Date: 04/13/2005 - 11:20 am Title: Doctor, doctor, give me the news
Okay, not fair :-) Not your worst cliffhanger, but still enough for me to yell update SOON! This just added an entirely new layer to poor Buffy's problems. I love Anya talking about British men in front of both Spike and Giles. Now I repeat- update soon! I can't wait to see what Spike's reaction is going to be :-) Oh yeah, and Buffy's (considering Spike got into another fight). Great chapter!
Date: 04/13/2005 - 11:10 am Title: It's all a matter of evidence
Getting caught up- I love that you brought Wesley into the picture. And I loved this line: “Bloody hell woman, will you tell me what you’re planning on doing so I can scold you properly and have something concrete to worry about?” It's just so Giles-like :-)
Date: 04/11/2005 - 03:07 am Title: It's all a matter of evidence
Woohoo! Loved the chapter and I can't wait for more and please oh my goodness is buffy pregnant, Well I guess time will tell, right? Lookng forward to more.
Date: 04/10/2005 - 04:42 pm Title: It's all a matter of evidence
LOVED THE UPDATE AND I THINK THAT THE REASON BUFFY IS NOT EATING AS MUCH IS BECAUSE SHE'S PREGNANT WITH WILLIAM'S CHILD...THATS JUST MY OPINION
Date: 04/10/2005 - 04:08 pm Title: It's all a matter of evidence
the only reason I quit reviewing was that you did too much on the b/s and got awayy from the plot of get spike out of jail.. and sorry but I got mad...but Im back now and happy :)
Date: 04/10/2005 - 02:30 pm Title: It's all a matter of evidence
LOVE the update ! keep it up!
Date: 04/09/2005 - 09:44 pm Title: It's all a matter of evidence
more please i love it!!!!!!!!
Date: 04/09/2005 - 07:41 pm Title: It's all a matter of evidence
Good on you for doing your research! Hey, no one said t.v. watching wasn't research. I say, use all sources that are available. Wonderful chapter again! I'm so glad you didn't let those hooligans beat up on Spike and Gunn too long. Fights happen daily in prisons, and it was good to see a slice of life inside. I just hope he isn't hurt too badly. *pets broken Spike* Wesley is a freakin' godsend. Thank you for giving Wes the info Buffy needed to get the evidence she needs. And the fact that he has even more connections is awesome. I just hope our kind, trusting Buffy isn't getting over her head. She doesn't exactly have street smarts, so I hope her plan doesn't blow up in her face. I'm glad that Giles didn't try to talk her out of it though. It is, really, the ony thing she can do. She has to try. Especially if she is in a certain condition that I think she is in. I won't say what, but I think it's time for Buffy to start taking her vitamins. I have a feeling she's going to be getting a visit from the stork. I'm glad she's finally going to the doctor. Wonderful chapter again! I can't wait to see if Kate Lockley will help Buffy in her quest and if Buffy has a bun in the oven.
Date: 04/09/2005 - 05:12 pm Title: It's all a matter of evidence
Are you hinting at something with the 'not hungry' angle? hmmmm. Anyway, good chapter and I wonder what she'll say when she finds out Spike's been in a fight. I'm glad you're progressing the whole Angel-Darla investigation ;) Can't wait to see how it turns out!
Date: 04/09/2005 - 01:11 pm Title: It's all a matter of evidence
YAY u updated . i loved this chapter and cant wiat to read more. this is such a great story and is so well written. i love how u develope the story and how its evolving. i love this story and cant wait to read more. please update as soon as u can, im dying to read wat happens next in the story thanx
Date: 04/09/2005 - 12:56 pm Title: It's all a matter of evidence
Hopefully everything is fine with buffy. Like no complications whith her helath and situtation. She does not need any other stress. Hopefully Spike is ok. and nothing major with his injuries. Please update sooner and more often . Looking forward to the rest of this story.
Date: 04/09/2005 - 12:00 pm Title: It's all a matter of evidence
This chapter rocked I loved the detective-lingo stuff. Anyway I think I know whats wrong with Buffy but we will just have to wait and see.
Date: 04/09/2005 - 11:53 am Title: It's all a matter of evidence
your right this chapter was great. i have a feeling i know whats wrong with buffy :) i hope spike is going to be ok though. can't wait to see where this is going to go next. update again soon please.
Date: 04/09/2005 - 11:24 am Title: It's all a matter of evidence
Reviews? You can get it if you want :) First - I hope you'll be able to update soon! Looking forward to find out what is behind of Buffy's illness (I maybe have a clue), what happened to William in prison; and more about Wesley (the try to get William out of prison).
Very interesting chapter; who thought that 24 would could be good for Spuffy ;-)
Date: 04/09/2005 - 10:22 am Title: It's all a matter of evidence
Yep, you were right--it's a good chapter. I like how you're getting more of the characters involved, bringing more people in. And I'm anxious to see what Buffy finds out at the doctor, though I have my suspicions. A little worried about Spike, too...
Date: 04/09/2005 - 10:20 am Title: It's all a matter of evidence
Glad you updated - great chapter! I hope Wesley pulls through with everything and they can clear Spike's name! Can't wait to read more :)
Date: 04/02/2005 - 04:02 pm Title: Cyber virgin
Sweet story!!!! Please Sir, I'd like some more.
Date: 03/24/2005 - 03:48 pm Title: Cyber virgin
Ooo fight in the prison not good at all. Wonderful update can't wait for more I'm gonna go check out your new story now.
Date: 03/24/2005 - 10:34 am Title: Cyber virgin
Wow ! your story is really great, wonderful and more ! Please update soon I can't wait !
Date: 03/22/2005 - 06:05 am Title: Cyber virgin
and u had to leave us hanging here!!!! Please update soon!!!
Date: 03/21/2005 - 03:32 am Title: Cyber virgin
Oh my! Thanks fot the update first. Than - OH MY - what an EVIL place to leave us hanging! I hope you're able to update soon. AND I'm glad to hear that I'm able to read more Aloah soon - will reread the first chapter!
Date: 03/21/2005 - 12:03 am Title: Cyber virgin
Please update soon! I loved Spike's reaction when Buffy told him what she was really wearing, I could just picture him sitting at the computer in shock :-) Great chapter, although it was a mean cliffhanger, so please update really soon!
Date: 03/20/2005 - 11:57 pm Title: Cyber virgin
please don't let a riot break out!
Date: 03/20/2005 - 11:54 pm Title: Intervention
Catching up- great chapter and I'm glad she's still making a little bit of progress in proving he's innocent.
Date: 03/20/2005 - 10:25 pm Title: Cyber virgin
great update but i hope in the next chapter that they both get to see each other again and spend some time alone
Online since April 29th 2003 Script © eFiction
PARENTS! Restrict access to this site. Click a links below to find out how. Cyber Patrol | Surf Watch | Net Nanny | http://RSAC Rated
Terms of Service | Rules | Contact Us |
Skin created by Kali