Date: 12/14/2004 - 10:10 pm Title: Thank God For 24 Hour Fast Food
Oh thank you! You know I love you for not leaving me hanging like that. That would have been torture! Damnit Spike. Welcome back Ryan.
Date: 12/14/2004 - 10:05 pm Title: Thank God For 24 Hour Fast Food
I love it. You're handling this very well, good tension, tears, and joy, and angst, and....Thanks for this one. Don't ever take the quick and easy way out, go slow and develop the plot carefully, string us along, torture us...It's a good pain. :-)
Date: 12/14/2004 - 10:02 pm Title: Thank God For 24 Hour Fast Food
Oh come on!! Spike get over it! Take Buffy away from that idiot Ryan and just.. well.. GET OVER IT!! *sigh* Oh, and PLEASE make Spike the daddy! I want those blue eyes for the baby!! Pweeeeeeese!
Date: 12/14/2004 - 09:59 pm Title: Thank God For 24 Hour Fast Food
U r making out Ryan to be so sweet and spike to be such a jerk... why in world wud u do that?... WHy Why WHY???!!!!!!
Date: 12/13/2004 - 12:07 pm Title: Angel Don't Preach
*pouts* More! You are one evil being. I love it, but I hate the cliffhanger just because you can't just end it there. okay I love the cliffhanger too.. But only if you update fast. *pouts more*
Date: 12/13/2004 - 03:14 am Title: Angel Don't Preach
See, that was just plain mean! I may not forgive you. You can try and make it up to me by getting the next chapter up in at least 24 hours. It might work, not makin promises. :p
Date: 12/12/2004 - 11:37 pm Title: Angel Don't Preach
Good chapter...well, except for the part where Spike decides to have meaningless sex with Harmony. Can I just say, "EWWWW!" Can't stand them together!
Date: 12/12/2004 - 10:55 pm Title: Angel Don't Preach
I recd you for this fic with great hope that you'd somehow turn this thing around...and look you're doing it...i am so proud...so go you! lol -
Date: 12/12/2004 - 10:05 pm Title: Angel Don't Preach
Turely evil you are for stopping there!
Date: 12/12/2004 - 09:51 pm Title: Angel Don't Preach
OH!!!!!! now u made us wait again!!!!! and itll be long... really long time for us waiting for the update till after christmas... but oh well...... LOVE the story!
Date: 12/12/2004 - 09:19 pm Title: Angel Don't Preach
wondermous
Date: 12/12/2004 - 09:11 pm Title: Angel Don't Preach
oh my god. oh my god! how could Spike do that?! he was the one that decided to walk away from Buffy, she didn't tell him that he couldn't have her. oh my god. this is just going from bad to worse. how could you leave us with this huge of a cliffhanger right before the holidays? you. are. evil. *sigh* stupid freakin' walking hormone bombs.
Date: 12/12/2004 - 09:04 pm Title: Angel Don't Preach
*pokes her* dammit.........that was MEAN!!!!! *pouts* but i have faith..well I don't have her but you know what I mean? ;) Loved it otherwise.........can't wait for more...update soon?
Date: 12/12/2004 - 08:53 pm Title: Angel Don't Preach
Ok, that is just cruel.
Date: 12/12/2004 - 08:52 pm Title: Angel Don't Preach
Terrible place to end. This is getting interesting. You could make this really simple. Angel could actually kill Ryan and that would leave only Spike. Of course, you'd have to find a way to knock of Harmony as well. That was a TOTALLY unnecessary twist in the plot.
Date: 12/07/2004 - 06:04 pm Title: I'm So Sorry Baby
oh wow! I just finished reading all the way through this story... and gotta say, i have yet to read one like this.. and i love it! You are doing so well! I can't wait for the next chatper!
Date: 12/05/2004 - 01:18 pm Title: I'm So Sorry Baby
Good written twist. Sorry that there aren't more chapters to read for me.
Date: 12/05/2004 - 04:29 am Title: I'm So Sorry Baby
It really brought tears to my eyes. You are writing this really good.
Date: 12/05/2004 - 12:53 am Title: I'm So Sorry Baby
I know everyone wants the baby to be spike's but I am not sure I do, and the reason is this...to show his compassion and ability to love, even someone else's child...just wanted to throw that out there
Date: 12/05/2004 - 12:46 am Title: I'm So Sorry Baby
I hope you at least have the decency to tell Ryan that he might be the father and tell spike the truth; a letter might be the way, or Angel might do it...
Date: 12/04/2004 - 11:32 pm Title: I'm So Sorry Baby
You did an excellent opinion with this chapter and the last. Congrats to you for staying the course of how you want your story to turn out. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 12/04/2004 - 09:16 pm Title: I'm So Sorry Baby
love the twist and turn you do to the story. juz as long as the two of them are together in the end.
Date: 12/04/2004 - 08:37 pm Title: I'm So Sorry Baby
i hope that they make up
Date: 12/04/2004 - 07:06 pm Title: I'm So Sorry Baby
O.K. I had a feeling that this is where the story was going, but please don't put too much of a happy-happyness spin on it. Keeping the baby or not, her ENTIRE life is going to change and truth be told, it probably WON'T be for the better. I hope the spin this story gets is quiet normal happiness in the face of real life turmoil... not just a quick fix all where everything is perfect. Very few people I know could have lived the rest of their lives with their high school love interest... especially with the loss of dreams they both will experience. Good luck
Date: 12/04/2004 - 03:03 pm Title: I'm So Sorry Baby
Really well written - keep updating cos I am dying to find out what happens!
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