poignant chapter!

i feel so bad for buffy. i know how she feels i lost two people i loved very much and it is very hard to deal with it when it happends so fast. i hope that she will be ok and that spike will conitnue to take care of her. great chapter as well.

Author's Response: Yeah, I know how much it hurts when you lose someone you love. I based Buffy's fear of hospitals on my own fear. I had to watch someone die in a hospital when I was younger and since then I can hardly set foot in one. It's pretty much the same experience that Buffy had on the show, so I felt that I should put that in there. Thanks for reading and I hope you like my ending=)

*sniffle* sad but sweet

oh, porr Buffy, that was so sad... :( but i loved the chappy! please keep sending :)

love the B/F bonding!!

loved it!!! please keep sending! ;)

can't wait to see what happens!

poor Buffy... is she gonna call Spike and he's gonna take care of her? :P lol [batting eye lashes].

he he, i didn't take you long :P lol loved the story until now! I'm gonna keep reading! ;)

that's so sad. I hope Buffy's father makes it out of this one. keep up the great work.

In case you need another song: there's a really old Journey song that is so good for this story... The song's called Don't stop Believin' so I guess you could take artistic license and use fit it in. just an idea *grin* here are the rest of the lyrics; Just a small town girl Living in a lonely world She took the midnight train going anywhere Just a city boy Born and raised in South Detroit He took the midnight train going anywhere A singer in a smoky room A smell of wine and cheap perfume For a smile they can share the night It goes on and on and on and on CHORUS: Strangers, waiting, up and down the boulevard Their shadows searching in the night Streetlight people, living just to find emotion Hiding somewhere in the night Working hard to get my fill Everybody wants a thrill Paying anything to roll the dice Just one more time Some will win, some will lose Some were born to sing the blues h the movie never ends It goes on and on and on and on I am an 80's kid; born and bred and was raised on Journey, and so when I read the summary of your story I immediately thought of this song and just had to let you know! Even if you don't use it! CHORUS Don't stop believing Hold on to that feeling Streetlight people

Author's Response: I love 80's music myself and I do know the song. I think it could work with the story, but I already have another song planned that I will put at the end. As for my other story, I really didn't manage any songs in that one. I think I wrote that before I was ever interested in putting songs in the fictions, so I couldn't get one to fit in there. Thanks for the song lyrics anyway and I appreciate all of your reviews=)

What a sweet...and funny...chapter. I really enjoyed it. LMAO @ Buffy stalling Angel.

that was really funny. i love faith being caught by buffy. i expected the guy to be wood i was surprised when it was gunn. i like how hank asked spike to take care of buffy that was sad but i'm glad that she won't be alone when he's gone.