
Date: 07/06/2005 - 09:35 am Title: Memories
Punctuation and proper spelling are your friends. It stops you looking like an illiterate moron. These concepts are so basic, my jaw dropped after reading the first few paragraphs. Nice idea for a story but I won't be reading on. If you can't be bothered to type things out properly, I can't be bothered to read it.

Date: 07/06/2005 - 09:35 am Title: Memories
Punctuation and proper spelling are your friends. It stops you looking like an illiterate moron. These concepts are so basic, my jaw dropped after reading the first few paragraphs. Nice idea for a story but I won't be reading on. If you can't be bothered to type things out properly, I can't be bothered to read it.
Date: 03/11/2005 - 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 12
I wish this could have happened on the show *sighs* Good job, I really liked this story. ;)
Date: 02/18/2005 - 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 12
I loved the way it ended :-D Glad I've got to read it (the story).
Date: 02/15/2005 - 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 12
i loved it that was so good. i loved the ending and i love that spike got to live :) you did a great job and i hope to read more stories from you in the future.
Date: 02/15/2005 - 05:42 am Title: Chapter 12
Great end to a cool story.
Date: 02/14/2005 - 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 11
Arrrgh! And who has the shortest???
Date: 02/14/2005 - 01:54 am Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter. Please don't make us wait too long to find out who's wearing the amulet.
Date: 02/12/2005 - 12:56 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh man ... what a cliffhanger. Who gets the bloody short straw? {biting her nails}
Date: 02/11/2005 - 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 11
can't wait to see how it turns out....
Date: 02/11/2005 - 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 11
MORE!!!!! MORE!!!!! MORE!!!!! FAST!!!! FAST!!!! FAST!!!!
Date: 01/30/2005 - 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 10
Loved it. Sad at the begin, funny at the end.
Date: 01/29/2005 - 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 10
that was funny!
Date: 01/29/2005 - 02:34 am Title: Chapter 10
LOL! Love that last bit. You know there just all just envious. hehehe Love the new chapters!
Date: 01/28/2005 - 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 10
i loved it. i love how giles screamed down the stairs for them to keep quiet and i love how they got louder. this story is so cute i can't wait for more please update again soon.
Date: 01/28/2005 - 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 10
loved it
Date: 01/15/2005 - 02:07 am Title: Chapter 9
Now I really hope the end will change - Buffy can rescue Spike...
Date: 01/14/2005 - 12:42 am Title: Chapter 9
next chapter slayer brilliance!
Date: 01/13/2005 - 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 8
Have to say, I like the way that scene turned out much better than the original that aired. Love this story.
Date: 01/09/2005 - 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 8
thank you for the update
Date: 01/09/2005 - 10:57 am Title: Chapter 8
Just read the first 8 chapters to this story. I really lived it. Please update soon and often Looking foreard to the rest of the story.
Date: 01/09/2005 - 09:10 am Title: Chapter 8
Love the friend statement. Also, I liked how Buffy could sense him before Angel could do it.
Date: 01/09/2005 - 07:30 am Title: Chapter 8
I like this better as in the original series :-D
Date: 01/08/2005 - 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 8
poor angel he needs to go back to Cordy in LA!