Date: 01/06/2005 - 11:16 pm Title: Chapter Four
I'm continuing to enjoy this story. I like long, slow stories with lots of character development, so I'm happy for this to unfold at the pace you're setting. Well done on incorporating elements of the show into your AU universe: Buffy & Spike hating each other when they first meet, whilst Dawn is smitten, the impact of Angel's death on Buffy's outlook on life, even Dru's Chaos demon! Very deftly done, without feeling clunky. Thanks for updating so quickly.
Date: 01/06/2005 - 10:37 pm Title: Chapter Four
great chapter, loved the convo between spike and buffy. and i hope walsh the bitch doesn't make too many appearances :) please hurry and update again soon :)
Date: 01/06/2005 - 10:17 pm Title: Chapter Four
See a REAL conversation. I'm so excited. Wasn't trying to bug you about the pace. I think the story is great, but you have more patience with it because you arlready KNOW where it's going. The rest of us are living in suspense land. but as far as trusting you, I do, I do. I trust you with my fanfic heart. I'm just happy they got to talk for 5 minutes straight! Yippee! :)
Date: 01/06/2005 - 01:34 pm Title: Chapter Three
I'm still here and I love this story. This is not a complaint against agnst, but it would be nice to see them actually talk. I got all excited that they were going to have lunch together and maybe and entire conversation, but then it was all so anticlimactic.
Date: 01/06/2005 - 03:16 am Title: Chapter Three
just to clairfy due to someone else using the name beth I have had to switch reviewing id's but I love this fic anjd the additons of characters do add spice!qq
Date: 01/06/2005 - 12:35 am Title: Chapter Three
i've always been a really big fan of regular posting :) however any update for this fic is greatly appreciated timely or otherwise. basically update whenever as long as you update :) i'll be waiting :)
Date: 01/05/2005 - 11:18 pm Title: Chapter Three
Excellent chapter. Love the interaction between the characters.
Date: 01/05/2005 - 10:03 pm Title: Chapter Three
Just found this story--you keep coming up with great ideas. Poor Buffy, she needs to confide in someone in a serious way. Can't wait to find out what went on between her and Joyce.
Date: 01/05/2005 - 08:35 pm Title: Chapter Three
thank you for the updates
Date: 01/05/2005 - 08:05 pm Title: Chapter Three
great update, and I can't wait to see what happens from here...Spike in a band, looking all sexy, Buffy watching him from the crowd on a night off...oh dear:)
Date: 01/05/2005 - 03:55 am Title: Chapter Two
Great setup - lots of potential for angsty UST! Looking forward to reading more.
Date: 12/25/2004 - 04:07 pm Title: Chapter Two
What I think? Glad about the update / poor Buffy, going through all the crap... / and about the up and downs? I'll try it out! Have read it before.
Date: 12/23/2004 - 01:45 am Title: Chapter Two
i'm so glad you are retaking this story!!! i've missed it... poor buffy...wonder what happened between her and joyce hope spike gets out of his selfcentered world and begins to help out a little ;) anyhow...love your stories ...you're doing a fabulous job!! hope you update soon thanx
Date: 12/23/2004 - 01:17 am Title: Chapter Two
I love the angst factor and the way to get out of the Angel factor is to intro Cordy or Darla and that wiill take care of Angel's interest pronto...*grin* lol on the chapter and I am so happy you have finally updated...
Date: 12/22/2004 - 07:02 pm Title: Chapter Two
This premise is very intriguing.... of course your comment of months between updates scaredc me, but I love your writing, so I'm gonna stick with it.
Date: 12/22/2004 - 04:19 pm Title: Prologue: The Wedding
Nice start.
Date: 12/22/2004 - 12:46 pm Title: Chapter Two
LOL! Bring it on. Glad to see a new update. Enjoying the story so far.
Date: 12/22/2004 - 12:34 pm Title: Chapter Two
wonderful beginning! i'm really excited to see where you go with this story and just what happened to Angel. it sounds like Spike has been babied by her family and she has been needlessly struggling for years. i'd love to get some background information to fill in the 5 year gap. can't wait for more! love the angst!
Date: 12/22/2004 - 09:58 am Title: Chapter Two
I can't wait to read about what happened since the wedding to Buffy to make her change that much. Keep it coming:)
Date: 12/22/2004 - 06:38 am Title: Chapter Two
love the story!!!!! but i'm wondering what happend to buffy tat made her so down right angry at Joyce.... waitin till u get to that part ... well now all i can do is wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 11/23/2004 - 03:36 am Title: Chapter One
I REALLY REALLY like this. Classic Buffy/Spike banter and lots of potential for UST. More soon please!
[Report This]Date: 11/21/2004 - 08:43 pm Title: Chapter One
Oh,come on!!!Don't let us wait, cause I'm dying to see Buffy and Spike bickering!
Author's Response: I will be updating this as soon as I can. Sorry for the long delay since the last chapter, but I'm taking five English classes this term to finish out my major and the paper load is killing me. But as soon as things calm down, I will update this story.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 10/25/2004 - 04:04 pm Title: Prologue: The Wedding
So is there going to be a freak snowstorm or something to prevent Spike from going to the airport...great plot
[Report This]Date: 10/25/2004 - 04:00 pm Title: Chapter One
Love you fic! Wonder what happened between Buffy and her mum - has it s.thing to do with her dead husband? I'm sure we'll read later ... Cordykitten
[Report This]Date: 10/25/2004 - 02:36 pm Title: Chapter One
Great update! I loved your characterization of Anya. Totally realistic! Please update soon. I can't wait to find out what Buffy has to say to Spike & vice versa! :)
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