Date: 01/17/2005 - 12:37 pm Title: Regaining Confidence
I'm really enjoying this story, can't wait for the next update!! I love to see a Buffy who needs Spike to rely on and actually has her friend's support for a change...
Date: 01/17/2005 - 12:33 pm Title: Whispers and Screams
just started reading it and i like it so far :D
Date: 01/17/2005 - 12:06 pm Title: Regaining Confidence
Hehehe...the two of them are so cute. I love their non-angsty banter in this story, especially this last chapter. I have a big smile on my face right now. :) :) This is such a great story idea - giving Buffy a physical disability that really challenges her as a person and slayer. Of course I love the fact that Spike is the one who shows her that doesn't mean she still isn't Buffy or the slayer. More soon!!
Date: 01/17/2005 - 11:15 am Title: Regaining Confidence
I like it! that was cute withthe banter very good want more ....soon!
Date: 01/17/2005 - 11:10 am Title: Regaining Confidence
Hehe, love Buffy teasing Spike about the spell from SB - very cute and funny. Can't wait for more!
Date: 01/16/2005 - 05:55 am Title: Competition
cant wait to see how the whole story will develop.
Date: 01/16/2005 - 01:20 am Title: Competition
loving it so much...anything that involves Riley bashing is of the good!
Date: 01/15/2005 - 10:42 pm Title: Competition
Looks like the beginning of some Spuffiness. Yay!
Date: 01/15/2005 - 09:47 pm Title: Competition
Wonderful attention paid to the 3-way conversation between Giles, Spike, and Riley at the end. You really did a great job of describing the trouble Buffy was having understanding Giles and Riley's end of the conversation. I love the small smiles Spike gives Buffy now. Now that they don't have nasty barbs flying back and forth, and now that Buffy has to watch his face to understand him, I think it will be a lot easier for them to develop feelings for one another. Spike's face is the most expressive face I've ever seen. If Buffy can see love on anyone's face, it will be Spike's. Great chapter again Ashlee!
Date: 01/15/2005 - 07:02 pm Title: Competition
Woohoo!! :-) Thank you so much for somewhat getting rid of Riley. I always hated his character. It's also nice to see Buffy siding with Spike. More please!
Date: 01/15/2005 - 06:37 pm Title: Competition
Great chapter! Stupid Riley......Will be patiently waiting for more. ;)
Date: 01/15/2005 - 05:50 pm Title: Competition
Hey Ashlee, this story is going really well! Keep up the good work...it was good to have this to read to ride out my frustration with Live Journal!!
Date: 01/15/2005 - 05:49 pm Title: Competition
And because of that connection .. Buffy was amazed that she was able to look into his eyes and understand him instead of studying his lips. I have hope too :-D
I don’t know what did cause the deafness – I think (hope) there’s a greater meaning behind it all
Date: 01/15/2005 - 05:39 pm Title: Competition
this story keeps getting better and better with ever update i am loving it so much great job!
Date: 01/15/2005 - 05:30 pm Title: Competition
I think it is sooo cool how she can look into his eyes and know what he is saying... very nice!! I can't wait to see how the patrol goes!! And your welcome for reviewing! You have some awesome stories and deserve to know it... every chapter. *grins*
Date: 01/15/2005 - 05:20 pm Title: Competition
Squee! Did I read a word bitey in the reviews? I love you. *smooches* I love the fic. I too invisioned (if that even is a word outside my head) Spike and maybe Giles being the ones who wouldn't treat Buffy as glass if something happened to her. I love this fic.
Date: 01/15/2005 - 02:31 pm Title: Competition
I hate Riley...so feel free to bring on the riley bashing! *l* This is a really interesting story...a nd I love how fast you update...THANKYOU!
Date: 01/15/2005 - 01:35 pm Title: Competition
Good chapter. Riley was as insufferable as I imagined he'd be. I'm glad Buffy stood up to him. I was worried for a minute that she was gonna turn all submisive and defer to him. Looking forward to more
Date: 01/15/2005 - 12:26 pm Title: Competition
Seriously liking this fic!! Just love helpful Spike!! This fic going to be bitey, per chance? *looks hopeful*
Author's Response: Yep, I've got one planned for the distant future. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/15/2005 - 11:29 am Title: Competition
that was such a great chapter, i like the communication you've got going between buffy and spike, keep it up. and please hurry and update again soon :)
Date: 01/15/2005 - 11:24 am Title: Competition
Hey - first time reviewing for this story (shame on me!) Anyway, it's going great, I love the idea and am definitely looking forward to this story's progression. And I can't wait to get started on your other colab story with Alion!
Date: 01/15/2005 - 11:24 am Title: Competition
Hey - first time reviewing for this story (shame on me!) Anyway, it's going great, I love the idea and am definitely looking forward to this story's progression. And I can't wait to get started on your other colab story with Alion!
Date: 01/15/2005 - 11:10 am Title: Competition
Awesome fic! Loved this chapter!
Date: 01/15/2005 - 11:04 am Title: Pretending
aww. . . i really like the fact that Buffy can communicate with Spike so easily. Can't wait to see more!
Date: 01/14/2005 - 09:59 am Title: Pretending
Ashlee, you have done a fantastic job with this chapter. The connection between S and B was wonderfully anticipated. How he came in and took control, calming her fears...and the way you portrayed her fears. Well done. Im looking forward to a new chapter.
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