I am enjoying your story, especially the build up to Spike and Buffy's relatinship. Also Cordelia and Buffy are suhc fun to read. The only I have so far is that this prison seems a bit soft compared to real life. Besides that really enjoying reading your story. I also like your other story Sexiest Video Tapes at BSDaries. Keep up the good worK!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm happy that you like the fic. I like writing Cordelia, she's a fun character. I know the prison is a bit soft, but I write it this way on purpose. I couldn't make it realistic because the story would have never happened. Think more movie prison. Like--I don't know--Did you see The Longest Yard with Adam Sandler? That kind of prison where the warden can get away with crazy stuff and the prisoners have a little more freedom (I know, ironic choice of word) than they do in a real prison.

Great Chapter. I love your Dawn.

Author's Response: It's a tough job trying to make people love Dawn because so many people hate her, but I try. I received many comments from people telling me that hated her on the show but like her in my story. That makes me happy. Glad you liked the chapter.

l hope you feel better now after you're surgery. l totaly understand that somthing like that would put a damper on you're plans. after i had surgery l didn't leave my bed for weeks. of course the surgery was on my knee so l couldent leave my bed even if l wanted to .l.o.l. milk it for all it's worth. Just kidding. anyway l'm glad to see that you're updating again because l love this story!!! l can't wait to see spikes reaction to the big news.

Author's Response: Yes, I'm feeling much better. Thanks for asking hon.

Yay update! I was just wondering if there would be an update soon. Such a treat :-) It was a great chapter. I love the interaction between Dawn and Buffy. You've captured sisterly relationships perfectly.

Good chapter, a little pause in the action I think. So any idea on how long this story is going to be, chapter wise that is?

Author's Response: As many chapters as I'll need to tell the story. Honestly, I really don't know. I keep trying to make estimations, but then I get an idea and add something, or decide against something else... Anyway, I'm thinking about ten more chapters, maybe more, maybe less. I hope I can keep you interested for another ten chapters ;) The action will start in about two chapters and will last until the end.

YAY U UPDATED IM SOOOOOOOO HAPPY. i LOVE this story so much and really enjoyed reading this chpater. im so angry that she hasnt told spike that shes pregnant, she need to tell him soon. i really hope that when willow and her go to the party that everything works out well and no one gets hurt. also i hope that she gets them to confess soon and that spike gets out of jail soon. i hope that spikes happy about that baby and that he works things out with gunn. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read the next chapter and find out wat happens at the party .thanx

Just read your A/N and since i left a review earlier saying I wish things had been slower I thought I should clarify. I think it's perfectly fine for Buffy and Spike to fall for each other instantly, I think you had the right instincts there. I just thought it would have been nicer if there had been more tension before they knew the other one felt the same way. But I still love your story, and you should definitely not go back and rewrite it.

I love that Snyder was still a priniciple. I have to say though, Spike writing down his feelings doesn't seem to smart considering something could happen to his journal and the kiss could be exposed.

Great chapter. I've been following this story since chapter 1, on BlondieBear, but I like this site better. Awesome writing and ideas!

So it was Gunn who thought rescue was needed. But Buffy didn't have a chance to tell Spike. Looking forwardt to find out how he'll react :) I'm not sure he'll be that happy - but only because of this situation - him being in prison till he dies.

Two chapters in two days. I'm impressed! I can't wait for her to tell Spike. Somehow, there seems to be always something happening before she can tell him. I really hope that's not a bad omen...

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was only gunn THANK GOD im so happy., that it wasnt someone else. aww how cute he wanted to protect the warden and i think that spike shouldnt be mad becuz he was only trying to help buffy and didnt no everything. i LOVE LOVE this story so much and am happy beyond belief that u updated, thank u so much. im so relieved that it was gunn and that he wont tel anyone. im so sad that she hasnt told spike about the baby, i really want him to no about it i think he would be happy. please update as soon as u can( but also take as long as u need) im cant wait to find out wat happens next with them. thanx