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Reviewer: ginar369 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2013 - 08:04 am Title: Chapter 18 - All Is Better In the Morning

For Buffy is almost ready to admit she is falling in love with Spike. I think his actions alone lately are a clear indicator of how he feels for her. He wouldn't have brought just anyone to his human home. To lay himself bare like that means she is important to him. Very important. I'm glad to see her time in a cage made her better understand what happened to Spike in Sunnydale. Some empathy would have been nice back then. But she has some now and that's all that matters. The chip needs to come out. What's going on right now shows that clearly. What happens when Buffy is too big to fight? It's humans after them and if she is 8 months pregnant she won't be kicking any butt. Spike needs to be able to defend himself, her, Alex and the baby.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2013 - 05:18 am Title: Chapter 18 - All Is Better In the Morning

Their thoughts about all this was written so well. Buffy seems to have made up her mind about Spike, good.

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2013 - 03:54 am Title: Chapter 17 - The Watcher's Son

Excellent chapter exploring Raj's background, I loved it.

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2013 - 03:36 am Title: Chapter 16 - Spike's Story

Phew ... that was suitably explosive!

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2013 - 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 17 - The Watcher's Son

It was good to learn more about Raj.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2013 - 10:03 am Title: Chapter 17 - The Watcher's Son

Good to have some background for Raj, but I'm impatient for the Spuffy!

Reviewer: SeaPea Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2013 - 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 17 - The Watcher's Son

I love your original character Raj.  You should get some "best original character" award for him.  He fits in very nicely with this little gang.

Reviewer: Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2013 - 07:57 am Title: Chapter 16 - Spike's Story

Seems theses two can't get together without smashing something. Great update.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2013 - 09:57 am Title: Chapter 16 - Spike's Story

Very good. We could see how much Spike is still hurting over what he did to his mum, the one thing he truley regretts. Did he turn his butler afterwards then? Shouldn't he be scared of turning someone again so soon? Maybe Dru did it.

Reviewer: amayuscula Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2013 - 09:13 am Title: Chapter 16 - Spike's Story

More PLEASE.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2013 - 08:23 am Title: Chapter 16 - Spike's Story

Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: ginar369 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2013 - 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Spike's Story

The fact that that one incident still haunts him 120 years later says a lot for the kind of vampire he is. Spike might not give a rats ass about every single person in the world like a slayer would but for those he does care about causing them harm is the last thing he would ever want to do. I can understand what motivated him to do it though. He felt great after he was turned; strong, fast and full of life and he wanted to give that to his mother whom he still loved and who was dying. The intent was admirable even though it didn't work the way he intended.

Reviewer: ILoveLamp Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2013 - 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 15 - No. 9 Wilton Crescent

Oooo, I remember snippets of this story only so it's going to require a reread, but I did like that chapter and your cast of characters a lot.

I just need to go back and figure out what has happened in your story so far.

Reviewer: amayuscula Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2013 - 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 15 - No. 9 Wilton Crescent

Please try to update as soon as you can. I want to read more.

Reviewer: amayuscula Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2013 - 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 15 - No. 9 Wilton Crescent

Please try to update as soon as you can. I want to read more.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2013 - 08:32 am Title: Chapter 15 - No. 9 Wilton Crescent

Wonderful! I can just imagine Spike arranging to have someone look after his family home.
Absolutely love the Dr Who references!

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2013 - 07:11 am Title: Chapter 15 - No. 9 Wilton Crescent

This was really amusing when they traveled. Now we are in Williams home, that must make Spike think a lot.

Reviewer: ginar369 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2013 - 05:39 am Title: Chapter 15 - No. 9 Wilton Crescent

That would be the one place they would be safe. The Watcher's Council had him down as a ruffan and thief when he was human. Spike covered his tracks well when he was first turned.

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2013 - 04:04 am Title: Chapter 15 - No. 9 Wilton Crescent

Any chance Buffy is suddenly going to discover untapped wells of tact?

Reviewer: Love to Bite Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2013 - 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 15 - No. 9 Wilton Crescent

I laughed so hard I thought I would have to find an emptied out plastic jug of motor oil. "Snakes" and "I think this is the classiest moment of my life" will stay with me forever. On the flip side, the emotional impact of Spike's return home....words fail me.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2013 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter 14 - The Closer You are to Danger the Further You are from Harm

Love how this story is progressing, hopefully Buffy and Spike will start nesting together to make preparations for the baby.   Look forward to more.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2013 - 04:45 am Title: Chapter 14 - The Closer You are to Danger the Further You are from Harm

They had some good talking and interaction between all characters.

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2013 - 04:30 am Title: Chapter 14 - The Closer You are to Danger the Further You are from Harm

Nice bit of air clearing there, much needed, but no easy way out!

Reviewer: mike13z50 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2013 - 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 14 - The Closer You are to Danger the Further You are from Harm

I really am enjoying your story, it is always exciting to see a new chapter up.  Your OC are well executed.  I liked the little bit of spuffy about the new little bit.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2013 - 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 14 - The Closer You are to Danger the Further You are from Harm

It's good that Buffy has finally remembered that she's not the only person who has been affected by Genesis. And now they're going to be hiding under Genesis' noses? Wonder how that'll go.....

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