

Date: 10/23/2004 - 04:04 am Title: The Heart Knows
Fun to read but Ick! a baaad mental image:
Buffy gets fucked in the ass - (lubricated - no condom), than he fucks her "the normal way" and than she sucks him. And his dicks has been in her ass moments before. Icky image *shudder* . If I were Buffy, I'd went to shower first.
Still - will look out for the next chapter!
Cordykitten
Author's Response: Oh come on Cordykitten, sex is dirty sometimes the dirtier the better. Now you're reading too slowly :) Go with it man. Thanks for the review
Date: 10/22/2004 - 09:37 am Title: 1
Where do you come up with this stuff? Someone linked me to this story and we're all rolling with laughter over it. But then I got worried that you were serious. If that's true, SIMPLIFY, woman (if you are one) because it seems like you've never had sex in your life and your word choice shows it.
Author's Response: Yes , I am a woman. I truly am. I got lost in wombworld. I'm taking my lumps. I hope to redeem myself. Thank you for your feedback
Date: 10/22/2004 - 12:58 am Title: Tell Me What You Want
Meat curtains? Cum catcher? Cum bank?
This is funny
Author's Response: Trust me....I'm done with the out there language. I will try my best to redeem myself. I hope the story is at least still interesting enough for you to keep reading it.
Date: 10/22/2004 - 12:55 am Title: Tell Me What You Want
Um....are you trying to be funny here? I hope so, because I've never seen anything that made me laugh so much. I mean, who talks like that? I think you need to tone down the vivid imagery and try to make your dialogue a little more believable.
Author's Response: You are right. I admit when I wrote some of it I laughed too. I am severly paying for it. Trust me. Thank you for the feedback. Hopefully, I have not spoiled the story too much for you.
Date: 10/21/2004 - 12:46 pm Title: 1
If it's intentional bad!fic, it's brilliant. If you're serious, then I think you need to seriously de-purple your prose. I was reading it as bad!fic and thought it was hysterical.
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: 10/21/2004 - 10:10 am Title: 1
This is the funniest fucking story I have ever read!!! Your metaphors are ridiculous and your sex acts are impossible. Spike wants to stick his head inside Buffy's womb? Go for it, you cum-shot god!! So many of your descriptions had me rolling on the floor. No doubt Spike's dick is unparalleled because it can punch through Buffy's panties!!
Thanks so much for all the laughs!
Author's Response: From your review I can't tell if you liked it or hated it. Well you kept reading it so I think you liked it. Feedback is always appreciated whether good or bad. Thank you for taking the time to leave your comments.

Date: 10/21/2004 - 03:39 am Title: Tell Me What You Want
Right out of Full Monty! Man, I guess he has decided to claim her for himself!

Date: 10/20/2004 - 03:13 pm Title: Tell Me What You Want
Yes, can say it too: This was great. I LOVED the strip scene. It was hot!
Good idea to put this one in - Buffy as a male.
Cordykitten
Author's Response: I was worried about that scene. It was a b**ch to write. About the male/female thing. I'm glad you got it. Thank you for feedback. I need it.

Date: 10/20/2004 - 02:02 pm Title: Tell Me What You Want
Oh my gosh. That was great. Every time they have sex it's always new, nothing gets old or repeats in this story.
Author's Response: Thank you for noticing. I try to keep it fresh. Always appreciate the feedback.

Date: 10/18/2004 - 06:41 pm Title: Jealous Much
I love this story and keep looking for the next chapter. I can't wait to see exactly what that Faith is up to. It's interesting the way she's spying and plotting against Buffy who doesn't suspect a thing. I'm curious to see if she gets what she's after.
Author's Response: Faith definitely has some issues. You can count on her not breaking character. I'm glad you like the story. Thank you for the review.

Date: 10/17/2004 - 07:00 pm Title: Jealous Much
great update i loved them

Date: 10/17/2004 - 02:37 pm Title: Jealous Much
I wonder if she dreamed the last part because ::She yawned, leaning back in her chair. Closing her eyes::
Well; when the go to the bronze and meet Faith - oh my how is the saying - the shit will hit the fan.
Cordykitten
Author's Response: You are correct. She was dreaming. The bronze is a very unique place. Anything can happen. Thanks for the feedback. New chapter coming soon.

Date: 10/15/2004 - 02:31 pm Title: Unfinished Pleasure
Awe - Poetry for her.... That was very erotic.

Date: 10/15/2004 - 09:43 am Title: Unfinished Pleasure
Not only insanely hot , but so meaningful of his desire to truly take possession of her , body and soul..Poetry and sex ? a gorgeous combination.

Date: 10/15/2004 - 04:24 am Title: Unfinished Pleasure
very sexy.

Date: 10/14/2004 - 08:00 pm Title: More Than You Know
You know I think you write some of the most interesting sex scenes. I mean, when you read lots of these stories--like I do--you start to get so sick of the Buffy/Spike sex scene formula that you end up skipping over it because it's so damn boring. But in this chapter there's the scene at the beginning where he's imagining Buffy, dressed in a business suit, pressing her lips against the shower door. It's sort of creepy and erotic at the same time. It seems almost ghostly the way you've written it which just adds to the strangeness of Spike's character in this story.
Author's Response: Hot sex should never be boring. I try my best. There is more hot spuffiness to come. Thank you for the awesome review.

Date: 10/14/2004 - 03:29 pm Title: More Than You Know
Again, thanks for the update. I'm glad Spike found Buffy again although he throw the number away. Looking forward to more Spuffyness. :)

Date: 10/14/2004 - 03:21 pm Title: Regrets
Oh - two more chapters, yeah! Glad about how he acted about Faith at the end.

Date: 10/14/2004 - 08:17 am Title: More Than You Know
Chapters 6 was very interesting , William's wounded personality making us understand his present behavior.
Then the last ch. was beautiful , and i liked the way he needed to worship her..
Author's Response: William is a little screwed up. Bad love can do that to you. It wouldn't be spuffy if I kept them apart for long. More spuffiness to come. Thank you for the review

Date: 10/14/2004 - 12:55 am Title: More Than You Know
Can't wait to see the spuffilicious ending to this story....

Date: 10/13/2004 - 09:44 pm Title: Regrets
I almost can't wait for Buffy to find out!

Date: 10/13/2004 - 06:01 pm Title: More Than You Know
Oh great they're back together. I sure hope Buffy can see through all of Faith's crap.
Author's Response: Me too but for how long? Whats done in the dark always come to light. Thanks for reading

Date: 10/13/2004 - 03:37 pm Title: More Than You Know
I'm loving this story and can't wait for more. I think Faith, though frusterating, is adding an extra ineresting dimension. I had saying not nice things, but one thing I noticed is you use a very lot of similes. Thats cool, but I didn't love the Pope's ring in the middle of sex. Kinda wierd. Of course, you are the writer and ultimately you need to include what you think is good, not what anyone else thinks, but I just wanted to leave some feedback about how I felt reading it. Again, loving it and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Good observation about Faith. You are right about the similes. They are great for allowing people to paint their own mental pictures and run with them probably better than I can. Now that you mentioned it, the Pope's ring comparison is a little off-putting. I was looking at it from a worshipping perspective. My intention is not to offend anyone. Thank you very much for the positive feedback It is always appreciated.

Date: 10/13/2004 - 01:36 pm Title: More Than You Know
These last two chapters were so intense! I wish Buffy would have put two and two together and figured it out. This story is super erotic and awesome read!
Author's Response: The time will come. I promise you but maybe not how you think. I am glad you are enjoying the story. Thank for the review.