
Date: 02/02/2005 - 11:31 am Title: Broken
I like your story. It is great that Spike is not giving in to Buffy so easily. Please update when you can.
Date: 01/30/2005 - 03:31 pm Title: Broken
I only hope Spike's plan will work this time :-D
Date: 01/29/2005 - 06:13 pm Title: Broken
Spike with a plan? I love it!
Date: 01/29/2005 - 05:01 pm Title: Broken
If you need a beta...let me know I do it for other authors on and off this site...lol on the chap!
Date: 01/29/2005 - 04:47 pm Title: Broken
great so far
Date: 01/28/2005 - 02:57 pm Title: Prologue
oh - looking out for that update :-)
Date: 01/28/2005 - 01:09 am Title: Prologue
leaves you hanging though which is what a prologue is meant to do...Beth
Date: 01/27/2005 - 07:07 pm Title: Prologue
I definitely need more. It has the potential for a great story, I just need more to get a handle on it! You've sparked my interest :)
Date: 01/27/2005 - 04:16 am Title: Prologue
I will work on that and revise the prologue. Thanks for pointing that out to me.
Date: 01/27/2005 - 02:56 am Title: Prologue
kinda switching widly from past to present tense which alwasy seems to peeve me off... otherwise, i really like where this potentially rolling to :)