Date: 02/06/2005 - 10:39 am Title: Prologue: The Wedding
Just as good the first time I read this. Nice interplay between Dawn and Spike -- their instant rapport with each other is great. I like the idea of Buffy taking care of Dawn and the comment about living in the woods? Great sister stuff. A Happy Joyce and Giles -- very nice also
Date: 02/06/2005 - 08:35 am Title: Chapter Six
I almost completely forgot about this one but it was well worth the wait. The dialogue was top notch and the descriptions of their emotions was good as well. Please update cuz I really like this story.
Date: 02/06/2005 - 02:58 am Title: Chapter Six
I like how Buffy is opening up to Spike and allowing pieces of her past to reveal themselves. She seems to be in so much pain; hopefully, Spike can help her work through that! Love the story.
Date: 01/27/2005 - 03:34 am Title: Chapter Five
This is a WONDERFUL story idea. :-) Please update soon!
Date: 01/25/2005 - 02:59 pm Title: Chapter Five
Take your time! Don't hear at the voices complaining updates!
Glad to read the update - and that Spike did go so well with the other scoobies. And I must agree with Buffy - I don't like the thought of Spike having brief encounters with Harmony either ;-)
Date: 01/25/2005 - 06:51 am Title: Chapter Five
Nice job, hon. Don't worry about me complaining though, my sis is in college right now and has a job on campus so I know how stressful it can get.
Date: 01/24/2005 - 08:41 pm Title: Chapter Five
great story so far. as long as you dont stop writing its all good. life can be very busy n ur first priority shouldnt be fanfic. great job n keep doin a great job. good luck with school.
Date: 01/24/2005 - 03:04 pm Title: Chapter Five
hey i had just stumbled upon this fic today and i must say i apsolutly LOVE the plot. very amazing and justt gives life to every charactor. and yeah reality can be really really busy lol 'm just glad to read that ur not abandoning fic completly waiting for the next update ::no rush:: =)
Date: 01/24/2005 - 01:32 pm Title: Chapter Five
Another great chapter. This story is very interesting, just please don't abandon it and I'll keepreading.
Date: 01/24/2005 - 12:21 pm Title: Chapter Five
Great chapter. Enjoying the angst. I like that you're taking your time with these two getting together, but just have to ask...do we get kissage soon?
Date: 01/24/2005 - 10:50 am Title: Chapter Five
I just started to read this and I really love it. I like how Buffy's and Spike's relationship is getting along. Granted, this story isn't the most original,(what is nowaday) but you are doing a great job with it.
Date: 01/24/2005 - 04:42 am Title: Chapter Five
Sad! no! She has to want Spike! Spike wants her, we all know it, why can't she? *sigh* Oh, good luck with you work and college, I hope you don't get too overwhelmed!!
Date: 01/24/2005 - 03:07 am Title: Chapter Five
love it whenever you can get to it though!
Date: 01/24/2005 - 02:03 am Title: Chapter Five
This story is very intriguing. I can't wait to find out further information about Buffy's past and what sort of progression takes place in the Spuffy relationship. The updates are definitely worth the wait. It's always a treat when they show up. Especially when Anya plants seeds of something in Buffy's head.
Date: 01/24/2005 - 01:59 am Title: Chapter Five
You have a wonderful writing style and I like the way you've managed to capture all the characters so perfectly in an AU setting. Unfortunately that means I'm now emotionally involved. Looking forward to your next update.
Date: 01/24/2005 - 12:27 am Title: Chapter Five
I'm liking the slow, gentle pace you're giving this as Buffy and Spike learn more about each other.
Date: 01/13/2005 - 06:58 pm Title: Chapter Four
I like the way things are moving. They're going at a good pace, especially considering that he got dumped by someone he loved and the guy she loved died. The story is ver-well-written. I love it! Keep up the good work.
Date: 01/08/2005 - 11:12 am Title: Chapter Four
Looking forward to the first meeting between Buffy’s friends and Spike!
Date: 01/07/2005 - 09:27 pm Title: Chapter Four
loving it still
Date: 01/07/2005 - 01:24 pm Title: Chapter Four
Hey--I trust ya :) I'm glad that Buffy's finally getting to see a different facet of Spike's. It'll be nice seeing them become friends (I hope) as their relationship progresses.
Date: 01/07/2005 - 09:49 am Title: Chapter Three
Glad to see you’re back! So Spike was looking for a band … Well, Buffy hs a lot a her with her two jobs. I’m not sure she’ll manage it. She gets to less sleep. Cordykitten
Date: 01/07/2005 - 01:35 am Title: Chapter Four
So I'm still likin' this story, so have no fear! lol.. my one complaint? Is that Buffy isn't blonde anymore. I don't know why, but that is that one thing that bothers me... maybe cos I can't picture her at all when she's got the brunette thing going on. *sigh* I don't spose you would like... turn it back would ya?? Please? I just have to ask! *smiles* Can't wait to see what you got next!
Date: 01/07/2005 - 12:51 am Title: Prologue: The Wedding
Ok Miss Addie Logan... When I started reading this first chapter, it sounded soooo familiar!! So I was lookin around at the reviews seeing if I was right.. There weren't any on this site, but finally I remembered that you posted this on ff.net as well! I was your first reviewer on that site!! YAy!! go me!! Anyway, I still like this story, and now I am going to catch up with it! I am so happy that I stumbled into this again!! *grins*
Date: 01/07/2005 - 12:33 am Title: Chapter Four
Move it as slow as you want- I love it:)
Date: 01/06/2005 - 11:21 pm Title: Chapter Four
you needed time to set up the story and I found it fascinating! anyway lol on the bonding that is going on between s/b...
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