

Date: 09/20/2005 - 12:24 am Title: Chp 10 PlayTime
I'd keep William for a while to play too lol. What a nice way to spend the day. It's so funny that he thinks she's a whore. He's adorable.

Date: 09/20/2005 - 12:06 am Title: Chp 9 Down the Rabbit Hole
Naughty, naughty Buffy lol. Can't blame her though. Fun chapter. You writer a great William. Sorry it took me so long to review. But you know how much my life sucks right now, so I hope you forgive me.

Date: 09/19/2005 - 02:45 am Title: Chp 12 Welcome to Sunnydale
good update

Date: 09/18/2005 - 11:19 pm Title: Chp 12 Welcome to Sunnydale
Now this gic is just steamy and yet funny I really dig it! 4 Stars!!!! PLEASE ADD MORE SOON!!!!!!

Date: 09/18/2005 - 05:31 pm Title: Chp 12 Welcome to Sunnydale
Oh! The ending is foreshadowing sexy things, yes? LOL Only jesting... Unless you want to surprise us! This chapter was very cute and had a lot of funny lines, so great job!:)

Date: 09/18/2005 - 02:34 pm Title: Chp 12 Welcome to Sunnydale
great story! stupid me had passed Strip Snap by for a long time. it did not think it would be too interesting. hence the stupid me part. can't wait for william to regain his memories (hopefully not before lots more smut) . yes my mind stays in the spuffy gutter.

Date: 09/18/2005 - 02:28 pm Title: Chp 12 Welcome to Sunnydale
Lovely update.

Date: 09/18/2005 - 02:06 pm Title: Chp 12 Welcome to Sunnydale
Cute... love William... lol

Date: 09/18/2005 - 01:14 pm Title: Chp 12 Welcome to Sunnydale
;-) And here I wondered how good Buffy would drive :) Were you supposed to hit that metal sign as we came into town? But if Buffy hit the sign I think of she only followed a dear tradition ;-) Yeah - it was the sign. William's first meeting with the rest of the Scoobies? Fun :)

Date: 08/26/2005 - 02:47 pm Title: Chp 11 Monsters and Demons?
William is fun to read! And Buffy not knowing how to explain something. But ow! Cliffhanger! A monster?.... Looking forward to read on!
Author's Response: Thank you for review Glad you’re enjoying the story. I love William, too.

Date: 08/26/2005 - 02:25 pm Title: Chp 11 Monsters and Demons?
Aieeeee! You stopped! Noooo. And, also, I love William.

Date: 08/25/2005 - 10:32 pm Title: Chp 11 Monsters and Demons?
good update

Date: 08/25/2005 - 10:23 pm Title: Chp 11 Monsters and Demons?
I just started reading this story and I'm really enjoying it. It's different from anything I've read and I love Buffy/William interactions. I think he's adorable. Great job and can't wait for more!

Date: 08/25/2005 - 08:06 pm Title: Chp 11 Monsters and Demons?
Very much enjoyed...boat sex....poor Spike...what's he going to think when he comes back?

Date: 08/25/2005 - 08:04 pm Title: Chp 11 Monsters and Demons?
Great chapter. You write William very well. He has the right blend of intelligence and naivete.

Date: 08/25/2005 - 06:44 pm Title: Chp 11 Monsters and Demons?
Hee! Love this story! Curious to see where the lake demon plot is heading...

Date: 08/25/2005 - 05:42 pm Title: Chp 11 Monsters and Demons?
I loved it! William is indeed an interesting guy, especially because he's just so confused about things we find normal today. Plus he's just plain delightful:) I wonder what will happen with the demon...
Author's Response: Thank you for review. So glad you agree with me about William. Watch out for next episode.

Date: 07/29/2005 - 03:06 am Title: Chp 10 PlayTime
Great chapter, can't wait for the next.

Date: 07/28/2005 - 02:16 pm Title: Chp 10 PlayTime
Awe - thank you - you're welcome! Loved it :) The victorian Vamp is fun. Now I'm looking forward to how he'll take the news where he is (Year, place)

Date: 07/27/2005 - 12:15 pm Title: Chp 10 PlayTime
I'm thinking after a marathon sex run, and finding out he's a vamp, discovering it's not 1880 isn't gonna be so hard to swallow. Gotta luv that vamp constitution, sounds like William was a natural before Spike every made the scene. EXCELLENT and VERY HOT CHAP. more please. (But he's really gotta stop calling her Miss Summers after that sexathon!) LOVE IT.

Date: 07/27/2005 - 07:43 am Title: Chp 10 PlayTime
Well, at least they had a good amount of fun before a hellish discussion is going to take place LOL Poor William- he has to be so confused!

Date: 07/26/2005 - 11:02 pm Title: Chp 10 PlayTime
great update

Date: 07/26/2005 - 08:53 pm Title: Chp 10 PlayTime
Aww. Poor William, I feel sorry for Buffy having to tell him what year it is. Update soon!

Date: 07/26/2005 - 07:30 pm Title: Chp 10 PlayTime
Mega mega yummmm, thank you!

Date: 07/17/2005 - 10:45 am Title: Chp 6 All This Time
What an amazing chapter. This should have been in Season Five. No question.