

Date: 11/06/2004 - 10:16 am Title: Ch. 1
I'm susper intrigued. I can't wait for more.

Date: 10/14/2004 - 02:33 am Title: Ch. 1
I've read this chapter before and tried to find the completed vic on many sites. I hope you're going to complete it this time. It's too good to remain unfinished.

Date: 10/14/2004 - 01:30 am Title: Ch. 1
Now this is an intriguing story...I must say I am hooked

Date: 10/12/2004 - 09:00 pm Title: Ch. 1
on the edge of my seat wanting more

Date: 10/12/2004 - 03:06 pm Title: Ch. 1
Would love to read more ... :)

Date: 10/12/2004 - 01:41 pm Title: Ch. 1
Well this looks like its shaping up to be interesting..keep up the good work!

Date: 10/12/2004 - 03:58 am Title: Ch. 1
Hmmmm....very interesting & intriguing first chapter...which just left me wishing there were more chapters. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing your story...

Date: 10/12/2004 - 01:40 am Title: Ch. 1
Excellent idea really wanna read more.

Date: 10/11/2004 - 11:46 pm Title: Ch. 1
I am totally and completely hooked!!!!! More please! :)

Date: 10/11/2004 - 09:56 pm Title: Ch. 1
I really, really...really love this. :) It's not like most of them out there, and I can't wait for your next update!

Date: 10/11/2004 - 09:51 pm Title: Ch. 1
much awesomeness which is my way of saying it was good. keep it up. this could be interesting