Oooh I just read all 12 chapters so far and I love it. :-) One of my fave WIPs at the moment.. please do continue

GREAT CHAPTER!! THEY WERE SO CLOSE!! HOPEFULLY THEY COME TO THEIR SENSES IN THE NEXT CHAPTER.

I'm going to go ahead and post this as an addon to my previous review. I don't know if you want to include song lyrics for this story but if you do check out Angela Via's picture perfect I will try to post lyrics here, but don't know how much space I can use...Picture Perfect All of this time Guess I must have been blind Not to see you and me We're picture perfect Now baby we've been friends For such a long, long time We've been through lessons and we've been through cries But lately have you seen The way my tongue gets tied Can't hardly speak when I look into your eyes It's because of the way I'm feelin' It's somethin' I never dreamed And our love has a different meaning It took so long to reveal but now I know that Chorus: All of this time, guess I must have been blind Not to see you and me we're picture perfect I'll be yours, be mine We're picture perfect Forever picture perfect I showed some friends of mine My favorite photograph You know the one of you and me from way back And when I told them all That you were not my guy They couldn't see it, couldn't understand why Everyone thinks it's so romantic They say we're two of a kind And the more that I think about it The more that I realize what I've been missing Chorus My heart keeps tellin' me Make up your mind about whatcha mean You've been holding back for too long You know it makes good sense Best of lovers are the best of friends I guess we should have known all along Everyone thinks it's so romantic They say we're two of a kind And the more that I think about it The more that I realize what I've been missing Chorus 2x I'll be yours, be mine we're picture perfect Forever picture perfect Feel free to use the lyric that way you don't have to look for them and honestly that is all there is...you can download the song however if you want...

Almost on the way to see the truth, our Buffy. [I just hope when I come to read chapter 16 you'll have the next one out!]

*sigh* awesome. ... I'll read B/S/A too (prev. SlayerL/Vamp), but I like B/S better. And I don't like/read B/A. So grrrrr to that last line (thinking very hard on last line of ch. 15) Cordykitten

poor Buffy doesn't have a clue! She's looking for the forrest and missing the trees!

lol - Spike had it coming :) Now he has to babysit Nate for the date. Loved the first part with Nate speaking his first word, it was awesome. [I have to confess that I read the last sentense of Ch. 15 :)) ]

I liked that they spoke together again - and have some time together at the playground too. I decided now that I'll read this fic on this site. It's on the other one too (Ch. 15) but I have to read one ch. after another :))

okay I had to go back because i hadn't read this chap...great job btw...love the cordy/spike angst...and the fact that they were like a family at the park, was so cool! Totally missed buffy, but she's clueless...

LOve it!!!!! nice playout!!!! and the thought of Spike playing with Nate at the playgrounds made me go AAWWWW.......... cat wait for more!!!!!!

Damn. I know it's good for Buffy to have something to look forward to, but I really, really wish it was Spike making her look forward to a date. Sigh. Maybe it's the kick in the pants Spike needs to fight for Buffy's heart. I hope so!!! Of course, Buffy doesn't need any more angst at the moment, but I trust Spike can play doctor to her needs better than Angel can!!!! I'm really liking this story and looking forward to your next udpate!!!! :)

Yes, (to Beth review) - and Anya saw ´that very clearly Cordykitten