

Date: 09/28/2005 - 10:45 am Title: Chapter 2
I am enjoying this story, but the spelling errors are KILLING IT! If the text was corrected and cleaned up a little, (there are sections that are a little confusing as far as the flow of events). Seriously, good story, wonderful plot. Just please please please have someone correct the spelling!
Date: 01/03/2005 - 12:33 am Title: Chapter 5
can't wait for the spuffiness to commence!
Date: 01/03/2005 - 12:31 am Title: Chapter 4
if you want a beta email me...I can turn them around within two to three hours of when I see it and guarantee that it wilil not take more than 24...I have a windows 2002 and would be happy to correct previous chapters as well...I love how you aer writing this and can't wait to see how the worlds merge.
Author's Response: Wow, someone actually wants to be my Beta! Awsome! I can spell, but not that great, and my computer is bad, so it wont allow corrections sometimes. I wrote the 1st few chaptors when I was younger, and broke away at it with time. I usually don't look for Typo's and I think a Beta would help me GREATLY! Thanks so much!!!
Date: 01/03/2005 - 12:26 am Title: Chapter 3
love it and can't wait to see if the scoobies can see her!
Date: 01/02/2005 - 07:21 pm Title: Chapter6
omg that was so good. i love this story you keep me guessing all the time. i hope this plan that spike has for making her a vampire works i can't wait to read more. please update soon.
Date: 01/02/2005 - 04:58 pm Title: Chapter6
I keep my fingers crossed that it will work!
Date: 01/02/2005 - 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 5
Awe, that was cute: "We have each other..."
Date: 01/02/2005 - 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 4
I loved this chapter too. It was beautiful written (with some of your special spellings ;-) ) But I loved it anyway!
Date: 01/02/2005 - 02:03 am Title: Chapter 2
good god learn how to use spell check!!
Author's Response: I would, but my computer is junk, so I decided i would spell check when I am finished. Alright? I am almost done.
Date: 01/02/2005 - 12:58 am Title: Chapter6
i just read the updates and i am loving them so much keep up the great work and i hope that you do a sequel to this story
Date: 01/02/2005 - 12:15 am Title: Chapter6
Woo hoo! More chapters to read! :) Great job ...can't wait to read more...
Date: 01/01/2005 - 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
i really like it. i hope that Buffy will soon realize that she loves spike and that they can end the dream world. please update soon.
Date: 01/01/2005 - 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 3
I would say worth to read on!
Date: 01/01/2005 - 10:06 am Title: Chapter 2
It's an interesting story. Like the Spuffy (of course) My only complaint is that you really, really need to use spell check, or get a beta. Otherwise good job.
Date: 12/31/2004 - 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
Cool story, but it's spelled Satan.
Date: 12/31/2004 - 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 2
Very interesting story, keep updating!
Date: 12/31/2004 - 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
maybe Joyce can be their angel/guide out of their dreams!
Date: 12/31/2004 - 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
awesome job and love the idea of incorperating Christianity into it and having it be God instead of PTB...
Date: 12/31/2004 - 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
definitely liking it so far and i cant wait to see what else happens
Date: 12/31/2004 - 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
More please! It's such an interesting concept and I really like the way you are writing it. I love how you said "Spuffy went patrolling and then Spuffy went to bed." Clever. I also like how happy he was when the 'real' buffy punched him. that was great. Good job!
Date: 12/31/2004 - 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great start of a story. Please continue to update soon and often. Hopefully Buffy will become flesh and blood again so she and spike can be happy together. looking foread to the lnext chapters.