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Reviewer: Noelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2006 - 01:58 pm Title: When it rains, it pours

Uh-oh...

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2006 - 01:57 pm Title: When it rains, it pours

Oh dear... this looks baaad... I do hope Buffy's going to be OK...

You never finished resolving this, did you, "Seriously Buff, you have got to fire that asshole Jake. The guy's seriously deranged." ? What did Jake do? Why does Faith think he needs to be fired? How did Parker get the drop on Spike? Did Buffy leave a lipstick print on Spike's mouth?


Author's Response: No, I haven't resolved this yet. It will be in the next chapter. Faith will tell Buffy what happened to try to distract her from her misery. Glad you noticed though, that means you pay attention to details ;)

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2006 - 01:50 pm Title: When it rains, it pours

It's okay if you write in a miscarriage. This story has been a bit too fantastical some times, so it would add a good dose of realism. Not that I'm saying Buffy should go through that, 'cause I know, from experience, how it feels, but it would be a good literary device.



Author's Response: Thanks. You got exactly what my intention was. Reality. And sometimes, things happen at the wrong time. She'd made her peace with the fact she was pregnant, but the timing was still off. They've never even been a couple outside the prison walls yet. It's a story, so yes, I keep it a little on the fantastic side because a story like this couldn't happen in real life, but I still want to add a touch of reality to it.

Reviewer: Serena Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2006 - 01:47 pm Title: When it rains, it pours


Eh... hate mail?! You betcha!!! :P

Good chapters though, but I really don't want the baby to die

Author's Response: ::tears:: I'm sorry. This was planned all along. I just never thought you guys would get so into the pregnancy angle. It was torturing me every time I'd read a review about this. But I promise things will get better for Spike and Buffy. Eventually ;)

Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2006 - 10:44 pm Title: Blissful oblivion

Loved the last two chapters. Sorry for the lag in commenting.

Reviewer: Bloodthirstygoddess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2006 - 02:01 pm Title: Blissful oblivion

That was a great chapter. I loved the way you had everything turn out.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2006 - 07:37 pm Title: Blissful oblivion

I really like your protrayl of Riley as a perv dolt. I also like the way you had Willow face the aftermath of her evening out. :)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2006 - 01:18 am Title: Blissful oblivion

OMG IM SOOO HAPPY WILLOW DIDNT GET RAPED. that would have been awful and thats putting it lightly. my heart was beating really fast during this chapter. im so amazed at how you write, that was so professional, it was fantastic. i LOVE this story so much and am so so happy taht u updated so quick., thanx i enjoyed reading it. i really hope that buffy talks to spike in the next chapter and that she gets the confession soon. i almost feel bad for angel and darla, they were nice in this chapter and the last one, but it still doesnt make up for wat they did to william. please update as soon as u can, cant wait to see wat happens. thanx

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2006 - 07:32 pm Title: Blissful oblivion

Damn right, kick the bastard's ass. You don't wanna piss off a pregnant woman...lol! I hope Buffy gets the information she needs soon, so she won't have to deal with those losers anymore. Good chapter, can't wait for more=)

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2006 - 07:31 pm Title: Blissful oblivion

wow I got to read 2 chapters in one day. You are amazing

Reviewer: Roz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2006 - 07:16 pm Title: Blissful oblivion

Love the update and with the promise of more frequent updates as well ... oh my ...

Reviewer: Mari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2006 - 06:59 pm Title: Blissful oblivion

Hee! Loved that Buffy kicked Riley's butt and managed to impress Angel and Darla at the same time, I hope this helps her with her plans. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: mjspuff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2006 - 05:27 pm Title: Blissful oblivion

buffy kicked riley's ass. oh l love it. can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2006 - 05:15 pm Title: Blissful oblivion

Oh Riley isn't a nice person (simply put). So bad it was: Buffy made an impression on Angel. Could be useful in the future.

Reviewer: Michele Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2006 - 04:59 pm Title: Blissful oblivion

Great chapter! Very serious stuff but you also made me laugh (Pimp My Ride... hahaha). Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2006 - 04:58 pm Title: White trash just wanna have fun

It was the fumes from the hair dye Hehe.. Uh-huh ~ Willow is in danger now? *running to the next chapter*

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2006 - 04:10 pm Title: Blissful oblivion

glad that buffy saved her

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2006 - 03:15 pm Title: Blissful oblivion

great update! Buffy, baby, and Willow safe. Do you think she;ll get Giles or
Wesley involved to offer some mjuscle. I know Buffy has muscle, but she's also got a baby to think about.

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2006 - 03:08 pm Title: Blissful oblivion

One of the best chapters in the whole story... you really made the whole thing tense, scary and believable.

Suddenly Buffy becomes a big presence in this story. Suddenly, she's not just a beautiful petite woman who happens to be a prison govenor in love with a prisoner. She's a passionate, pissed off and powerful woman!

Great stuff, pet.

Reviewer: demona424 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2006 - 01:52 pm Title: Blissful oblivion

Eek! I was biting my nails down for a little bit there. Those were two nerve wracking chapters! I cannot wait until they get some evidence on Darla and Angel, they are EVIL!. I feel a bit sorry for baby Connor though, never had a chance for a good environment to grow up in, it's so sad.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2006 - 01:06 pm Title: Blissful oblivion

Yeah!...Love to see a date rape character get his ass kicked! Thanks for that.. Also glad that Buffy got out of there intact..baby all safe. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2006 - 12:35 pm Title: Blissful oblivion

love the ending of the chapter... it was cute! waiting for more!

Reviewer: Noelle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2006 - 12:27 pm Title: Blissful oblivion

I love when Riley gets his ass kicked! Great update.

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Date: 01/03/2006 - 12:19 pm Title: Blissful oblivion

Love it! Please go on!

Reviewer: slayerspet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2006 - 08:05 am Title: White trash just wanna have fun

Wow...it's been a while since you updated. This chapter was good...but such a tease. I hope since the holidays are over and stuff you will be able to post more soon.

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