drama really well. I have read a ton of theses stories, and pacing is often times the weakest part of any given story. You keep things moving along, and so far that has kept me all the way involved in your tale.

Reviewer: waddiwasiwitch Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2013 - 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The Romance of Train Travel part II

I'm REALLY enjoying this so far.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2013 - 06:45 am Title: Chapter 12 - The Romance of Train Travel part II

Love the way this is going. It's going to take a while for Buffy to get her head round what's going on, but then she should TALK with Spike! Yeah right. Like that's going to happen any time soon! LOL
Just one point: “It’s fine, I don’t except you to get it.” Should be "I don't EXPECT you to get it."


Author's Response: Thanks! I am trying to balance uploading the chapters as fast as I can while keeping the typos as a minimum! Thanks for the review I was a little worried about going that direction with this :)

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2013 - 03:27 am Title: Chapter 12 - The Romance of Train Travel part II

Very good, how they think and react about this situation. Buffy is of course worried about what they did to her. If Spike calms down and starts to think, then he should be able to understand her reaction.

Reviewer: ginar369 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2013 - 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The Romance of Train Travel part II

I can see this from both sides and they need to talk. Buffy is afraid of what she might be carrying and Spike just wants a family. Regardless of what Buffy does about the pregnancy Spike does have a family. Alex is his. She might be from another dimension but he is the only father she will ever have. Her Spike is dead and not coming back. Those two need to bond and maybe the pain, if Buffy terminates the pregnancy, of losing the new child will fade knowing he still has her.

Author's Response: Thanks! I was a little worried about bringing it up, but I thought that there was no way it would not go through her head!

Reviewer: Lambean Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2013 - 12:05 am Title: Chapter 11 - The Romance of Train Travel part I

It was nice to get to know more about Alex. You seriously brought out some tears when she was talking about seeing her dad for the first time and Buffy's death. I love this story. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2013 - 08:06 am Title: Chapter 11 - The Romance of Train Travel part I

Love the way this is developing...

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2013 - 04:36 am Title: Chapter 11 - The Romance of Train Travel part I

Good information and much of it was expected.

Reviewer: mike13z50 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2013 - 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The Romance of Train Travel part I

Spuffy child from the future, didn't see that coming. Enjoying your story.

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