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Reviewer: bloodshedbaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2005 - 01:09 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

I'm right here with ya*nods* Oh yes. I've missed this fic! I loved the way buffy took out Angelus and hope she does the same to Riley. But more than anything, I'd love for them to get back!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2005 - 12:28 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

yay i updated im so happy. i love this story and loved reading this chapter. im som happy that she killed angelus good on her. omg i really hope that riley doesnt hurt spike and that they get out safely. i personally dont mind it being elizabeth and william i know that spike and buffy are still in there. i cant wait to read more. please update as soon as u can, im dying to read wat happens next thanx

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2005 - 11:47 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Well, I have to say way to go Buffy/Elizabeth. It's nice to know that she she got fed up enough with being all weak that the heroine in her just had to come out. And I like how much more they sound like our Spike and Buffy now that they're all fighty again. Terribly impressive how you've made the dialogue convey so much about which personality is dominant with the little variations. Applause to some serious editing! Absolutely wonderful. Please, update soon!

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2005 - 11:46 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

It was great to see this update today. Really wonderful chapter. Although I wish the last part of it had been "and then Riley fired the pistol. As with many pistols of the time, it backfired and it this case it blew his entire face off". Yea well... I can have my opinion. I like the surge of pure Buffy that came out in Elizabeth's character. I hope Real Life shows you some mercy. Don't worry about losing readers. You're a wonderful author and you have a significant following of deeply disturbed individuals. We'll still be here when you're ready.

Reviewer: demonica mills Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2005 - 11:18 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

LMAO "we can taunt the dying man later" That's brilliant. you rule.

Reviewer: NEO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2005 - 10:52 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

I am still reading, and i cant wait for more!!!

Reviewer: ZoeGrace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2005 - 10:40 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

it's great...just come on and get them back to regular sunnydale...the reaction shots are always the best.

Reviewer: BloodThirstyGoddess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2005 - 10:29 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

That was a great chapter. It was good to see that Elizabeth was able to cue into some of Buffy's skills. I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2005 - 10:23 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

love it love it love it!!! excellent chapter!! i almost jumped up and down when elizabeth killed angelus!!! OMG!! what's going to happen next with riley!! that was so evil of you!! please please i know you're a busy gal but pleeeease update soon...don't leave us hanging too long...thanx!!

Reviewer: Allison Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2005 - 10:01 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

I'm glad Elizabeth killed Angelus and freed William- that was awesome. I can't wait to see what happens now that Finn is with them, aiming a gun at them. Plus, hopefully the Scoobies can work out a way to bring Buffy and Spike back to their rightful place in the space-time continuum:)

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2005 - 10:00 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

good update

Reviewer: Lil Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2005 - 07:36 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

Great! Update soon!!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2005 - 02:36 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

awww thats so sad that they were found and that she was taken away from him. i cant believe that riley is such an ass. i love this story and am so happy that u updated. i really hope that nothing happens to buffy and that spike and her get back together. also i wonder wat riley and angelus's plan is. im sorry im just responding now i left for awhile and had no internet so i could read. please update as soon as u can, i love this story and cant wait to see wat happens next thanx

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2005 - 05:05 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

Sounds like William and Elizabeth are full time now. I sure hope the Scoobies bring them back soon - or Spike's sure to be no more - and since Adm. Riley doesn't love her and thinks she's all tainted and everything - I'm think he might give her over to the crew or to Angelus and that just can't happen so Hurry Up Scoobs - get them outta there. more please.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 07:03 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

Anya's disparaging remarks about Willow turning Spike and Buffy inside out or just retrieving their toes had me laughing. Angelus and Riley in cahoots, I think Riley may not be as stalwart as he appears. How will you get Buffy and Spike back together? You're doing an excellent job mixing humor in with the action.

Reviewer: lynn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 07:39 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

I wonder if it will be buffy and spike or william and elizabeth who are brought back. hmmm... still a great read

Reviewer: rockerbaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2005 - 10:38 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

Always happy to see updates on your stories. Waiting between updates is better than no updates at all. I understand how hellish RL can be ... kids, work, school, karate, etc etc etc until you feel like screaming and pulling your hair out... yeah. Hope things calm down for ya for sanity sake. :-)

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2005 - 03:22 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

Thanks for the update. I hope that things turn out well for Buffy/Spike or William/Elizabeth. Update when you can. I really like this story.

Reviewer: Spikes Eternal Lover Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2005 - 02:04 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

indeed, I am readin, and i do

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2005 - 12:50 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

Reading and enjoying! Looking forward to seeing how you resolve this.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2005 - 10:28 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

When you've the next part ready, I read. No worries. And: I don't flame ye ;-)
Impressiv - there's something going on between Angel and Riley. The good white hat Riley is not so white.. wonder what bargain he has with Angel. Too bad they got caught. I'll be patiently watiing for more!

Reviewer: spuffy404 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2005 - 10:01 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

Thanks for the update. I love where this story is going, keep it up.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2005 - 09:47 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

You do whatever you can do to update. No pressure. I'll read it still even if you update a month or two from now. I'm loving the whole thing. Great chapter. Love how Buffy came out for just a minute there.

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2005 - 07:42 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

Great update. And can I say how much I HATE evil Riley? Damn Riley. Poor Spike. However are you going to fix this?

Reviewer: Alison Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2005 - 05:15 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

This is really good, and you have written really funny.........that aside...................updates please?

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