Date: 12/07/2004 - 09:50 am Title: Chapter 6
Loving this. I liked how you pictured Buffy's insecurities , and Spike's confusion; And doing naughty things in his car, Oh my.. they 're so falling deep with each other. It was beautifully hot .
Date: 12/06/2004 - 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 5
My Spuffy ♥ loved how he comforted her because she would left by her first lover. :) Looking forward for more … will answer your email with an email.
Date: 12/06/2004 - 05:07 am Title: Chapter 5
lol on the chap...awesome love scene!
Date: 12/05/2004 - 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 5
i am glad that he isnt going to leave her
Date: 12/05/2004 - 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 5
WOW! That was good to know that Spike wasn't going to be a dick and say it was only sex. How they're gonna make this work I'll leave up to you but I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 12/05/2004 - 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 5
love it, please continue
Date: 12/05/2004 - 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wonderful! I loved it all. The sex scene was great. It just keeps getting better and better
Date: 12/05/2004 - 10:19 am Title: Chapter 5
Great Chapter! Awesome
Date: 12/05/2004 - 09:17 am Title: Chapter 5
Excellent chapter. Very hot...and sweet.
Date: 12/04/2004 - 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 4
Awe, how they both think it her/his fault for the kissing .. so lovely! Can't wait for more kissing or more ... whatever or wherever the story will go.
Date: 12/04/2004 - 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
Poor Buffy - that was all a bit much with her father leaving ... glad Spike was there to speak with. And kiss ..mmm. I ♥ it.
Date: 12/03/2004 - 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 4
Love, love, LOVE this!!! Oh that was so incredibly sweet! I love sweet endearing Spike and innocent Buffy. More please!!!!
Date: 12/03/2004 - 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 4
loved it
Date: 12/03/2004 - 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 4
omg i love it so far and please keep going and update soon.
Date: 12/03/2004 - 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beth- thank you so much for all of your song suggestions. I've actually already got a song picked out for this fic, it will be towards the end, so we've got a while to go- but thank you so much for your suggestions! You (and so many others) have been a very loyal reviewer for all of my fics, so a big thank you is in order to everyone! So thanks again (and you never know when I might use one)
Date: 12/03/2004 - 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 4
I don't know if you intend to use any songs in this and hot for teacher was just a joke really, but on the up and up a song came out by darren hayes called insatiable and is probably the most provacative lyrics I have ever seen and would work for this story so I will post them and you can use them if you like: the only other song that even compares in my eyes at least to this is Addicted by Enrique Inglesias and Wicked Games by Chris Issacs. Just in case you wanted to check them out as well. thought I'd offer some musical assistance When moonlight crawls along the street Chasing away the summer heat Footsteps outside somewhere below The world revolves I let it go We build our church above this street We practice love between these sheets The candy sweetness scent of you It bathes my skin I'm stained by you And all I have to do is hold you There's a racing in my heart I am barely touching you [Chorus] Turn the lights down low Take it off Let me show My love for you Insatiable Turn me on Never stop Wanna taste every drop My love for you Insatiable The moonlight plays upon your skin A kiss that lingers takes me in I fall asleep inside of you There are no words There's only truth Breathe in Breathe out There is no sound We move together up and down We levitate our bodies soar Our feet don't even touch the floor And nobody knows you like I do The world doesn't understand But I grow stronger in your hands [Chorus] Turn the lights down low Take it off Let me show My love for you Insatiable Turn me on Never stop Wanna taste every drop My love for you Insatiable Turn the lights down low Take it off Let me show My love for you Insatiable Turn me on Never stop Wanna taste every drop My love for you Insatiable We never sleep we're always holdin' hands Kissin' for hours talkin' makin' plans I feel like a better man Just being in the same room We never sleep there's just so much to do Too much to say Can't close my eyes when I'm with you Insatiable the way I'm loving you [Chorus] Turn the lights down low Take it off Let me show My love for you Insatiable Turn me on Never stop Wanna taste every drop My love for you Insatiable Turn the lights down low Take it off Let me show My love for you Insatiable Turn me on Never stop Wanna taste every drop My love for you Insatiable
Date: 12/03/2004 - 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
**AUTHOR'S NOTE** For some reason I can't respond to reviews. Anyway, I don't think I wrote Buffy as 16 (I could be wrong), but she was always meant to be 17 (she'll be turning 18 in the middle of her senior year). I think there is another teacher/student WIP, although I'm not sure, in which Buffy is 16. Thank you for reviewing, as always!
Date: 12/03/2004 - 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
I like how they both have reservations and are well aware of how delicate (and forbidden) their situation is. I have a quesion, though--it's been mentioned that Buffy's 16, but that she's in her senior year. I'm a bit confused--maybe things don't work the same in California as they do in Canada? She'd be 18 in her senior year... Wonderful chapter, though. Very intimate :)
Date: 12/03/2004 - 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 4
Their sexual attraction is pictured in a lovely way , and their kiss was absolutely hot ! !
Date: 12/03/2004 - 11:01 am Title: Chapter 4
O.K. I shouldn't even read this stuff... but I just love your work and I knew it would be good. There is just something very wrong about me thinking this is hot... I'm a non-practicing high school teacher. But it is Buffy and Spike and it's not real, so I shouldn't freak myself out too much about it. Sarah Michelle Gellar and James Marsters are like 25 and 40. See, completely guilt free now. :) Keep this up... it's really good.
Date: 12/03/2004 - 08:31 am Title: Chapter 4
steamy... as with all your stories im totally addicted :)
Date: 12/02/2004 - 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
I look forward to a long journey
Date: 12/02/2004 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good one - I just hope he doesn't turn out engaged or so :)
Date: 12/02/2004 - 06:19 am Title: Chapter 3
terrific chapter...can't wait for the smut to commence
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